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Original SubmissionSeptember 28, 2022
Decision Letter - Iddya Karunasagar, Editor

PONE-D-22-26924Reduction strategies for inpatient oral third-generation cephalosporins at a cancer center: an interrupted time-series analysisPLOS ONE

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Reviewer #1: Dear authors,

This is a good study about AMS outcomes especially in a setting where antimicrobial agents are often used out of fear to prevent and treat infections.

It would be useful to reduce the number of times the phases of the study are repeated in the result section.

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Revision 1

Our point-by-point responses to the comments and suggestions by Reviewer 1 are listed below.

We thank the reviewer for reviewing our manuscript and for the insightful comment that has helped us to significantly improve our manuscript. Although not an issue pointed out by the reviewer, we found an error in the description of the monthly DOT for macrolides in Phases 3 to 4 and revised the relevant passages, but it did not affect the main subject. Please note that our changes in the manuscript are highlighted in yellow.

Comment:

It would be useful to reduce the number of times the phases of the study are repeated in the result section.

Response:

We thank the reviewer for this comment. We removed statistically insignificant findings from the "results section" that duplicated those in the "figure legends" section as follows (Results, Page 10-20).

There were no significant changes in trends and levels from Phases 2 to 3 or from Phases 3 to 4. (Page 10, Lines: 229–230)

Each dot refers to the third-generation cephalosporins (3GCs) per 100 patients each month, and the slope is based on the linear regression in the four phases: Phase 1 (pre-intervention period from April 1, 2017, to May 31, 2019); Phase 2 (review of clinical pathways from June 1, 2019, to March 31, 2020); Phase 3 (establishing an infectious disease (ID) consultation service and implementing the antimicrobial stewardship program (ASP) from April 1, 2020, to June 30, 2021); Phase 4 (educational lecture and pop-up displays for oral antimicrobials from July 1, 2021, to March 31, 2022). (Fig 1, Page 11, Lines: 233–239)

There were no significant changes in trends and levels for cephalexin from Phases 1 to 2 or from Phases 2 to 3. The trend in the monthly DOT of cephalexin did not change from Phases 3 to 4, but the level increased (coefficients: 0.42; 95% CI: 0.03 to 0.81, p = 0.04; Fig. 2). (Page 11, Lines: 243–246)

There were no significant changes in the trend and level of the monthly DOT of amoxicillin and amoxicillin-clavulanate from Phases 1 to 2 (Fig. 3). The trend in the monthly DOT of amoxicillin and amoxicillin-clavulanate increased from Phases 2 to 3 (coefficients: 0.26; 95% CI: 0.07 to 0.45, p = 0.01) and decreased from Phases 3 to 4 (coefficients: -0.67; 95% CI: -0.89 to -0.45, p < 0.001), while the level did not change. (Page 11, Lines: 247–251)

The trend and level of the monthly DOT of sulfamethoxazole-trimethoprim did not change significantly from Phases 1 to 2 or Phases 2 to 3 (Fig. 4). However, the trend in the monthly DOT of sulfamethoxazole-trimethoprim increased from Phases 3 to 4 (coefficients: 0.26; coefficient: 0.38; 95% CI: 0.07 to 0.70, p = 0.02), while the level did not change. (Page 11, Lines: 252–255)

Each dot refers to cefalexin per 100 patients in each month, and the slope is based on the linear regression in the four phases: Phase 1 (pre-intervention period from April 1, 2017, to May 31, 2019); Phase 2 (review of clinical pathways from June 1, 2019, to March 31, 2020); Phase 3 (establishing an ID consultation service and implementing the ASP from April 1, 2020, to June 30, 2021); and Phase 4 (educational lecture and pop-up displays for oral antimicrobials from July 1, 2021, to March 31, 2022). (Fig 2, Page 12, Lines: 258–263)

Each dot refers to the amoxicillin and amoxicillin-clavulanate per 100 patients each month, and the slope is based on the linear regression in the four phases: Phase 1 (pre-intervention period from April 1, 2017, to May 31, 2019); Phase 2 (review of clinical pathways from June 1, 2019, to March 31, 2020); Phase 3 (establishing an ID consultation service and implementing the ASP from April 1, 2020, to June 30, 2021); and Phase 4 (educational lecture and pop-up displays for oral antimicrobials from July 1, 2021, to March 31, 2022). (Fig 3, Page 12, Lines: 266–272)

Each dot refers to the sulfamethoxazole-trimethoprim per 100 patients each month, and the slope is based on the linear regression in the four phases: Phase 1 (pre-intervention period from April 1, 2017, to May 31, 2019); Phase 2 (review of clinical pathways from June 1, 2019, to March 31, 2020); Phase 3 (establishing an ID consultation service and implementing the ASP from April 1, 2020, to June 30, 2021); and Phase 4 (educational lecture and pop-up displays for oral antimicrobials from July 1, 2021, to March 31, 2022). (Fig 4, Page 12, Lines: 275–281)

The trend and level of the monthly DOT of all three quinolones (moxifloxacin, ciprofloxacin, and levofloxacin) did not change significantly during the study period (Fig. 5). (Page 13, Lines: 284–285)

The trend in the monthly DOT of the three macrolides (erythromycin, azithromycin, and clarithromycin) decreased from Phases 1 to 2 (coefficients: -0.13; 95% CI: -0.22 to -0.04, p < 0.01), but the level did not change (Fig. 6). The trend in the monthly DOT of macrolides did not change from Phases 2 to 3 or from Phases 3 to 4, but the level decreased (coefficient: -0.96; 95% CI: -1.62 to -0.30, p < 0.01) and increased (coefficients: 0.92; 95% CI: 0.28 to 1.57, p < 0.01), respectively. (Page 13, Lines: 286–291)

Each dot refers to the quinolones per 100 patients in each month, and the slope is based on the linear regression in the four phases: Phase 1 (pre-intervention period from April 1, 2017, to May 31, 2019); Phase 2 (review of clinical pathways from June 1, 2019, to March 31, 2020); Phase 3 (establishing an ID consultation service and implementing the ASP from April 1, 2020, to June 30, 2021); and Phase 4 (educational lecture and pop-up displays for oral antimicrobials from July 1, 2021, to March 31, 2022). (Fig 5, Page 13, Lines: 294–299)

Each dot refers to the macrolides per 100 patients each month, and the slope is based on the linear regression in the four phases: Phase 1 (pre-intervention period from April 1, 2017, to May 31, 2019); Phase 2 (review of clinical pathways from June 1, 2019, to March 31, 2020); Phase 3 (establishing an ID consultation service and implementing the ASP from April 1, 2020, to June 30, 2021); and Phase 4 (educational lecture and pop-up displays for oral antimicrobials from July 1, 2021, to March 31, 2022). (Fig 6, Pages 13–14, Lines: 302–307)

The trend and level of the monthly incidence of ESBL-producing Enterobacteriaceae, PRSP, resistant H. influenzae and CDI did not change significantly during the study period (Figs. 7–10). The trend in the monthly incidence of methicillin-resistant Staphylococcus aureus (MRSA) increased during the study period (coefficients: 0.05; 95% CI: 0.04 to 0.07, p < 0.001), but the level did not change (Fig. 11). (Page 14, Lines: 311–315)

Each dot refers to ESBL-producing Enterobacteriaceae per 1000 patients in each month; the slope is based on linear regression in the four phases: Phase 1 (pre-intervention period from April 1, 2017, to May 31, 2019); Phase 2 (review of clinical pathways from June 1, 2019, to March 31, 2020); Phase 3 (establishing an infectious disease (ID) consultation service and implementing the antimicrobial stewardship program from April 1, 2020, to June 30, 2021); and Phase 4 (educational lecture and pop-up displays for oral antimicrobials from July 1, 2021, to March 31, 2022). (Fig 7, Page 14, Lines: 319–325)

Each dot refers to the PRSP per 1000 patients in each month; the slope is based on linear regression in the four phases: Phase 1 (pre-intervention period from April 1, 2017, to May 31, 2019); Phase 2 (review of clinical pathways from June 1, 2019, to March 31, 2020); Phase 3 (establishing an infectious disease (ID) consultation service and implementing the antimicrobial stewardship program from April 1, 2020, to June 30, 2021); and Phase 4 (educational lecture and pop-up displays for oral antimicrobials from July 1, 2021, to March 31, 2022). (Fig 8, Pages 14–15, Lines: 329–335)

Each dot refers to resistant H. influenzae per 1000 patients each month; the slope is based on linear regression in the four phases: Phase 1 (pre-intervention period from April 1, 2017, to May 31, 2019); Phase 2 (review of clinical pathways from June 1, 2019, to March 31, 2020); Phase 3 (establishing an infectious disease consultation service and implementing the antimicrobial stewardship program from April 1, 2020, to June 30, 2021); and Phase 4 (educational lecture and pop-up displays for oral antimicrobials from July 1, 2021, to March 31, 2022). (Fig 9, Page 15, Lines: 339–345)

Each dot refers to the CDI per 1000 patients each month, and the slope is based on linear regression in the four phases: Phase 1 (pre-intervention period from April 1, 2017, to May 31, 2019); Phase 2 (review of clinical pathways from June 1, 2019, to March 31, 2020); Phase 3 (establishing an infectious disease (ID) consultation service and implementing the antimicrobial stewardship program from April 1, 2020, to June 30, 2021); and Phase 4 (educational lecture and pop-up displays for oral antimicrobials from July 1, 2021, to March 31, 2022). (Fig 10, Pages 15–16, Lines: 349–355)

Each dot refers to MRSA per 1000 patients each month, and the slope is based on linear regression in the four phases: Phase 1 (pre-intervention period from April 1, 2017, to May 31, 2019); Phase 2 (review of clinical pathways from June 1, 2019, to March 31, 2020); Phase 3 (establishing an infectious disease (ID) consultation service and implementing the antimicrobial stewardship program from April 1, 2020, to June 30, 2021); and Phase 4 (educational lecture and pop-up displays for oral antimicrobials from July 1, 2021, to March 31, 2022). (Fig 11, Page 16, Lines: 359–365)

The actual (Phase 1 to 2: p < 0.001; Phase 2 to 3: p < 0.01, Phase 3 to 4: p < 0.001) and adjusted 3GC purchase costs (Phase 1 to 2: p < 0.001; Phase 2 to 3: p < 0.01, Phase 3 to 4: p < 0.01) per patient-days significantly decreased during the study period. (Page 16, Lines: 369–371)

There was no significant change in the trend of in-hospital mortality, length of hospital stay, or their level (Figs. 12 and 13). (Page 17, Lines: 392–393)

Each dot refers to the in-hospital mortality each month, and the slope is based on the linear regression in the four phases: Phase 1 (pre-intervention period from April 1, 2017, to May 31, 2019); Phase 2 (review of clinical pathways from June 1, 2019, to March 31, 2020); Phase 3 (establishing an infectious disease (ID) consultation service and implementing the antimicrobial stewardship program from April 1, 2020, to June 30, 2021); and Phase 4 (educational lecture and pop-up displays for oral antimicrobials from July 1, 2021, to March 31, 2022). (Fig 12, Page 18, Lines: 396–402)

Each dot refers to the length of hospital stay each month, and the slope is based on linear regression in the four phases: Phase 1 (pre-intervention period from April 1, 2017, to May 31, 2019); Phase 2 (review of clinical pathways from June 1, 2019, to March 31, 2020); Phase 3 (establishing an infectious disease (ID) consultation service and implementing the antimicrobial stewardship program from April 1, 2020, to June 30, 2021); and Phase 4 (educational lecture and pop-up displays for oral antimicrobials from July 1, 2021, to March 31, 2022). (Fig 13, Page 18, Lines: 405–411)

Decision Letter - Iddya Karunasagar, Editor

Reduction strategies for inpatient oral third-generation cephalosporins at a cancer center: an interrupted time-series analysis

PONE-D-22-26924R1

Dear Dr. Itoh,

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Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed

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Reviewer #1: Yes

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Reviewer #1: Yes

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Reviewer #1: Yes

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Reviewer #1: Dear Authors,

Thank you for addressing the previous comments to this manuscript. It addresses a very important topic on antimicrobial stewardship . Best wishes

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Reviewer #1: Yes: Aruna Poojary

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Formally Accepted
Acceptance Letter - Iddya Karunasagar, Editor

PONE-D-22-26924R1

Reduction strategies for inpatient oral third-generation cephalosporins at a cancer center: an interrupted time-series analysis

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