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PONE-D-22-34514Effects of facial skin pigmentation on social judgments in a Mexican populationPLOS ONE Dear Dr. G-Santoyo, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The manuscript has been evaluated by three reviewers, and their comments are available below. The reviewers have raised a number of concerns that need attention. The main issues raised are:*Mixing of evolutionary concepts with social factors (e.g many of the examined variables have a social dimension, and/or derive from learned stereotyping, and societal constructs yet are framed from a biological evolutionary point of view) *Lack of contextualisation and separation of the underlying theories used in the model *Participants are not evenly sampled across the selected populations, this limitation needs to be acknowledged*Clarification of statistical choices Could you please carefully revise the manuscript to address all comments raised? Please submit your revised manuscript by May 11 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Instead, they can be used to a great extent when writing the introduction and discussion for the article. This will enrich the article with a different theoretical perspective, which I encourage the authors to consider. The other reviewers are much more positive about the work, although one of them has raised several statistical questions. Please provide responses to those questions." [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Review for PLOS One Effects of Facial Skin Pigmentation on Social Judgement in a Mexican Population This is an important topic. The increasing interest and research on the topic is largely about the growing acknowledgment of the importance of race and color in Mexican society, by scientists and the general population. However, this analysis though seems to be largely of an evolutionary biological view with only a nod to ongoing racism and discrimination. Indeed, I could not find any use of “racism” but rather the use of “colorism.” When colorism is acknowledged, the authors usually refer to historical colorism under colonialization, which is learned across generations. As if racism and discrimination no longer exist. There is no consideration of the role of a Western ideology of race and racism and particularly, how Mexican elites, narratives, media, etc, shaped an ideology of mestizaje, which downplayed racism. See a considerable and growing literature by Patricio Solis, Regina Martinez Casas, Alan Knight and several others that shows the history of race in Mexico and how individuals use color to evaluate others in the labor market and other arenas. Indeed, the authors cite the PERLA studies but seem to overlook its findings about discrimination and inequality. Contrary to their claim that a social classification system based on phenotype no longer exists (p.5), these studies show that it is very profound in Mexican society, like it is throughout the Americas. I found it odd for, example, the claim that indigenous women chose to mate with Spanish men simply because they wanted to give their offspring better chances. What about the role of power or even rape? The authors focus on the evaluations according to particular personality dimensions. They should consider the role of stereotypes as in how indigenous people are considered ugly -score low on attractiveness (note the recent reactions to the actress Yalitza Aparicio) and stereotypes about not being trusted and being sickly (two other dimensions studied). These findings are consistent with the use of ethnic/racial stereotypes. Aggresiveness may also be according to the idea of indigenous as savages. The dimensions of masculinity and dominance are less clear. Racism and stereotypes about indigenous people should certainly be considered at least as a hypothesis, which may compete with hypotheses about social learning, etc. The color ratings of the European faces is also consistent with ratings as they may appear more indigenous. As far as the analysis, I think it is mostly well done but I am surprised that the color or the ethnicity of the raters was not controlled (See Hill, Mark E. "Race of the interviewer and perception of skin color: Evidence from the multi-city study of urban inequality." American Sociological Review (2002): 99-108. The authors claim that the rater color was concentrated in a few colors and so they didn’t control that. I don’t understand why that should be important. Also, if raters are indigenous, they may evaluate in a different way. By the way, there seems to be a hesitancy to call the Me’Pha “indigenous.” For these Mexican raters, I imagine stereotypes are based on indigeneity and they may have little or no familiarity with that particular ethnic group. I would refer to raters as “raters” or “participant raters rather than “participants.” Reviewer #2: This is an interesting study that certainly deserves publication. Its main difficulty is that of distinguishing between gendered and ethnic significations of skin color. The two have long coexisted in Mexican society. The authors have tried to control for ethnic significations by varying skin color within each ethnic group. The results of that strategy are mixed. It seems to me that ethnic significations contaminated the raters’ perceptions of the European American faces to a greater degree than they contaminated the raters’ perceptions of the Me’Phaa faces. There are a few errors: - The reference to Green and Martin (1990) does not support footnote #27 - The adjective “perceived” should be used in all of the headings, and not just “perceived health.” All of the qualities are perceived. - Since perceived aggressiveness did not differ significantly between the two groups of faces, it should not be presented in the Discussion section as a perceived quality that differs between the two groups. In general, the wording is awkward. I would suggest the following corrections: Lines 83- 93 – replace the four sentences with: “The main pigments—melanin, hemoglobin, and carotenoids—absorb and reflect different wavelengths of light within the visible spectrum. Collagen also contributes by scattering light [10]. The skin’s pigments vary not only between individuals and populations but also between men and women, perhaps because of sexual selection [11]. Natural selection initially favored darker skin as a means to protect against the harmful effects of UV radiation in the tropics. The pressure of selection then shifted toward lighter skin among those humans who spread into higher latitudes with lower levels of UV [12-14]” Footnote #10 – add: Edwards, E.A., and S.Q. Duntley. (1939). The pigments and color of living human skin. American Journal of Anatomy 65(1): 1-33. https://doi.org/10.1002/aja.1000650102 Line 102 – replace “others” with “other” Line 110 – replace “preference honestly contributed to reproductive outcomes” with: “preference significantly contributes to reproductive success” Lines 128-140 – replace with: “The sex difference is due to exposure of skin tissues to differing ratios of androgens to estrogens, particularly at puberty. Testosterone has a stronger effect than estrogen on melanin synthesis and vascularization of the upper dermis [26].” Footnote #26 - add: Edwards EA, Hamilton JB, Duntley SQ, Hubert G. Cutaneous vascular and pigmentary changes in castrate and eunuchoid men. Endocrinology 1941; 28(1): 119-128. doi:10.1210/endo-28-1-119 Manning JT, Bundred PE, Mather FM. Second to fourth digit ratio, sexual selection, and skin colour. Evolution and Human Behavior 2004; 25(1): 38-50. doi:10.1016/s1090-5138(03)00082-5 Footnote #27 - the reference to Green and Martin (1990) does not support the statement that “males undergo a more intense facultative pigmentation after sun exposure and retain it for longer periods than females whereas female skin lightens faster after a reduction in sun exposure.” Replace the reference to Green and Martin (1990) with: Harvey RG. Ecological factors in skin color variation among Papua New Guineans, American Journal of Physical Anthropology 1985; 66(4): 407-416. doi:10.1002/ajpa.1330660409 Footnotes #28-30 - add: Frost P. Preference for darker faces in photographs at different phases of the menstrual cycle: Preliminary assessment of evidence for a hormonal relationship. Perceptual and Motor Skills 1994; 79(1): 507-14. doi:10.2466/pms.1994.79.1.507 Line 140 – replace “have” with “has” Line 148 – replace “no-WEIRD” with “non-WEIRD” Lines 151-152 – replace with: “In this study, we used an experimental design with a Mexican population to determine whether facial skin color can influence certain social perceptions: attractiveness, …” Line 155 – replace “To accomplish this” with “To that end” Line 164 – delete the extra comma after “perceptions” Line 193 – replace “create” with “created” Line 240 – replace “into” with “within” Line 253 – replace “prevent” with “made sure” Line 254 – insert “not” after “were” Line 256 – replace “on” with “of” Lines 259-261 – replace with: “… version. In other words, we compared natural European American faces with artificial light-skinned and dark-skinned versions and natural Me’Phaa faces with artificial light-skinned and dark-skinned versions. We could thus measure how the participants perceived differences in facial color independently of the face’s ethnicity.” Line 264 – replace “in” with “on” Line 272 – replace “men participants” with “the male participants” Line 281 – replace “be” with “have been” Line 285 – replace “in” with “on the” Line 329 – replace “Attractiveness” with “Perceived attractiveness” Line 330 – replace with: “Perceived attractiveness differed significantly between the two groups when they had their natural skin color” Line 331 – replace “as” with “more” Line 332 – replace “as” with “than” Lines 332-333 – replace with: “Furthermore, there were effects when natural skin color was changed within each of the two groups. Lightening the Me’Phaa faces made them more attractive (…), and darkening the European American faces made them less attractive (…). Both groups became slightly more attractive when skin color and skin texture were homogenized (…). Lines 343-344 – replace “men participants” with “the male participants” Lines 344-345 – replace “women participants” with “did the female participants” Table 2 - replace “Models estimates” with “Perception estimates” - Replace “Attractiveness perception” with “Perceived attractiveness” - Replace “Trustworthiness perception” with “Perceived trustworthiness” - Replace “Dominance perception” with “Perceived dominance” - Replace “Aggressiveness perception” with “Perceived aggressiveness” - Replace “Masculinity perception” with “Perceived masculinity” Line 357 – replace “Trustworthiness” with “Perceived trustworthiness” Line 359 – replace “as” with “more” Line 360 – replace “as” with “than” Line 361-363 – replace with: “In addition, lightening the Me’Phaa faces increased their perceived trustworthiness (…), whereas darkening the European American faces had no effect” Line 383 – replace “Perceived health” with “Perceived healthiness” Line 384 – replace “As in” with “As with” Lines 386-394 – replace with: “On average, natural European American faces were perceived as being 1.19 times healthier (…) than natural Me’Phaa faces (…). When facial skin color was changed within each ethnic group, the changes had different effects on perceptions of the two groups. Lightening the Me’Phaa faces increased their perceived health (…), whereas darkening the European American faces had no effect (…). Perceived health increased slightly for both groups when skin color and skin texture were homogenized. Line 409 – replace “Dominance” with “Perceived dominance” Lines 410-411 – replace with: “Unlike the previous qualities, perceived dominance was lower for European American faces that had their natural skin color” Lines 413-416 – replace with: “in contrast to perceived attractiveness, all faces received a lower dominance rating from male participants (…) than from female participants (…). Finally, we were unable to determine any effect from lightening, darkening, or homogenizing the faces, since these predictors …” Line 420 – replace “Aggressiveness” with “Perceived aggressiveness” Lines 421- 427 – replace with: “Although perceived aggressiveness was lower for the European American faces, the difference was not significant (…). Lightening the Me’Phaa faces made them seem less aggressive (…), but darkening the European American faces also made them seem less aggressive (…). Finally, perceived aggressiveness did not change for either group when skin color and skin texture were homogenized (…)” Line 442 – replace “Masculinity” with “Perceived masculinity” Lines 443-450 – “As with perceived dominance, perceived masculinity was lower for natural European American faces (…) than for natural Me’Phaa faces (…). Lightening the Me’Phaa faces made them seem less masculine (…), but darkening the European American faces had no effect (…). In addition, perceived masculinity did not change for either group when skin color and skin texture were homogenized (…).” Lines 469-472 (sentence) – replace with: “In comparison with natural Me’Phaa faces, natural European American faces were perceived not only as more attractive, healthier, and more trustworthy but also as less dominant and less masculine. They were furthermore perceived as less aggressive, but not significantly so.” Lines 484-486 – replace with: “… Mexican participants rated light-skinned faces more highly on all three aspects of social valence (attractiveness, healthiness, trustworthiness). In contrast, they rated dark-skinned faces more highly on two aspects of social dominance (dominance, masculinity). Line 493 – replace “well-remunerated” with “well-paid” Lines 495-498 (sentence) – “Consequently, a learned association between a physical trait—in this case, light skin—and social deference might establish such a perception in a population over several generations” Line 498 – replace “learning association” with “learned association” Lines 505-507 (sentence) – replace with: “Also, in Mexico and other Latin American countries, lightness of skin correlates with years of schooling, hourly earnings, and other indicators of well-being.” Line 511 – replace “dark skin color faces” with “dark-skinned faces” Lines 512-513 - replace “dark skin color faces” with “dark-skinned faces” Line 516 – replace the comma before “therefore” with a semi-colon Line 518 – insert “sexually” before “dimorphic” Lines 528-535 – Replace with: “For example, lightening the Me’Phaa faces made them seem more attractive, healthier, and more trustworthy. Conversely, darkening the European American faces made them seem less attractive. Other perceived qualities, however, did not change systematically when facial skin color was changed. Perceived dominance did not change when changes were made to facial skin color within either group. Lightening the Me’Phaa faces decreased their perceived masculinity and aggressiveness, but darkening the European American faces did not increase their perceived masculinity and aggressiveness.” Lines 541-557 - Replace with: “Moreover, we not only lightened and darkened facial color but also homogenized it by removing such texture-related aspects as spots, freckles, or wrinkles […]. Our results suggest that skin texture does have an effect, particularly on perceived health. That effect, however, largely exists independently of the effects of skin color. Skin texture might nonetheless interact with skin color in perceptions of light and dark skin, and such interactions could be an exciting avenue for further studies. In addition, unlike the authors of previous studies, we manipulated overall skin color instead of gradually changing each of its aspects (e.g., luminosity, hue) […]. Future studies could examine how each aspect of skin color contributes to the way a population is perceived.” Lines 558-574 - replace with: “In summary, we show that the Mexican population uses facial color to make certain social judgments. We found that a dark-skinned face is perceived as more dominant and more masculine. Those perceptions may be due to a process of coevolution between the human mind and the sex difference in skin color. One may therefore infer that male skin became darker through male-male competition rather than through female choice. We also found that a light-skinned face is perceived as more attractive, more trustworthy, and healthier. Those perceptions may be due to the association between skin color and social status that prevailed in Mexico during more than three centuries of colonial rule. Today, they are maintained by colorism. We are nonetheless speculating, and more data will be needed. Similar results could be obtained from other Latin American societies, which share a common colonial history and social structure.” Reviewer #3: The study was interested in the association between skin colour and ascribed characteristics. Because of biological adaptations, colonialism, and ethnical stereotypes, it is justified to study the effect of human skin colouration on ascribing characteristics, especially in non-WEIRD countries. The authors combine a natural experiment (in Mexico, there are people(s) of different ethnicities with varying level of skin pigmentation) and artificial manipulation of skin colouration. Fortunately, this has been done using CIELab colour space, in a relatively correct way (any manipulation presents a risk of entering an artifact to the system; no way to overcome that, however). When contrasted with faces of native Mexican pre-Colombian group Me´Phaa, non-manipulated male faces of European origin were rated as more attractive, healthier, and more trustworthy by heterosexual raters. Me´Phaa unmanipulated faces were perceived as more dominant, masculine, and aggressive looking. There were also effects derived from experimental skin colour manipulation, as applied by the authors: Artificial lightening of the skin colour in Me´phaa has led to higher rating of attractiveness, trustworthiness, and perceived health in the sample of the study. In the faces of European origin (‘European Americans’) the skin colour change from lighter to darker led to lower ascribed attractiveness. While the effect of skin colour manipulation was thus in the anticipated direction, it did not affect each of the considered perceived characteristics. Overall, the study is in my opinion concise. Given the number of independent tests, it is quite surprising, nonetheless, I was able to keep in mind its whole scope while reading; the manuscript did not collapse into a list of tests without any internal reference and inter-relationship. The overall positive impression is also promoted by detailed report on the fitted models, availability of the script and data. It seems like a good craft (although I must admit that I have not checked if the ‘necessary’ rituals of frequentist statistics have been gone through by the authors). While I recommend to study for acceptance (this being their final destiny), I still find some aspects of it problematic – and I think these should be considered at least by extending/re-writing some paragraphs within this otherwise good manuscript. Major objection 1: Why Poisson? First, I wonder, why the authors decided to use generalised linear model with the family set to "Poisson". The expectation that the dataset (data of the dependent variable) comes from Poisson distribution is not commented on in the manuscript. Picking 1-9 points is, in my opinion, not a count of rare events within interval (of whatever kind; how the parameters of such a distribution may be set?). While this objection may seem serious, it is not the case (given my expectations about the "intestines" of glm fit that are above the scope of the current text). Nonetheless, the authors should either justify their decision (maybe I am just wrong, and I'd appreciate being proven so, since this may positively affect my own subsequent work) or consider using different distribution for the dependent variable’s population, which has been sampled. Virtually any setting of this parameter is unlikely to change the results substantially (empirically derived ‘rule of thumb’) and rejecting the manuscript on the ground of it would not be justified. My understanding of using glm is to link the linear model (with the application of the proper link function) to a data (dependent variable) that cannot be treated as derived from a normal distribution (within given population). I do not deny that it is an over-generalisation to use gaussian (normal) distribution for a rating on discontinuous scale from 1 to 9. However, there are some methods, how to overcome this issue: (0) Ignore it and go Gaussian, which you probably decided not to. (1) To use ordered logit link function. Thus, the fact that you have ordinal dependent variable may be acknowledged. This method allows to consider both linear overall trend and eventual non-linear association across the levels of the Likert scale. (2) Use different rating scale (0-100). In this case, set the family= argument to gaussian in glm function (or any of its analogues that consider both individual-varying and fixed-overall estimated coefficients) is not such a big "transgression". Human ratings should come from some symmetric unimodal distribution, I guess. I do not force you to so and ask the editor to not consider this note as a suggestion for the present study (no more data collection – for now, to keep 1-9 Likert scale is okay!). However, different scale (0-100) may help in the future studies. (3) (Almost) Lastly, any kind of ‘non-parametric’ methods or methods outside the frequentist statistics may be also helpful for future studies. (4) Last but not least: How about central limit theorem? Once treating a single male’s face rating in this set as an estimate (one of many) of the ratings ascribed to his face in general population, you may suppose that the dependent variable is of gaussian distribution. I anticipate that you are better frequentist statistician than me. Please, consider thus adding a paragraph to better explain your decision about the fitted models. You, the authors, may be right, I just miss the explanation. Using model selection, AIC, etc. is IMHO okay, however, the sole fact that your ‘best’ (most parsimonious model) does not, in the case of dominance, contains skin colour manipulation as a credible (significant) predictor, necessarily imply that you would not show the estimates to the reader. Since your aim is to study the association between skin colour and ascribed characteristics (and despite the study is by its nature experimental) the explored associations shall be listed as a complete set. Major objection 2: Culture vs… and biology vs… (?) Another serious notion that shall be considered during revisions, refer to the lines 163-173 of the manuscript. I put aside that the sentences are long and hard to follow. I have the following concerns: The authors begin by stating that lighter skin that is naturally associated with a given ethnicity may be a cue to favourable characteristic (as they are stereotypically ascribed to a face, not to its colouration itself – colour is cue to ethnicity, which affect the ascribed characteristics). However, the opposite hypothesis would read: Maybe, it does not matter if the face is European/Native American (I mean, the origin of the face) and what matters is lightness (as an exact measure). This contrasting view (while I acknowledge cannot be directly addressed in this study) is not applied here. The authors rather switch from cultural to biological explanation: once the face is darker, it is perceived as more attractive, also dominant, aggressive, etc., due to androgens. Together, this seems for me to not make much sense. Consider rewriting this paragraph (even if it is just to help slow-minded readers, which I eventually may be, to understand). Minor notes: "There was no effect of the skin color manipulation or color exchange [for the perceived dominance] in any group.” This is a surprising result, given the previously identified positive association between darker skin and dominance-related characteristics like masculinity. I suggest the authors to add a paragraph in the discussion in which they comment on the result. Consider the opposite result for perceived aggressiveness, which was not significantly affected by the ethnicity in non-manipulated faces, while it was affected by skin colour manipulation in both the groups in the anticipated direction (the same applies for masculinity). There were also some typos (maybe as much as two or three) within the manuscript. Consider not adding any other, since you are currently well below usual load of typeset errors for a manuscript. Thank your for the option to read the manuscript. Looking forward to its updated version. Yours sincerely, Vojtech Fiala ********** 6. 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PONE-D-22-34514R1Effects of facial skin pigmentation on social judgments in a Mexican populationPLOS ONE Dear Dr. G-Santoyo, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 27 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Kaida Xiao Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #4: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Partly ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This revision is an improvement but there are still two problems. The first is correctable and I am not sure about the second: 1. The study focuses on the evolutionary role of skin color in Mexican society. However, they hardly engage with the metaphorical “elephant in the room:” current societal skin color inequality and discrimination. While the literature review acknowledges societal inequalities based on skin color, mostly in the social psychology and sociological literature, the authors do not discuss how it fits with their own findings. Except for mentioning this literature (not until pages 5-6), there is no serious engagement. How do their finding co-exist with those of racial attitudes, stereotyping and racial inequality? The abstract, for example, does not even mention that. I expect that readers would want to know how these evolutionary findings may complement (or not) the social science findings. For example, I see complementarity in how the findings are consistent with stereotypes of indigenous people. 2. My other comment is on the methods, which have implications for the substantive interpretations. Reviewers 2 and 3 also seem to have alluded to this. The authors claim that there is no information about the ethnicity of the stimuli subjects but that in one treatment, only skin color and not facial features, was changed. But skin color is the information! Darker skin color in Mexico suggests that persons are more indigenous. Note that skin color, like indigeneity, is fluid and on a continuum, especially between mestizos and indigenous people (see for example Villarreal 2013 in the American Sociological Review and Flores et al 2023 in the American Journal of Sociology). Note that colorism is a subset of racism. It only exists because of racism. Racism has been a dominant ideology in the Western World for the past centuries, structuring how we think of others and sort them in our stratification systems. Mexican society is not exempt of course. This is the elephant in the room that needs to be engaged. Reviewer #2: The manuscript could be better written. I have attached a corrected version of the PDF (see pages 16 to 51). Otherwise, I have no issues with the revised manuscript. Reviewer #3: (No Response) Reviewer #4: The topic is quite important. The present study adds to the growing body of studies addressing the importance of skin colour on facial perceptions and provides important psychophysical data collected from Mexican populations, which hasn’t been revealed before. The revision of the present paper has been improved a lot from the perspective of sociology, anthropology, and human Evolution. Whereas there are still some concerns that need to be addressed related to the colour parameter setting, image colour manipulations, data analysis, conclusions and discussions, etc. The paper could be published once the below issues are solved. 1. It’s a bit surprising that Lightness (L*) is the only parameter considered in this study whereas the aim is to investigate the influence of skin pigmentation on social judgments. Obviously, the reason given in line 222 (lightness has a negative correlation with melanin) is not rational. In fact, melanin pigmentation is not only negatively affects the skin’s lightness, but possibly even more strongly and positively linked to skin yellowness. And it also influences skin redness. See for example the below reference. There are also other skin pigmentations. If it’s only lightness (L*) is investigated, the title and the scope should be restricted to the effect of ‘skin lightness’ not ‘skin pigmentation‘, on facial impressions. Otherwise, it’s not fair to study the influence of skin colour on facial impressions only based on L* values. “Fruit over sunbed: Carotenoid skin colouration is found more attractive than melanin colouration,” Q. J. Exp. Psychol., vol. 68, no. 2, pp. 284–293, Feb. 2015, doi: 10.1080/17470218.2014.944194. Kikuchi, Kumiko, et al. "Image analysis of skin colour heterogeneity focusing on skin chromophores and the age‐related changes in facial skin." Skin Research and Technology 21.2 (2015): 175-183. 2. The creation of facial stimuli is unusual. Two averaged faces were created first and then the selected eight facial stimuli were either added or subtracted from the averaged face. Is there any reason for doing that? It is also not clear how the skin colour manipulation was done (lines 233-242). As the selected eight faces have different face shapes/ features/ colours/ colour distributions from the prototype, how the colour was added or subtracted without holding the facial shape unchanged? Whether the colour change was also applied to the facial features (eyes, mouth, brows). Any process for those facial features? Why was 70 per cent particularly selected? What software was used? It would be helpful to specify the detailed process. 3. Apart from lightness (L*), the facial stimuli seem to show a large difference in yellowness (b*). Is that true? Since authors already ‘measured its skin colour values in CIELab colour space (line 218)’, it would be necessary to show the colour parameters in CLELAB colour space (including L*, a*, and b*) for all the face stimuli from both European American and Me’phaa groups, not just L*. 4. It’s not clear about the colour information of facial stimuli. Whether the facial stimuli used in this study could represent the naturally occurring skin colour variations in the two populations, European American and Me’phaa. The average colour or the prototype is not enough as the variations within the same ethnic group are usually larger than the variations across the two ethnic groups. See the below reference. Thus it would be very helpful to show the evolutionary meaningful skin colour range and variation of the real human faces from those two groups. “Characterising the variations in ethnic skin colours: a new calibrated database for human skin,” Ski. Res. Technol., vol. 23, no. 1, pp. 21–29, Feb. 2017, doi: 10.1111/srt.12295. 5. Line 240-242: ‘The average lightness value was L* = 66.74, SD = 1.37 in the light skin colour transformed versions and L* = 52.75, SD = 2.58 in the dark skin colour transformed versions.’ Are the light versions include both light European American and light Me’phaa faces and the dark versions include both dark European American and dark Me’phaa faces? If so, the standard deviation looks very small. Does that mean the European American and Me’phaa faces have the same lightness levels after manipulations? How does that come if both their original lightness and the prototype are different? It’s better to give the actual colour distributions of the 48 face stimuli, not only the average lightness values. 6. It looks like the same facial stimuli changed not only the skin colour but also some other facial appearance traits after manipulations. E.g. in the below, the stimuli FC16, FC16co, and FC16cb are manipulated versions from the same original face, FC10, FC10cb, FC10co are from the same face. If that’s the case, it looks like the beard completely changed after the colour changed, especially for the light version, the beard disappeared in the meantime. Those appearance traits could significantly influence sexual dimorphism and are even more sexually dimorphic traits than skin colour, and thus affect social judgements, especially judgements from the other gender. 7. The facial gloss could have a big influence on the lightness measurement results based on image methods. E.g. the stimulus FI15 below seems to have a considerable area of highlight. Within these areas, the colour could be completely different from the normal skin colour. Any considerations regarding the facial gloss issue? And how was the gloss morphed into different colour versions? 8. Images were captured under different environments and camera settings. It would be good to give information on settings, such as the white balance, CCT, ISO, aperture size, shutter speed, image formats (raw or post-processed), any colour characterisation process, etc. 9. During the experiments, participants were asked to rate the face without particular restriction or focus, e.g. based on the facial skin colour. In such a case, it’s only meaningful to compare the rating of the lighter, natural, and darker versions of the same face. It’s not reasonable to compare different faces or faces of different ethnic groups as the influence of structural facial traits is tangled together. However, those structural facial traits are not quantified or included in the analysis. in fact, previous studies show colour is less important than the structural facial traits in face perceptions. Meanwhile, various facial colour cues may be involved in face perceptions. See the reference below. E.g. the skin colour variation may matter a lot (homogeneous skin is preferred), which links to the colour and texture homogenization mentioned in the current study. Are there any considerations in the data analysis related to those confounding variables in visual stimuli? “Different colour predictions of facial preference by Caucasian and Chinese observers,” Sci. Rep., vol. 12, no. 1, p. 12194, Jul. 2022, doi: 10.1038/s41598-022-15951-8. 10. In the linear mixed effect model, the face colour was coded as categorical variable. But the same colour category has different lightness levels, e.g. the natural European American face and the natural Me’phaa face have different L*, and the lighter versions of different faces have different L*... Why not use the actual lightness (L*) value as a continuous variable in the lme analysis? Actual lightness value could be a more accurate measure for assessing the effect of skin lightness on impression judgements. The fixed effect of other colour parameters, such as a* and b*, could be included in the lme analysis as well. 11. What’s the observer variation? Any evaluation of the consistency across different raters. 12. Are there any differences in the results rated by mestizo participants and European participants? Is there any effect of the participants’ ethnicity on ratings? 13. What’s the relationship between participants’ self-perceived skin colour ratings and their actual skin colour? Has their skin colour ever been measured by instruments like spectrophotometers? There might be a mismatch between self-reported and measured values. 14. It would be interesting to know whether there are any significant differences in the structural facial traits (facial shapes and facial features) between the European American and Me’phaa faces, and what are the differences. It might be good to give some evidence based on the image database used in the present study. 15. Both the abstract line 51-53 (‘We found that….faces of …were.. more attractive….’ ) and the discussion line 476-479 (‘In comparison with….’. ) gives an unreasonable conclusion. This conclusion is not justifying the effect of skin colour on facial impression but makes judgements which are out of the scope of the current study. It’s hard to tell whether those comparisons were made based on the L* or other skin colour information or texture or the structural facial traits of the two ethnic groups. From what has been written, the scope of this study is to understand the role of skin lightness on face perceptions, not to compare the attractiveness of the two different ethnic faces. And it’s not rational to make those comparisons on the bases of very different both structural facial traits and colour traits. 16. Similar issues for those statements in the results part: European American faces were rated ‘x times’ more attractive/trustworthy… than Me’phaa faces. Current data and analysis can only show the effect of skin colour, but cannot tell whether those ‘x times’ come from colour or other factors, also cannot prove the link between ‘which ethnic face is more attractive’ and ‘colour plays a role in it’. 17. Whether the current results lead to the hypothesis? Skin colour preference/social preference also includes some mainstream aesthetic criteria, e.g. tanning skin is preferred in Western countries while whitening skin is preferred in Eastern countries, which may have nothing to do with racism or discrimination. Have these factors been considered in the current study? From the current data and analysis, it seems to be hard to elucidate the convincing mechanisms or drives behind the phenomenon. More survey and investigation is needed to know the clear answer. 18. Are there any considerations related to the adaptation to the living environment? Raters might be exposed to different environments composed of a variety of coloured faces. The long-term adaptation to the environment might influence their perceptions. It might be helpful to provide some evidence or data about the variety/proportions of faces in the participants’ living environment. 19. Line 90: it would be more precise to say ‘lower and more seasonal UVR’. ********** 7. 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