Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionOctober 28, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-29767Metabolomics of developmental changes in Triatoma sanguisuga gut microbiotaPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Dumonteil, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 28 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Dear colleagues, Identifying microbial diversity in Triatoma sanguisuga is interesting and adds important information to the adaptation scenario between wild-caught and laboratory-reared insects. The manuscript is well-written and can contribute to several other entomology research laboratories. Nevertheless, a few aspects need to be clarified. Therefore, I hope my comments will help to improve the clarity of some aspects of the manuscript. Major comments The authors used two insect groups, one composed of field-caught adults and another group composed of their offspring reared under laboratory conditions, for analyzing the microbial diversity in the insect gut. I understand that rearing adults in the laboratory was not possible; therefore, nymphs were used in the analyses. Throughout the text, authors refer to these groups as nymphs and adults, reflecting differences in microbial diversity between the developmental stages of T. sanguisuga. Nevertheless, to address the difference between insect stages, authors should have compared nymphs and adults reared under the same conditions. I presume that under the current experimental design, the changes in microbial diversity between wild-caught adults and laboratory-reared nymphs were likely caused by the adaptation to the laboratory conditions. This aspect needs to be clarified throughout the manuscript, including the title. The authors sequenced the bacterial 16S ribosomal gene to identify the microbial diversity and consequently predict the metabolome. Therefore, it is an indirect finding. It also needs to let clearer in the manuscript. Minor comments I suggest using abbreviations like “field-caught adults (FCA) and laboratory-reared nymphs (LRN)” to avoid misunderstanding the comparison between the two insect groups. The way it is written throughout the manuscript, referring to nymphs and adults, may be misleading. Line 54: citation number 8 does not match the references list. Lines 73 and 74; 77 and 78: The context in this paragraph is the comparison between nymphs and adults. This comparison is possible if both stages are reared under the same conditions, evidencing that the changes occur through the development of the insects. Were authors aiming to use the same context in their analyses? Line 104: The term “endosymbionts” must be checked if it is adequate here and throughout the manuscript. It is common that gut bacteria are referred to as endosymbionts, but not all of them can be clearly proven. Some of them are commensal, and others are opportunistic. In addition, several endosymbionts are intracellular and maternally transmitted. They have a lower probability of being lost across developmental stages. Lines 149 to 151: In the present study, authors identified bacteria at the family level and deduced the metabolic reconstruction based on the association to a set of bacteria species available in the AGORA database. How often does a given bacterium share the same metabolic reconstruction with others from the same family? It is important to address the level of confidence in this association. Discretionary comments Line 111: Full name of “ASL2” was missed when used for the first time in the text. Line 215: Would it be “variety” instead of “varied”? Reviewer #2: Observations: Line -25: I believe that instead of "alterative approaches" the authors mean "alternative approaches". Please fix it. Line 54: it is spelled zoootic, but the correct one is zoonotic. please fix this Line 55: change “synantropic” by “synanthropic”. Line 56: the word “ authchtonous” is misspelled, change to the correct form “ autochthonous”. Line 96: In the sentence “The paratransgenesis of triatomine microbiota …”, the authors are mistaken in relation to the concept of paratransgenic organism. It is not the microbiota that undergoes the paratransgenic process, but the vector in question. The microbiota of this vector undergoes a transgenic process. Who is paratransgenic is the vector, the modified microbiota is transgenic. I suggest changing the sentence to something like: "...the paratransgenic of triatomine vectors..." or "...the introduction of transgenic organisms into the microbiota of triatomine vectors..." Lane 98: The word “edosymbonts” is misspelled, change to correct form “endosymbionts”. Line 117: There is a mistake here, the sum of the number of nymphs in each stage (8+6+4) is 18 and not 11. Please fix it. Line 136: “Micriobiota” is the misspelled form of “microbiota”. Please fix it. Line 143: The singular verb was does not appear to agree with the plural subject Associations. Consider changing the verb form to were for subject-verb agreement. Line 52: “… extracted, and weighted..” It appears that you have an unnecessary comma in a compound predicate. Consider removing it. Line 215: The word varied doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with Variety Line 231: ”… the role to the microbiota …” It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here. Consider change to of. Line 277: the word occurr is a misspelling of occur. Fix it. Figures: The figures 3 and 4 are with the subtitles changed. Fix it. Materials and methods: To obtain the DNA to be used in the identification of the microbiota bacteria of T. sanguisuga. The authors used a section of the abdomen of adult insects and the entire body of nymphs. This generates noise, as in the case of nymphs bacteria that do not belong to the intestinal microbiota may be being counted as if they were. Ideally, material from nymphs and adults should be obtained through dissection of the intestines of both. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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Metabolomics of developmental changes in Triatoma sanguisuga gut microbiota PONE-D-22-29767R1 Dear Dr. Dumonteil, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Yara M. Traub-Csekö Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Dear colleagues, The page and line numbers cited in the authors' answers were not matching with the new submitted version. Nevertheless, the corresponding changes could be found. All questions and comments were addressed. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Antonio J Tempone ********** |
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PONE-D-22-29767R1 Metabolomics of developmental changes in Triatoma sanguisuga gut microbiota Dear Dr. Dumonteil: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Yara M. Traub-Csekö Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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