Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJuly 25, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-20578Did you donate? Talking about donations predicts compliance with solicitations for donationsPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Schröder, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The paper address an important question and is well written. However, there are two major concerns, regarding the two key variables of interest. As one of the reviewers discuss, the first WOM recruitment variable is problematically constructed. Moreover, there is a strong problem with the talking variable, which is clearly endogenous. I am not sure if you could fix this two important points in your revision, but I consider they must be address. There are some other comments by the reviewers. Please, read them carefully and try to follow their recommendations. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 02 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: What makes solicitations to make a donation for repeat donor effective? This paper conducts a set of registered analyses on Dutch data to show that some characteristics of donors, which can cheaply be measured by collection agencies, are drivers of compliance with solicitations. Testing a sociological theory with pre-registered hypotheses, the authors find that whether donors talk often about blood donations predicts compliance but the mode of recruitment (was the donor recruited via word-of-mouth?) does not. I like this paper a lot: it addresses an important question for blood collection, but also repeated donations more generally; it gathers high quality administrative data on donation solicitation and actual donation and combines this to a large-scale survey effort; the manuscript is written clearly and elegantly. I recommend the paper to be published following some revisions. 1. For readers that are skeptical of structural assumptions, it would good if all the main analyses could be replicated using OLS. It’d be enough for each estimated model had an OLS counterpart. 2. The authors claim that the study was pre-registered. However, as they explain in their “pre-registration”, they already had access to these datasets prior to submitting the pre-registration on OSF. I urge the authors to call this a “registration” instead of pre-registration, and if they want to write in the paper that registration document was submitted prior to any analyses they should always be clear that at the time they however had access to the entire dataset already. 3. Often blood donors work in the health sector themselves or at the NGO of blood collection. This kind of folks would naturally talk more about blood donations, have easier access to donation centers, and feel more obliged when they receive the request -- which wouldn't be very surprising. Does the survey collect information on the job of the subjects? It would useful and important to determine whether the correlation between compliance and talking about blood is not entirely driven by this aspect. If this were the case, the implication that "Our results imply that increasing talking about blood donations among current donors could be one tool to increase the effectiveness of solicitations for donations." would not be warranted. So please either provide evidence that this headline correlation is not driven by the donor's job or at the very least drop the discussion of unwarranted implications. Reviewer #2: This paper combines register and survey data to examines to what extent compliance with blood donation solicitations is predicted by being recruited via word of mouth and talking about donations. It is important to have a deeper understanding of what drives the compliance. However, I have some concerns about the two variables of interest. Please find my comments below. Figure 1: There is a typo: Donors are in the Level 2 instead of level 3. Variables of interest First of all, I would not name Section 3.2 “independent” variables of interest, as the authors also admit in the limitation, these variables are not independent, for example, talking about donations could be the outcomes of donations. Recruitment channel by WOM vs by the blood bank Are these two channels mutually exclusive? Since you allow multiple options in the survey, it’s not completely clear how the WOM recruitment variable is constructed. If a survey participant chooses both 3) blood bank and 6) partner, would it count as WOM or not? And by “one of the options 6,7, or 8”, does it mean “exactly one” or “one and above”? Please provide unambiguous instructions of how this variable is constructed. Talking about donations By construction, if people are recruited by WOM, they have to talk about donations. This makes it extremely hard to rationalize the results that talking about donations matters while WOM recruitment doesn’t. Why are the numbers of observation different in Figure 4A and 4B? 4A: N_0=12928, N_1=10934, total=23862 4B: N_1=2419, N_2=19050, N_3=2422, N_4=125, total=24016 Type of collection site: fixed vs mobile Is it the type of residents in small towns and villages or is it the type of communication among people that makes the difference between the fixed and mobile? Please provide more underlying explanations for this hypothesis. Discussion and limitation The authors proposed an explanation that “the recruitment process may be too far in the past to be relevant for their contemporary compliance behaviour.” However, the same could apply to “talking about donations”, i.e. they may have talked about it a while ago. Yet, talking appears to matter while WOM recruitment doesn’t. It is hard to investigate it as both the WOM recruitment variable and talking variable lack a time reference with respect to the donations. Regarding the process of selecting a behaviour, it’s not clear how you find support for habit formation simply by looking at the interaction between talking and experience. Please elaborate. Why do people talk about donations in the first place? Maybe because these people are more likely to donate anyway, and therefore, what you observe is a pure correlation between motivated donor and the compliance of donations. Similarly, the proposed group donation programmes, it could attract donors who are motivated anyway, leading to the compliance of joining such group programmes which further influence the compliance of the final donation. Finally, most of your hypotheses are not supported with your data, which calls for more appropriate measurement and methods. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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PONE-D-22-20578R1Did you donate? Talking about donations predicts compliance with solicitations for donationsPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Schröder, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 24 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments: As a suggestion from a referee, it is important to note that this paper should be referred to as a registration. Please ensure that this point is included in the final version. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I want to thank the authors for taking all comments seriously and adequately addressing them in the revised manuscript. I only want to push back on the response to my comment on pre-registration. The distinction between "registration" and "pre-registration" should be a well known one at this point, at least since some journals (like the American Economic Associations') introduced policies that require some form of registration. See here an example of a paper that was only "registered": https://gautam-rao.com/pdf/HMRS.pdf For a paper to be considered pre-registered, it's necessary that the authors do not have access to the data prior to the registration. It's not enough for the authors to claim that they had it but didn't use it or that they had it but hadn't yet constructed the exact outcome that they were going to use. Imagine the consequences it that was the standard for everybody... I urge the authors and the editor to call this a registration. It's important that as a profession we don't pool together different things and dilute the meaning of labels that should signal research replicability. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. 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