Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMay 17, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-14357The added value of family-centered rounds in the hospital setting: A systematic review of systematic reviewsPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Woldring, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. As editor, and to be fully transparent, I struggled to identify reviewers for this manuscript and so I performed the review myself to make sure that the process wasn't delayed. Overall, both myself and the reviewer thought that this was a well-conducted study and has generally been written to a high standard. Some of my comments are aiming to improve the manuscript, and many are relatively small requests for changes / amendments to correct typos and grammatical mistakes. The larger comments relate to a better explanation of the data extraction and synthesis process, and reframing some of the discussion so that it is more impactful (ie drawing out the international relevance) and engaging with discussion around paediatric involvement in decision making. I've marked this as a 'major revision' but this is just to give you enough time to make the changes; in practice it could have been a 'minor revision'. [Start of editor comments] Methods Lines 107-108 you state that outcomes, benefits and effects were used in the single systematic reviews. Can you, in response to reviewers, state which reviews these were? In the manuscript, you should cite these reviews or change the text to be more generic, ie away from specific reviews. You may want to consider moving the definition of added value to the end of the introduction and incorporate into the objective where the concept is first introduced in the text. Line 110 is missing punctuation after the [15.16] citations. In the study selection please state the number of agreements/disagreements that required adjudication by a third author. In the data extraction and synthesis section it’s unclear what the process for extraction and synthesis was, particularly “included systematic reviews were systematically and independently reviewed by two reviewers” (lines 149-150). What does ‘reviewed’ mean in the context of data extraction? Did you use any software to support data extraction (eg Microsoft Excel)? Was a particular data extraction tool used? If so, how was the tool created / extraction headings selected? How were disagreements between the two reviewers addressed at point of extraction? Which two authors performed the extraction and synthesis? Results Figure 1 uses an outdated version of the PRISMA diagram, please update it to the current version. You state that out of 91 studies included in the four reviews, there were 24 duplications. Do you know why there were so few (relatively) duplicates? Eg did the reviews have different search criteria or research questions? (this may be more relevant to reflect upon in the discussion than results) The sentence starting on line 197, “These reviews included 28…” is hard to follow, please rephrase. Line 201, “performed in the past 4[sic] years” would perhaps be better phrased as “performed in the latter four years of the study. Note that 2014-2018 is a five year period (14, 15, 16, 17, 18) – either amend to a latter five years or change to 2015-2018, whichever is accurate. There are typos in the results, please proof read the full paper though I’ve tried to spot some. Line 254, Kydonaki needs to be capitalised. Line 264, “these” should be “this” and the sentence should continue immediately after the previous sentence. Discussion The third paragraph starting on line 316, “The findings of our study…” would be better placed at the end of the first paragraph. You say that meta analysis wasn’t possible, but how do you know when you didn’t assess the individual studies yourself? Do you mean a meta-analysis of the systematic reviews’ data? This should be made clearer, as well as the potential and/or uncertainty around whether a meta-analysis of individual studies would be possible. Also consider making it clear that the judgement of studies being highly heterogeneous wasn’t yours (as you didn’t assess this for individual studies) but rather from the reviews themselves. You state that almost all studies were in paediatric settings or critical care settings; please state how many (as you’ve done for adult non-critical care settings). Line 323, “1” should be “one” (please check manuscript for all numbers of ten or less). Line 325, children being “under-age” appears colloquial. Perhaps just remove this and leave it as “cannot take decisions on their own”. I also think that you should engage with debate about whether children can or cannot make informed decisions about their care as you appear to uncritically accept the statement that they cannot take decisions on their own. There’s an increasing body of work examining paediatric shared decision making in a broader context, though I’m unsure whether this has yet reached person centred ward rounds (may be an opportunity to better suggest it). Your final paragraph before the limitations begins to touch on this but not specifically in relation to paediatric involvement. Line 334-335, please rephrase “highlighted positively” as it’s unclear. Your final limitation, with only two of 67 studies being in Europe, arguably isn’t a limitation but rather one of the key findings from this review, that person centred ward rounds are yet to be properly studied in countries outside of the US. I think you should make more of this in your broader discussion rather than leaving it as a limitation. I understand it’s a grey area between being a finding and a limitation because only including papers written in English may have introduced this bias, but the general lack of English speaking countries (eg UK, Australia, Ireland) suggests that this is problem with either a) spread / adoption, or b) terminology (are there different terms used in other English speaking countries?). It would be good for you to consider and reflect upon these in the discussion, either earlier or if you decide to leave this in the limitations. [End of editor comments] Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 11 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. 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An examination of the value of FCR in learning disability would be useful as these individuals rely on care givers in their efforts to communicate. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Peta Jane Greaves ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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PONE-D-22-14357R1The added value of family-centered rounds in the hospital setting: A systematic review of systematic reviewsPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Woldring, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Thank you for the revision of your manuscript. Please find below the remarks and questions of the second reviewer. Can you please address them in order to proceed to acceptance? Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 16 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: You have addressed my comments satisfactorily.I have no concerns about this publication. I note your comments about the international status of this topic Reviewer #2: I would like to thank the editor and authors for this interesting paper on the added value of family-centered rounds in the hospital setting. This is an interesting topic with potential impact in clinical practice and for future research. The design of the study seems sound. A review protocol was registered a priori and PRISMA guidelines were followed. The search and study selection strategy are explained in detail. To increase reliability, the authors selected studies independently and if there was disagreement a third author was involved. Quality appraisal was performed rigorously using the AMSTAR checklist which is used for appraisal of systematic reviews of randomised and non-randomised studies of healthcare interventions. Data extraction was done in a systematic manner. However, I still have some comments on the presentation of the results in this systematic review. My remarks can be found below. 1 - I was wondering, since the aim of this systematic review is to investigate the added value of family-centered rounds without clearly defining ‘added value’ a priori, this could be a scoping review rather than a classic systematic review. Scoping systematic reviews are done to identify key characteristics or factors related to a concept and it seems that this corresponds with the aim of this study. However, I am not entirely sure that it is a scoping review because this review summarised the effects of FCRs on patient, family member, and healthcare professional outcomes. However, I could not find the actual effect sizes and corresponding levels of uncertainty in this study which is common in a classic systematic review. Could the authors please explain which design they followed and substantiate their decision? Another remark is that PROSPERO registration is not allowed for scoping reviews which could be an additional issue if the authors change the design. 2 - I would remove the sentence: “Four different categories emerged: communication and interaction, situational understanding, inclusion of family in the discussion making process, and relationship within the care situation.” from the method section. These are results and therefore do not belong there. 3 - Please cite the excluded studies (n=9) in the second last step of the PRISMA flow chart. This allows the reader to review these excluded studies. 4 - Table 3: Is it possible to provide the total number of participants per included review? A separate column specifying the different outcomes studied would also be helpful. The ‘target population’ is in my opinion the ‘setting’ since the population could be healthcare workers, patients and/or family. 5 - In a systematic review of systematic reviews summary results should be presented per included systematic review in a summary of findings table. The authors stated that included studies were too heterogeneous in their methodology and outcome measures, making it impossible to perform meta-analyses. And I do agree that this is the case here. However, the authors could decide to report effect sizes and corresponding levels of uncertainty per type of outcome for each category (e.g., family member satisfaction) in a table. If necessary, the different definitions of outcomes could be provided next to the results. Moreover, the authors could decide to select studies with a certain level of evidence (e.g. RCTs and/or quasi-experimental research) and provide a table with the respective effect sizes per outcome measure. I think it would be interesting to present some numbers in this systematic review. 6 - p20. The authors state: “However, in the current context of healthcare, with the growing number of care needs and increased complexity of care, the involvement of family caregivers is desirable and necessary. Current healthcare systems are increasingly relying on family members to take on care responsibilities. This is also true for a wide variety of adult patients and not strictly for the most seriously ill, unresponsive ones or those without decision-making capacity [69].” Yes, this is true. However, isn’t an increased reliance on family members because of shortages in professional caregivers a negative evolution? The authors should nuance their message here or at least provide some more explanation. I do not think that the argument is entirely correct, and this statement is repeated in the conclusion (In the light of the current challenges in healthcare, FCRs seem to be highly relevant for adult non-critical care patients as well.) 7 - An important limitation of this review is the limited focus on the added value of FCRs. The authors acknowledge this in the discussion and mention that implementation should be studied. However, could this be more substantiated with relevant literature? ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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