Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionOctober 24, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-29299Evaluation of Sustainability of Mycorrhizal Industry Development in Fujian Province-Based on a Combination of CRITIC Empowerment Method and Cloud ModelPLOS ONE Dear Dr. li, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 19 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The paper intends to investigate application of CRITIC method and cloud model for evaluation of the sustainability of mycorrhizal industry development. Presented methodology has potential in decision making processes. Hence, investigation of this topic is certainly of interest to the research community. The strengths of this paper are: Relevant topic; Flow of the paper; and Explanation of the methods. However, the author(s) need(s) to consider the following points as limitation or further scope for refining the paper: - I suggest to the authors to clearly summarize what specific advantages the approach brings. - Some old references can easily be removed. - Literature review should be presented in a better way. You should discuss application of various objective and subjective methods in MCDM and supplier selection problem. You should update your literature review with a papers published in last two-three years, and remove some older references. Some new references with application of CRITIC method are missing. I suggest authors to discuss the following papers in the revised manuscript: Mukhametzyanov, I. (2021). Specific character of objective methods for determining weights of criteria in MCDM problems: Entropy, CRITIC and SD. Decision Making: Applications in Management and Engineering, 4(2), 76-105.; - Add future scope and limitations of the model. Reviewer #2: Dear editor, Thank you for sending me for review the paper “Evaluation of Sustainability of Mycorrhizal Industry Development in Fujian Province-Based on a Combination of CRITIC Empowerment Method and Cloud Model”. This paper intends to investigate extension of CRITIC method. Presented methodology has potential in decision making process and we can give support to the authors for investigation this topic. However, the author(s) need to consider the following points as limitation or further scope for refining the paper: - Introduction should be clearly stated research questions and targets first. Then answer several questions: Why is the topic important (or why do you study on it)? What are the research questions? What are your contributions? Why is to propose this particular methods? The last two questions are answered in some parts in the Introduction section. But, the answer is not presented in a proper way. You should provide more information in this regard. - Need to highlight the novelty of study in the introduction. - I suggest authors to clearly summarize what specific advantages brings your approach. Enrich your Introduction section with more explanation: Why do you present this approach? Why you use CRITIC method for criteria weighting and not the other objective methods like Entropy, FANMA or LOPCOW methods? - Why not implementation of subjective methods? Discuss more subjective methods for determining criteria weights like FUCOM, BWM, LBWA and DIBR methods. - I must stress that there are numerous limitations of CRITIC method that authors should have on their minds. For example, if only one value in decision matrix is above/below the other values for 20-30% (within the same criteria) leads drastically to increasing criteria weight of that criteria. That limitation is presented in almost all objective methods. In my opinion this facts should not be neglected. So, why you have used objective methodology for determining weights? - Remove lumped references. All references cited in the text should be explained and discussed in the text. Remove some old references published before 2017-2018. - Literature review should be presented in a better way. You should discuss application of various objective and subjective methods in MCDM and supplier selection problem. You should update your literature review with a papers published in last two-three years, and remove old references. I suggest authros to discuss the following papers in the revised manuscript: Stojanović, I., & Puška, A. (2021). Logistics Performances of Gulf Cooperation Council’s Countries in Global Supply Chains. Decision Making: Applications in Management and Engineering, 4(1), 174-193.; Mukhametzyanov, I. (2021). Specific character of objective methods for determining weights of criteria in MCDM problems: Entropy, CRITIC and SD. Decision Making: Applications in Management and Engineering, 4(2), 76-105.; Badi, I., L. J. Muhammad, Mansir Abubakar, & Mahmut Bakır. (2022). Measuring Sustainability Performance Indicators Using FUCOM-MARCOS Methods. Operational Research in Engineering Sciences: Theory and Applications, 5(2), 99-116.; Alosta, A., Elmansuri, O., & Badi, I. (2021). Resolving a location selection problem by means of an integrated AHP-RAFSI approach. Reports in Mechanical Engineering, 2(1), 135-142.; Pamucar, D., Žižović, M., & Đuričić, D. (2022). Modification of the CRITIC method using fuzzy rough numbers. Decision Making: Applications in Management and Engineering, 5(2), 362-371. https://doi.org/10.31181/dmame0316102022p - Add more deep calculations in case study section. - The problem on which this present method is applied has significant social and managerial implications. How the method can address those implications need to be included. - Conclusion- Add future scope. Also, how the proposed method can be applicable to other real life problems need to be mentioned. Add limitations of proposed model. Do not use bullets or numerations in this section. I will review revised paper with my pleasure. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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Evaluation of Sustainability of Mycorrhizal Industry Development in Fujian Province-Based on a Combination of CRITIC Empowerment Method and Cloud Model PONE-D-22-29299R1 Dear Dr. li, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Dragan Pamucar Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: The authors have addressed the point of my concern. I am happy with their corrections. Hence, I would like to recommend this manuscript to be published. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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PONE-D-22-29299R1 Evaluation of Sustainability of Mycorrhizal Industry Development in Fujian Province-Based on a Combination of CRITIC Empowerment Method and Cloud Model Dear Dr. Li: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Dragan Pamucar Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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