Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMarch 24, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-06866Gene expression analysis of masticatory tendon and Achilles tendon with tensile tension in a Japanese monkey by using RNA-sequencingPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Sato, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please answer the 5 points raised by the reviewer.- clarify the result section as suggested- include include baseline comparisons between all three tendons- include a heatmap of the genes that are implicated in the cell cycle GO categories- move the FDR criteria and comparisons in the methods section- please use English Proofreading Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 14 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: In this study, the authors have identified distinct tendon-specific mechanoresponsive transcriptional changes in primary tendon cells in the Japanese monkey (Macaca fuscata) from three different tendons: the Achilles tendon, temporal tendon and masseter aponeurosis. In particular, they have determined that maxillofacial tendons exhibit more differentially expressed genes pertaining to cell proliferation and stress compared to Achilles tendon in response to loading. These findings may help provide insight into the pathogenesis of masticatory muscle tendon–aponeurosis hyperplasia (MMTAH), a condition that is prevalent in masticatory tendons but not Achilles tendon. In addition, this work is one of the first to profile the difference in transcriptional responses between limb vs. craniofacial tendons in response to mechanical loading in primates and as such, would be of interest to the tendon field. However, substantial revisions need to be performed prior to publication. Major comments: 1. The text in the results section should be revised for clarity purposes. With multiple tendons for each condition, it should be clearly stated what comparisons were being made to arrive at the differential gene expression list. We also suggest including a graphical figure clearly diagramming the experimental design and RNA-seq comparisons made between the tendons/conditions. Some (but not all) specific text examples we refer the authors to for revision are listed below: -Page 7 Lines 18 - 20 We identified 2195 genes in temporal tendon (TT), 1914 genes in masseter aponeurosis (MA) and 3697 genes in Achilles tendon (AT) as differentially expressed genes (DEGs) with false discovery rate (FDR) < 10-10. -Page 7 Lines 20 - Page 8 Line 1 We also identified 1076 DEGs that meet the following condition; FDR < 10-10 in all tendons (TT, MA, and AT) (S1 Table). -Page 8 Lines 1 - 4 By contrast, as the hyperplasia is observed in tendon of masticatory muscles not but in Achilles tendon in MMTAH patients, we examined DEGs that meet the following condition; TT and MA (designated as TM group) for FDR<10-10 and AT for FDR>0.05. 2. There appear to be substantial differences between the AT and MA/TT tendons at baseline (no stretching) which is interesting. These differences at baseline may provide insight into the differential responses between AT and MA/TT upon stretching. As such, the authors should include this baseline comparison data analysis between all three tendons and add it to the manuscript. 3. It would be nice to include a heatmap of the genes that are implicated in the cell cycle GO categories and also to see their relative expression levels compared to Achilles tendon conditions. 4. The FDR criteria and exact comparisons made for differential expression should be included in the methods section. The FDR criteria in particular can be moved into the methods section completely for clarity in the results section of the text. 5. The writing quality needs to be improved significantly throughout the manuscript. The Introduction and Discussion sections are extremely short and superficially written. They should be revised to include more detail about previous works and implications of these works both in context not just of their own work, but other studies in the tendon field. Minor comments: Page 7, Line 16: The word “ingredient” is confusing here and should be removed. Perhaps rephrase the sentence to clearly indicate to the reader that tendon-specific trends in gene expression were analyzed with respect to stretching? Page 12, line 16: “MMATH” should be changed to “MMTAH” Page 12, line 16: The use of the word “primate” is preferred here. In addition, the authors should clarify whether they are referring to one species of primate or other monkeys of the same species. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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PONE-D-22-06866R1Gene expression profiling of the masticatory muscle tendons and Achilles tendons under tensile strain in the Japanese macaque Macaca fuscataPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Sato, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. I have only one final minor request, before accepting the manuscript:As suggested by the reviewer could you please develop, in the discussion, the following point : "What might the differences mean in terms of clinical relevance or function?" Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 28 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: The authors are to be commended on an interesting paper that demonstrates differences between functionally distinct load-bearing tendons. The authors have made significant improvements in this review however I found the discussion somewhat superficial and the meaning and relevance of the findings (aside from the fact that they are observationally different) in a wider context is not explored. What might the differences mean in terms of clinical relevance or function? ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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Gene expression profiling of the masticatory muscle tendons and Achilles tendons under tensile strain in the Japanese macaque Macaca fuscata PONE-D-22-06866R2 Dear Dr. Sato, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Claude Prigent Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-22-06866R2 Gene expression profiling of the masticatory muscle tendons and Achilles tendons under tensile strain in the Japanese macaque Macaca fuscata Dear Dr. Sato: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Claude Prigent Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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