Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionDecember 26, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-35388Association between recent COVID-19 diagnosis on depression and anxiety symptoms among slum residents in Kampala, UgandaPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Wafula, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 09 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Review comments Title: Association between recent COVID-19 diagnosis on depression and anxiety symptoms among slum residents in Kampala, Uganda Abstract The background should mention briefly the rationale for choosing slum settlements. The tools that were used in data collection especially for anxiety and depressive symptoms should be mentioned. It will be important to indicate the incidence of covid-19 diagnosis within that past 30 days in the results Introduction Authors should provide references for sentence in lines 63 and 64 Generally, the introduction section is well written but authors should revise sections about low literature on COVID and slums since s cursory search online provides some evidence to guide the authors. Authors should focus building a case for their study based on what has been reported in relation to COVID and not so much on SARS etc. Methods Location of the study Some detailed description of the study area should be provided. What is the population, facilities, healthcare access, COVID related infection rates etc should be provided since it’s one of Kampala's most densely populated slums and such information should be readily available. Sampling Line 87 - Sample size was calculated for the main study. It’s not clear what authors mean though I guess it’s been described earlier? Procedure How was COVID diagnosis confirmed? How was the covid situation at the time of data collection and what considerations were made? Ethics? Information on covid protocol missing. Data collection and measures The PHQ and GAD have to be described well. How were the responses scored and categorized based on the scores for the items in the questionnaire? How did the authors ensure the validity/reliability of the questionnaire? Was the study pilot tested? What was the outcome of the pilot and what modifications were made afterwards? Results The results are well presented. A few comments though: In the tables, there was information on substance use, income, covid experiences etc. 1. Each study variable has to be clearly indicated in the methods and how they were assessed. 2. What was the rationale for choosing the income categories? Discussion. I would rather authors stick to depressive and anxiety symptoms since the study tools and approach does not qualify for a diagnostic criterion for depression and anxiety to be used in the study. The strengths of this study did not come out well. Conclusion Present a brief summary of major findings and include the implications of such findings to practice, policy, clinical care and the current COVID-19 pandemic. Reviewer #2: In this manuscript, Wafula et al aimed to establish a link between COVID-19 and depression and generalized anxiety disorder among poor people in inner-city slums in Uganda. While their finding is of interest, especially around this time when COVID-19 still prevails, the manuscript cannot be accepted for publication in its current form due to several issues including missing punctuation marks and use of wrong punctuation marks, which require a major revision. Below are my comments which authors should address to help improve the quality of their manuscript: TITLE Authors should rephrase their title. They could either say "Association between recent COVID-19 diagnosis, depression and anxiety symptoms..." or "Effect of COVID-19 on depression and anxiety symptoms..." ABSTRACT Authors should write the full meaning of COVID-19, then put the abbreviation in parenthesis before using it in subsequent sentences. They should also write the full meaning of GAD. I believe it is generalized anxiety disorder. They should specify whether the 284 individuals recruited in the study were children, adults or both. Otherwise, they should state the minimum age of the study participants. In addition, authors should also use p-values to state whether or not significant difference exists the study groups. INTRODUCTION In line 38, authors should write the full meaning of COVID-19, then put the abbreviation in parenthesis before using it in subsequent sentences. Among the detrimental effects of COVID-19 in line 39, authors should include a statement on statistics of COVID-19-associated mortality. In line 46, authors should delete the preposition "of" that appeared after the word "comprise". In line 61, authors should provide additional examples of the COVID-19-associated psychological distress beyond Burkina Faso, Ethiopia and Egypt. In line 71, authors should replace the word "elsewhere" with a word or a phrase that defines the opposite of slum dwellers or slum settlement. This should be followed by a cited reference from published literature. In line 79, authors should replace semi-colon (;) with a comma (,) In line 80, authors should include a statement on why the study lasted from April to May, 2022 Did authors consider any inclusion and exclusion criteria in their study design? If yes, what were these criteria? If no, why? In lines 86 and 87, authors should briefly state how they calculated sample size for the main study. In line 89, authors should briefly explain what they mean by "systematic sampling" What is the meaning of "LC" as used in line 91? In line 92, authors should introduce a comma (,) after the word "direction" In line 104, authors should briefly explain why they considered only preceding two weeks of depression and GAD as primary outcomes. In line 106, authors should introduce a comma (,) after reference [15] RESULTS In line 127, authors should replace the word "participants" with the word "subjects" Authors should convert some of their tabular data into graphical data. Readers would better appreciate graphical data than tabular data. In line 156, authors should replace the word "particular" with the word "participants" DISCUSSION In line 164, authors should introduce a comma (,) after the word "face" In line 167, should write the full meaning of GAD, then put the abbreviation in parenthesis before using it in subsequent sentences in lines 183 and 215. They should do same with the abbreviation "LMICS" as used in lines 181 and 234. In line 170, authors should clearly state which participants they are referring to. I believe they are referring to recently diagnosed COVID-19 participants. This should be clearly stated. In the sentence that begins with "The prevalence of depression..." in line 172, the results of both studies in the sentence are not comparable since both studies had different sample size. Authors should either remove this comparison or rephrase their sentence. In the sentence that begins with "In the previous study..." in line 175, which previous study are authors referring to? In line 189, authors should replace the preposition "by" with "of". In line 193, authors should provide references after the phrase "psychological distress during the COVID-19 pandemic In line 196, which counterparts are authors referring to? This should be well-defined. In the sentence that begins with "Our study, is to our knowledge..." in lines 200 and 201, authors should rephrase the sentence. In line 209, authors should introduce a hyphen (-) between "well" and "established". Thus, it should be written as "well-established" Authors should provide references at the end of the sentence in line 210 LIMITATION In line 223, the phrase "...and whether the association changed as time..." is confusing. Authors should rephrase it In line 225, authors should provide references to the wider literature that corresponds to their finding. This should be followed by a comma (,) CONCLUSION In line 233, authors should replace the semi-colon (;) with a full stop (.). The word "therefore" that follows it should start with block letter "T". REFERENCES Authors should make sure that the format of their reference list aligns with the journal's requirement. They should also ensure that all in-text references are in the reference list and vice-versa. ********** 6. 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Association between recent COVID-19 diagnosis, depression and anxiety symptoms among slum residents in Kampala, Uganda PONE-D-22-35388R1 Dear Dr. Wafula, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Seth Kwabena Amponsah, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Authors have adequately addressed the comments raised. They should consider revising the use of study subjects to study participants. Thank you Reviewer #2: The reviewer's comments were clearly answered, and appropriate changes were introduced in the revised manuscript. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: George J. Dugbartey ********** |
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PONE-D-22-35388R1 Association between recent COVID-19 diagnosis, depression and anxiety symptoms among slum residents in Kampala, Uganda Dear Dr. Wafula: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Seth Kwabena Amponsah Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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