Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJuly 28, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-24476An Optimized Electrotransformation Protocol For Lactobacillus Jensenii PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Cambray, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. See below for some additional editorial remarks. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 17 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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We require that authors provide all relevant data within the paper, Supporting Information files, or in an acceptable, public repository. Please add a citation to support this phrase or upload the data that corresponds with these findings to a stable repository (such as Figshare or Dryad) and provide and URLs, DOIs, or accession numbers that may be used to access these data. Or, if the data are not a core part of the research being presented in your study, we ask that you remove the phrase that refers to these data. Additional Editor Comments: The reviewers have given useful comments that should be answered. One of them remarks that the study is not very innovative. Although this may be the case, that is not a criterium for rejection for PlosOne. The suggestion of another reviewer is to show electrotransformation results for more than one L jensenii strain. If this is possible to do it would certainly strenghten the results. If you would need more time for rebuttal in that case, please let me know. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Review PLOS ONE An Optimized Electrotransformation Protocol For Lactobacillus Jensenii This is well-conducted research and the paper is, for the most part, clearly written. I recommend publication with very minor corrections. One thing that must be corrected is a paragraph in the Discussion where the presence of the ermB and ermC genes in the vectors is discussed (page 14). Two sentences in the paragraph are inconsistent with each other concerning which gene is on pTRKH2 and which gene is on the other vector being discussed. Minor issues: Key words: Why are ‘Acid Bacteria’ capitalized? Abstract: Line 9 should ‘strain’ be ‘species’? Abstract: Line 12 ‘cuvettes type’ should be ‘cuvette type’ Introduction (page 3): ‘bio engineered’ should be ‘bioengineered’ Introduction (last paragraph, six lines from end): ‘species optimized’ should be ‘species and optimized’ Figure 1B ‘additivs’ should be ‘additives’ and ‘vectors selection’ should be ‘vector selection’ Figure 1C why is ‘Cancer’ capitalized? Figure 1 legend: ‘therapeutics’ should be ‘therapeutic’ Materials and media: third line in first paragraph: ‘Systems) ,’ remove unneeded blank space after the ) Materials and media: line 5 in first paragraph: why is Peptone capitalized? Materials and media: in the Competent Cells Preparation section, line 3: ‘mL MRS fresh MRS’ should be ’mL fresh MRS’ Results: line 7 in first paragraph: ‘Addgene.’ Delete the period. The word ‘Greedy’ is used twice in the paper but do you mean ‘Speedy’? Table 1 legend: ‘abbreviation :’ should be ‘abbreviation:’ without the extra blank space Table 1 ‘unknow’ should be ‘unknown’ Discussion: Should ‘Bacteroides thetaiotamicron’ be in italics? Supplemental Figure 1 legend: panel D is mislabeled as a second panel C in the text. Supplemental Figure 2 legend: Should the last sentence end with a period? Supplemental Table 1: Should ‘primers’ be ‘primer’? Supplemental Description of Electroporation protocol: Step 1: Should ‘threw’ be ‘thaw’? Step 4: Should ‘a tissues’ be ‘a tissue’? Should ‘electropore’ be ‘electroporate’? The Time Constant Parameter: here you recommend 9-10 ms but the manuscript says 8-10.5 ms “(electroporation time constant must be in 8-10.5 ms range to show good efficiency)” Step 8 mentions glass beads, but what size beads and is their use required? I don’t recall seeing them mentioned earlier in the paper. Reviewer #2: The Manuscript by Fristot et al. describes the optimization of a protocol for the electrotransformation of Lactobacillus jensenii ATCC 25258. The Manuscript is easily readable even though an excessive part of the text is dedicated to the introduction and a to a detailed description of standard methods. The work appears as the simple setting of the condition for transforming this specific strain, just a preliminary step for any subsequent genetic research. The title itself “An Optimized Electrotransformation Protocol For Lactobacillus Jensenii“ is misleading, because a single strain of the species has been tested and, considering the variability commonly observed among different strains of the same species, it is hard to assert that the described protocol may be used for the whole L.jensenii species. I cannot see the originality of the work, as none of the materials have been generated during this study (both the host and the plasmids have been purchased from public sources) and the setup of the protocol has followed the strategies already described Luchansky and by Berthier in the cited references. Even the transformation efficiency obtained is not better than that reported by the cited authors respectively for L. acidophilus and L.sakei (but in those papers multiple strain for each species were tested). So, we think that the content of the manuscript isn’t innovative enough to be of interest for the readers. Reviewer #3: The study is not novel but still provides some useful information. However, there are many problems that need to be addressed. Major comments: 1. The "Introduction" is basically too long and didn't focus on the topic that the authors are talking about. The status of general plasmids/transformation in lactobacilli should be briefly discussed and mention the difficulty in L. jansenii. 2. the transformation can be strain-dependent, one strain is anyhow unconvincing and can not conclude an optimized electroporation for L. jansenii. The authors should try several different L. jansenii strains to validate the method. 3. the authors are highly recommended to try another replicon, pSH71 based plasmids, such as pNZ8148. Minor comments: P3: "In turn, the characterization...of these gram-positive bacteria". The authors should track the recent publications. One of the major factors that influence the transformation efficiency is the restriction-modification system, please refer to Zuo et al., 2019 doi.org/10.1021/acssynbio.9b00114, and Zuo et al., 2020 doi.org/10.1016/j.biotechadv.2020.107654. P3: "Hervana bioengineered a strain..." a ref or link should be provided. P5: ref for the L. jensenii strain was not clear. P6: the description of buffer for competent cells preparation was not clear. Which was 3x and which was 1X? P7: "according to the KAPA protocol of the PCR colony from Biosystem"? It was not clear. P13: table 1: it is strange that pTRKH2 and pTRKH3-slp-GFP share the same replicon and antibiotic-resistant gene, but with different copy numbers and transformation outcomes. The authors should carefully check the difference between these two plasmids and interpret the results. P14: the example of Bacteroides is not suitable here since you are talking about lactobacilli. Please refer to Bober et al., 2018 doi.org/10.1146/annurev-bioeng-062117-121019 and Zuo et al., 2020 doi.org/10.1016/j.biotechadv.2020.107654. Try to well organize the whole paragraph. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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PONE-D-21-24476R1 An Optimized Electrotransformation Protocol for Lactobacillus Jensenii PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Cambray, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Two of the three reviewers agree with this manuscript in its present form. The third reviewer has still some usefull comments to further improve the manuscript. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 09 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Sylvia Maria Bruisten, Ph.D Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Major comments Most of the previous comments has been properly addressed by the authors and we noticed the inclusion of three new strains of L. jensenii in this study. Nevertheless, the results are improperly reported and thus the conclusions are not appropriate. The authors must correct two main faults: 1) Data are shown only by graphs. The original numerical data and their averages should be reported, at least as supplementary information. 2) Trials have been performed in biological and technical replicates, but no statistical analysis is reported (neither in methods nor in results). Therefore, no statement about the significance of the observations is acceptable. Minor comments Please check these possible mistakes (Raws are referred to the pdf version, disregarding blank lines): P2 raws 5-6 low abundances = low abundance? P2 raw 10 capacities = capacity? P3 raw 11 to secreting = to secrete? P3 raw 18 medium sized = medium-sized? P4 raw 16 Cultures were incubating = Cultures were incubated? P4 raws 22-23 pTRKH2 (kind gift from Michela Lizier, Addgene plasmid # 27168) = This reference is that of pTRKH3slpGFP from the previous version . pTRKH2 is not from Lizier’s lab P5 raw 18 is as follow = is as follows? P10 raw 2 different DNA quantity = different DNA quantities? P11 raw 20 a few dozens = a few dozen? P12 raw 4 any particular strains = any particular strain? P12 raw 15 improve on our protocol = improve our protocol? P13 raw 23 with high-precision = with high precision? P14 raw 2 provides a mean = provides a means p 16 S1 table The whole 16S gene is shorter than the size indicated for the amplicon obtained with primers pFOR 16S L. jensenii and pREV 16S L. jensenii – check the value Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. 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