Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionOctober 15, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-28519Drosophila RhoGAP18B Regulates Actin Cytoskeleton during Border Cell MigrationPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Wan, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript within four weeks. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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[Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This manuscript shows a new required role for fly RhoGAP18B in cell migration in the ovarian border cells. Border cells are a good model system for investigating the genetic regulation of cell migration, as many genes required for this process also have roles in other migrating cells. RhoGAP18B is predicted to be an activating factor for the Rho family of GTPases, which include Rac, Rho, and Cdc42. Using RNA interference, the authors demonstrate that reduced levels of a certain RhoGAP18B isoform (PA) cell autonomously disrupts border cell migration to the oocyte. This is attributed to changes in F-actin organization, which is usually higher in the leading edge of the migratory cell group, but when RhoGAP18B is reduced, F-actin is more evenly localized. The defects are rescued by co-expression of RhoGAP18B-PA. Genetic interaction tests suggest that RhoGAP18B acts to de-activate Rac because reduction of Rac function suppresses the defects due to loss of RhoGAP18B. A connection is also shown to the downstream Lim Kinase. This work is original and improves the understanding of actin regulation in border cell migration, which may have broader implications. While the results are generally clear and the data are sufficient to support the main points, more controls or a few additional experiments would enhance confidence in the conclusions. A limitation of the work is that the experiments used only one RNAi line to disrupt RhoGAP18B PA. Knockdown of the other isoforms do not have an effect, presumably because they are expressed at low levels in the ovary to begin with. The authors verify that the knockdown due to the RhoGAP18B PA line is specific to that isoform by quantifying RNA levels, and they show that the resultant defects can be rescued by co-expression of the wild type isoform. This suggests that the conclusions are likely to be correct, but it is possible that there could be off target effects, for example affecting a different RhoGAP that has a role in cell migration. The authors may want to test additional lines or at least acknowledge this possible caveat in the manuscript. Minor concerns/suggestions: - More details on how the authors measured F-actin levels in border cells versus nurse cells would be helpful. It is hard to see in the figure how the difference is only about 1.3-2.2 fold higher in border cells when it appears much brighter. - I was unclear about the authors’ model for the spatial regulation of F-actin that occurs via RhoGAP18B PA. Normally F-actin levels are higher in the front of the cluster than in the back, but when RhoGAP18B is reduced by RNAi, the front/back levels are more even. The authors propose that RhoGAP18B acts to deactivate Rac primarily at the back of the cluster, which would be interesting to test in clonal analysis with different levels of RhoGAP18B PA. How do the authors propose this localized effect would be controlled? Maybe this issue can be discussed further in the text. - In the discussion, the authors claim that RTKs are higher in the front of the migrating cell cluster and they cite Assaker (2010), but that citation shows that the activity, not the receptors themselves, are higher in the front. This should be clarified. - Citations should include all authors unless the journal style indicates otherwise. - In a few places, the paper needs minor editing for English usage, grammar, or typographical errors. Reviewer #2: This manuscript is globally clear and well-written. The conclusion that RhoGAP18B controls border cell migration is supportive. But authors need to do some improvement for the publication at Plos One. 1. for results 1A, it is not clear for readers without Drosophila genetic background. Authors should clearly cite how they know RhoGAP18B has these isoforms. I guess this information of Fig. 1A is from flybase. Authors should clarify this clearly. In figure legends, authors should also mention clearly that RNAi is specific for each isoform, in case that readers will get confused if they are not Drosophila expert. 2. For the overexpression of PA, authors should check the effects on PA protein or mRNA. This is the necessary control experiment. 3. Some quantifications are missing in the figures, such as Fig. 1B. 4. qRT-PCR to detect the RNAi of different isoforms in which organ? whole body or the ovary? It is unambiguous. Please make it clearer. 5. Authors used heterozygous mutant of Rac1-3 gene to do rescue experiment. Normally heterozygous would not affect protein expression. It is unclear how this heterozygous mutant can reduce the increase of Rac1 activity (I guess that RhoGAP18B knockdown by RNAi can increase Rac1 active form). Can authors explain this unclear point? 6. Authors cited some references such as Rac1 by papers published before 2018? Since Rac1 have more novel findings in border cells, can authors put new recent studies in BC migration in their ref? Such as 2 recent papers: 1) Wang et al., iScience 2020; 2) Sijia Zhou, et al. Nat Commun. These two papers might explain the effect on F-actin network by RhoGAP18B-Rac1 when border cells lack prominent protrusions (and thus F-actin signals could be mainly from supracellular F-actin cables. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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PONE-D-22-28519R1 Drosophila RhoGAP18B Regulates Actin Cytoskeleton during Border Cell Migration PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Wan, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. Your revised manuscript has been read by the two original reviewers and both of them feel that the paper has improved and is suitable for publication in PLOS ONE, however, one of them has recommended minor changes to correct language errors . Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 16 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Carlos Oliva, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. 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Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The paper has improved in revision and is now clearer. Here are two minor corrections on standard English language usage in response to question 5: section 3.4 heading should say "genetically interacts" instead of "genetic interact" figure 4 legend should say "defects in RhoGAP18B-PA knockdown in border cells" instead of "defects of PA knckdown border cells" Reviewer #2: All my comments have been addressed. And recommend for the acceptance of this manuscript for publication. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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Drosophila RhoGAP18B Regulates Actin Cytoskeleton during Border Cell Migration PONE-D-22-28519R2 Dear Dr. Ping Wan, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Carlos Oliva, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): There are still few typos, that should be corrected Page2, line 4 “Rac signals downstream to Lim kinase (LimK), which can meditate the activity” Should be "mediate" Page 4: Results should be preceded by the number 3. Page 7, line9: “drosophila” should say Drosophila Page 7, third paragraph, line 5: it says “Pac” is it Pak? |
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PONE-D-22-28519R2 Drosophila RhoGAP18B Regulates Actin Cytoskeleton during Border Cell Migration Dear Dr. Wan: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Carlos Oliva Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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