Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionAugust 26, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-23933Appia: simpler chromatography analysis and visualizationPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Isabelle Baconguis, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 20 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: N/A ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This work by the lab of Dr. Baconguis provided a useful tool to analyze HPLC data. The manuscript is well written, and the result presented is solid. Overall, I highly recommend this for publication. Reviewer #2: Summary Posert and Baconguis present the tool “Appia”, which is a set of scripts that allows users to convert chromatography data from major chromatography instruments such as Waters, Agilent, Shimadzu, and AKTA into a standardized format. The Appia suite of scripts allow users to set up an Appia web server for viewing the processed data in a browser via the Appia Web interface. The Appia Web interface provides data visualization through an interactive interface, which is self-explanatory and easy to use. Appia is proposed to help users overcome barriers in analysis of chromatography data both at the individual user level and between users in different laboratories. In general, the manuscript is well-written, and presents a tool of interest to the broad readership of PLOS ONE. While Appia Web is explained in detail, more general information about Appia is lacking. Importantly, in our opinion, the first preprint on bioRxiv (submitted April 2022) answered several of the questions that we had after reading the submitted manuscript, both in terms of understanding how Appia works and what user-specific gaps it fills. As such, we recommend the authors to expand the current, main text with much of their previous version of the manuscript to unpack Appia and make it more approachable for the readership of the journal and potential users of the tool. We recommend publishing after major revisions according to our comments below. Major comments to the manuscript • Line 11-14: Rather than focusing on types of analysis that the current version of Appia doesn’t support (e.g. “integration of peak width, baseline subtraction”), the authors should consider highlighting the features that Appia does support in the abstract. • The introduction of the manuscript should include a more thorough introduction to Appia than it currently does. Appia is only mentioned in the last sentence (line 49-50) and from this sentence is it not clear what Appia is. • The authors introduce their tool as useful for various chromatographic applications but – since this is the main field of the authors – only provide examples for protein biochemistry applications. Nevertheless, it would further underline the strength, versatility, and accessibility of Appia, while also targeting the broad readership of PLOS ONE, if the authors included another, non-protein-based example in the manuscript. • The authors describe that Appia converts chromatography data into a “tidy” format. When reading the manuscript, it is not clear what this “tidy” format entails and how it differs from the format provided by the manufacturers. The authors should give a brief outline of the structure of the “tidy” data in the text (line 53) and should consider showing the Appia data format compared to data in one of the manufacturers formats in an early figure, similar to the comparison between the traces in Figure 3. This would help readers and potential users to understand the importance of the software, in addition to equip them with the proper background to access the files and their content (and to detect potential flaws). • Does the “tidy” format also contain the normalized data? From the provided data files in the Supporting information, it seems so, but the manuscript is missing information on the normalization; How it works and whether the user can choose to which data the data set is normalized (see line 75). The authors should provide more details on this step. • Figure 1 doesn’t fit well with the current outline and scope of the manuscript. Visually, it is nice, as it highlights properties important in SEC analysis, but the figure is not central to understanding the work presented. It would be more relevant to include the workflow of Appia and how it is designed and looks like for the user in Figure 1. The authors could also consider including an outline of the “tidy” format in such a figure. For instance, the authors should consider referring to Figure 1 in line 64. • A potential barrier in the analysis of chromatography data from different systems is the flow cell path length. It is not clear whether info about the flow cell path length is part of the “basic information” (line 60) that users are prompted for when starting an Appia Experiment. If not, the authors should consider adding it as a feature to further ease comparison of traces between different chromatography systems. Either way, the authors should explicitly state what info is asked for when starting an Appia “Experiment”. • State-of-the-art in the field of chromatography data visualization and analysis is not clear from the current form of the manuscript, e.g. what do people usually do with this type of data (Gnuplot, GraphPad Prism, Origin, Excel?), and therefore the “proved advantage over existing alternatives” is not entirely clear (see PLOS ONE guidelines on software publications). Some of this is nicely described in the first preprint. • In the demo Appia Web, the two FPLC examples are presented without axis legend (only on the hoover-over), neither is the axis legend added when the image is downloaded (if plotted alone). The authors should consider adding this information in the script if this is the case for all displayed FPLC data. • In line 65, the authors write “… the data will be uploaded to the Appia Web database for viewing through a browser”. The authors should consider making it clear for the reader that the Appia database is local. Furthermore, the authors should elucidate more on the data storage and data protection within the Appia Web database, including how individual users may or may not access each other’s data within a single database. This is nicely expanded upon in the first preprint. • In figure 4 and the corresponding text the authors explain how they use Appia Web to compare data from paired FSEC/SEC experiments. With Appia Web it should be possible to overlay the data generated by FSEC and SEC in one plot. The authors should provide such an overlay plot for the data shown in figure 4. If it is not possible to create such an overlay plot yet, it would be helpful to implement such an option for easy comparison. Elaborate how this is better than the manufacturers solutions. • It is not clear which proteins used in the experiments outlined in Figure 4 and 5. The authors should include which protein were used here, particularly as it is difficult to follow exactly which EnACs were used when: In lines 187 and 205, is it the same EnAC or are different EnACs (αβγ vs δβγ) used? • The authors should add something about the outlook and long-term utility of Appia. What is the future growth of the software? How could it be further improved? Could integration of area under the curve/peak and Gaussian functions of polydisperse peaks be included in the software or does this lie within the domain of more advanced forms of chromatography? What about the maintenance/future of the software? What is the likelihood for it to become outdated within a couple of years of installation? Users should have somewhat an insurance that the software will be taken good care of in the future if they are to include it in their workflow. • The manuscript is missing a conclusion. Comments to the software • The authors provide few details on how to run Appia in Python. The GitHub repository is lacking details here as well. To make Appia available for a broad range of users more details should be given in the manuscript as well as in the GitHub repository on how to run Appia in Python. According to the GitHub page, the authors previously tested out a GUI for Appia, but decided against it. The authors should reconsider whether the addition of a GUI would be helpful for users to whom command line work is perceived as difficult/a bottleneck. • Along the lines above, the authors should consider adding a -h function to help new users run appia.py in the command line. • It would be nice to have more options for export formats in Appia Web than just .png. The authors should consider adding other options such as .svg, .pdf, .tiff. Furthermore, it seems like Appia Web only allows the user to download images. The authors should consider allowing users to download the generated .csv data to facilitate the exchange of the converted data (and the transparency for the user themselves). Minor comments • The readability of the manuscript would greatly improve if the authors gave some of the sections in the Results section headers. • Line 20: “Foundational” is a word, but it reads odd. In this context, the word “fundamental” would read better. • Line 31” “are” is missing between analyte and sufficient. • Line 33: Gaussian should be written with uppercase: Gaussian. • Line 36: “If two” should be “Two”. • Line 37: New section, so “these” should be named “the position, heights and width”. • Line 39: “Our field” should be “the field”. • Line 42: The sentence with “complex chromatographic assays” reads odd and should be rephrased. • Line 41 and 43: “Chromatogram manufacturer” must be “chromatographic system manufacturer”? • A full stop is missing for the sentences that end in lines 36 and 101. • Line 92: The authors should consider adding info detailing that their protein of interest is fused to a fluorescent protein, and which tag they use, e.g. “… a common assay in our lab is exploration of expression levels of a given protein construct fused to green fluorescent protein (GFP).” • Line 94: The abbreviation MOI (multiplicity of infection) should be explained in the main text, and not only presented in the Experimental procedures (line 176). • Line 107: It says “… with a clear plot layout enabled by Appia”. Surely, this was not only possible due to Appia as other custom scripts could have enabled it as well. • Line 111: fluorescence-detection size-exclusion chromatography (FSEC) should to be introduced the first time it appears. • Line 119: Experiments should be written in all lower case. • In lines 168 and 221 it should be repository instead of repo. • In Appia Web, the buttons to the left always display “HPLC” even though FPLC data are loaded. The authors should consider giving the buttons a uniform format accordingly. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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Appia: simpler chromatography analysis and visualization PONE-D-22-23933R1 Dear Dr. Isabelle Baconguis, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. 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Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: N/A ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors properly addressed all concerns. The manuscript should be accepted for publication in plos one. Reviewer #2: The authors have answered all of our questions and considered all of our comments to great satisfaction. The resulting re-submitted manuscript reads well and, in our opinion, makes the tool Appia much more approachable for the readership of the journal and potential users than the original submission. In addition, we are happy that the Github description has been expanded upon as well. We recommend accepting the revised manuscript. Below are a few minor comments and kind suggestions to the text that the authors might consider incorporating when editing the final version. The lines refer to the resubmitted manuscript. • Line 72: Consider changing “any supported chromatogram’s data” into “a range of chromatographic data”. • Line 74: Should “into” be “as”? • Line 76: that can be omitted and “raw” could be added in front of data files. • Line 80-81: Consider adding “at a” after “or one” • Line 89: Consider substituting perhaps with e.g., • Line 92: Consider adding s to program and package • Line 92-93: Consider omitting the brackets, and add “,” and “;” • Line 103-104: Consider replacing “ -we (the authors)" with “, and the authors and developers of Appia neither” after hosted • Line 108: Consider removing “if” and adding “who” after users • Line 114: Consider adding “, and preparative data” after analytic data and changing the following to “as they typically require different visualization”. • Line 189-190: Consider adding “between proteins and ligands” after interactions, “;” after (Fig. 6), and “of the ligand-bound protein peak” before to the unbound peak. • Line 194: Consider removing “plainly” and add “in Fig. 6” after “traces”. • Line 228-229: Consider rephasing, “While Appia is unable to run… nor process…, Appia provides a free…” ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Henriette Elisabeth Autzen ********** |
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PONE-D-22-23933R1 Appia: simpler chromatography analysis and visualization Dear Dr. Baconguis: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Tommaso Lomonaco Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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