Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMay 16, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-14277The role of personality traits on self-medicated cannabis in rheumatoid arthritis patients: A multivariable analysisPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Pascual-Ramos, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 18 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors investigated the role of personality traits on medical use of cannabis in RA patients. I feel that the paper contains information of interest to readers. however, the revisions/modifications listed below will, in my opinion, help empower the manuscript even more. Background section Line 54: the sentence “lack of a known cure using traditional medicine” is imprecise. To date, due to the introduction of effective and expensive biological and synthetic Disease Modifying Anti-Inflammatory Drugs (DMARDs), sustained remission status is more likely achievable compared to the past, although residual synovitis can support the progression of bone damage occurring in some patients. Line 56: the reference to the cited study should be more accurate. Bruce D et al. reports that patients with certain chronic conditions (also RA?) use medical cannabis both as a complementary method for symptom management and treatment of standard-of-care medication side-effects. Groups and outcome The authors proposed to use a cut-off points for sample size calculation and population description of personality traits, however I not advocate making categorical variable out of continuous variables because there might be loss of information. Describe the definition of a positive response based on the modified ICAM-Q: How the rationale for the medical use of cannabis is defined? Based on what criteria? Statistical analysis section Line 161: STATA has two version of AIC statistics, one used with -glm- and another -estat ic-. The -estat ic- version does not adjust the log-likelihood and penalty term by the number of observations in the model, whereas the version used in -glm- does. Having an adjustment by the number of observations is preferable. Population characteristics As you previously define “ever history of severe mental illness, including psychotic manifestations, or current severe psychiatric diagnosis that hindered interview performance or completetion” (which correspond to patients scored CGI-S>=6) a criteria of exclusion, the “current psychiatric diagnosis of one in ten patients” (line 182) should be clearly described by the relative CGI-S score. MCU and related information section Line 201 and following: please revise all the number and percentage. A total of 53 patients reported MCU, which not correspond to the total of patients categorized based on the type of MCU (topical, oral or smoked). Multivariable analysis section The details of the 3 models with the p values of each independent variable should be entered in Table 3. Indeed, in line 237 you describe a statistical trend of the openness trait to be independently associated to MCU in model A (aOR=2.46, 0.95-6.35, p=0.06), but this value is not given in table 3. In addition, logistic regression does not have an equivalent means to the R squared that is found in OLS regression (i.e. the proportion of variance explained by the predictors). So, I suggest interpreting the pseudo R squared statistics with great caution. In addition, the pseudo R2 values given, are very low so it would be useful to know the prob>chi2 of each model, which defines the probability that the null hypothesis is true, meaning that there is no effect of the independent variables taken together, on the dependent variable. I also suggest that the authors describe the regression model-based analysis, if stepwise or backward-selection. The backward instead of stepwise automated variable selection is preferable, with the identification of the variables that are not important in the multivariate model through the Would test, the evaluation of significance of the excluded and retained variables through the partial likelihood ratio test, the definition of the correct parametric form for the proper variables and the elaboration of a list of possible interactions between variables. In addition, the authors should define the quality of the model by AUC calculation and relative graph inclusion, which helps provide a visual interpretation. Discussion section Line 282: the mentioned analysis both report a p value of 0.09 that cannot be considered a trend of statistical significance, even more so because of the lack of statistical power. Reviewer #2: The paper is well designed and interesting, and it will give further informations to clinicians about something concerning self medicated cannabis use in rheumatoid arthritis. Nevertheless additional factors for medical cannabis use are reported to be disease activity/disease severity but in your paper no data about disease activity such as DAS28 (Prevoo ML, van ‘t Hof MA, Kuper HH, van Leeuwen MA, van de Putte LB, van Riel PL. Modified disease activity scores that include twenty-eight-joint counts. Development and validation in a prospective longitudinal study of patients with rheumatoid arthritis. Arthritis Rheum. 1995;38:44–48), CDAI or SDAI are mentioned but only questionnaires usually used as seft reported outcomes. In order to complete your data and make the manuscript unambiguous about data concerning disease activity I suggest to add these informations and repeat statistical analyses adding these clinical indices ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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