Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionSeptember 15, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-25618Genome Destabilization-Associated Phenotypes Arising as a Consequence of Therapeutic Treatment are Suppressed by OlaparibPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Yoshioka, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 12 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: In this manuscript the authors examine how the PARP inhibitor Olaparib suppresses cancer cells that developed resistance to camptothecin and radiation-induced double stranded breaks. While the data supports the observation that Olaparib activates the cGAS pathway, the evidence was only limited to the cytosolic cGAS observed in immunofluorescence microscopy. The conclusions about combining Olaparib and campthothecin for effective cancer cells killing are not unexpected since other groups have previously published that Olaparib disrupts ovarian and colorectal cancer cell lines (Ding et al Cell Rep, 2018; 25(11): 2972–2980.e5, Miura et al Radiat Oncol, 2012; 7, 62). The observations that Olaparib disrupts gamma H2AX and 53BP1 foci co-localisation suggest that PARP inhibition activates cGAS STING pathway that contributes to tumor cell death. It has recently been shown that the Fanconi Anemia DNA repair pathway bridges the HR and NHEJ pathway and would be useful to investigate further. Overall, I think the results will be useful to the field and may stimulate additional experiments by other investigators. However my enthusiasm is tempered since the major conclusions were already previewed in other published papers. If the authors could explain which DNA damage pathways (BRCA1 or 53BP1 mediated) that could be more exciting. Otherwise the observations may be more appropriate for another journal. Major comments: 1. Olaparib was previously shown to disrupt cGAS STING pathway and in BRCA1 deficient cells (Miura et al Radiat Oncol, 2012; Ding et al Cell Rep, 2018). The Miura et al, Radiat Oncol paper should be referenced in this manuscript. 2. PARP inhibitors are a classical example of a synthetic lethality relationship of diverging DNA repair mechanisms, and it is possible that Olaparib kills cancer cells after other HR pathways were compromised (eg. cells with stalled replication forks due to defective BRCA1 pathway). It was unclear which homologous repair pathway (eg BRCA1/Fanconi Anemia pathway) or non homologous end joining pathway (53BP1) that Olaparib affects. Cell imaging following Olaparib treatment with gH2AX and Rad51 staining should be repeated in 53BP1 and/or BRCA1/FANCD2 knock out cell lines. Alternatively, the authors could repeat the immunofluorescence imaging with BRCA1/FANCD2 to determine which pathway Olaparib affects. 3.Fig 5a – higher resolution of the figure containing the graph is needed. The number P=.. were ineligible. Fig 5c was missing two points for the gamma-ray irradiation (15 and 20 Gy). 4. Page 17 line 305 – there is already a paper that describes Olaparib association with BRCA or Fanconi Anemia pathway, please cite Ding et al Cell Rep. 2018 Dec 11; 25(11): 2972–2980.e5 as Olaparib has been shown to trigger cGas in BRCA1-deficient cells, which suggests it efficacy in killing cancer cells. 5. Please add the concentration of Olaparib as it was not described anywhere in the manuscript or methods. Minor comments: 1. page 18 line 308 is missing a reference after "..presumably by non-homologous end joining". 2. page 18 line 313 please add a sentence or two on how this work will bring impact to the cancer therapeutics or DNA damage fields. 3. Figure 4b remove the "With or without Olaparib" figure legend as the data was not shown in the figure. Alternatively, the authors could clarify that the graph on Fig 4b was without Olaparib. 4. Figures 2a and 3c was unclear. Higher resolution images are required to see the foci. Reviewer #2: Suzuki et al. presented a concise study on the suppression of radio- and CPT surviving cells by Olaparib co-treatment. Although the enhanced anti-tumour activity of Olaparib and CPT or gamma-rays was presented several years ago (Miura et al 2012 doi: 10.1186/1748-717X-7-62), the authors are addressing important aspect of simultaneous treatment that enhance elimination of resistant cancer cells, using MCF7 and to some extent HeLa and SW480 models. Overall, the text is well-written and data presented on figures are complete. Thus, I recommend the manuscript for publication, however, for increasing accessibility of the manuscript content I suggest some minor modifications of text, listed below. 1) The quality of figures (at least in my version, even after download) was low and should be enhanced in final version – the authors should clearly export the files at least in 300 DPI. 2) Fig 4 b and c – the authors claim that ‘no cells irradiated three times were obtained in the presence of Olaparib, because growth failed to recover in the presence of Olaparib’. This description is unclear to me and should be extended / commented. It is a bit disturbing that absolutely no cells were found in the presence of Olaparib. I convince the authors to rewrite the description of this results to explain the observed strong effects. 3) Lines 272-273 require edition as it reads strange in current version. 4) Lines 302-304 The authors should state here that it is simultaneous treatment of CPT or gamma-rays with Olaparib. 5) The final sentence of Discussion (lines 311-313) should be followed by a major conclusion on the findings described in this work to leave the reader with a clear message. 6) Methods – line 319 – used or prepared? ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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Genome Destabilization-Associated Phenotypes Arising as a Consequence of Therapeutic Treatment are Suppressed by Olaparib PONE-D-22-25618R1 Dear Dr. Yoshioka, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Alvaro Galli Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: In current version, the authors have addressed all the points raised in the first round of review. Present text reads well, Line 151 requires correction: stability should be replaced by instability. Overall, the manuscript is now ready for publication. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Winnie Tan Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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