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PONE-D-22-11714The neural correlates of context driven changes in the emotional response: an fMRI studyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Kökönyei, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. When revising your manuscript, please in particular ensure you address the comments raised below regarding reporting details of the methodology and data. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 20 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: OVERALL IMPRESSION The authors have investigated the neural correlates of emotional flexibility. The paper is innovative with its two focal points combined in one study: the effect of context and the direction of emotion regulation. Below, please find some suggestions to improve the manuscript. SPECIFIC COMMENTS ABSTRACT 1. As the direction of emotion regulation is a key aspect in the study (besides the effect of context), I recommend to clarify it in the abstract (before line 36, in which a ‘shift from positive to negative valence’ is mentioned). 2. It is unclear in the abstract (but clear in the main text) why facial emotional processing and responsible brain regions are relevant. (Because the decontextualized details of the pictures are faces.) It would be great to clarify it in the abstract. 3. Brain structures are identified while the authors report the results in the abstract, except for line 34 where funtions are mentioned (‘areas involved in facial emotional processing and affective mentalizing’). Some important regions could be added here. INTRODUCTION 4. Why is it an upregulation to have a positive first picture followed by a positive second picture? Does the valence rating increase (i.e., valence for the second picture with context > valence for the first picture without context? It seems to be ‘only’ a consistency between first and second picture compared to the inconsist trials (negative first picture – positive second picture and vice verse). (see from line 122 - Table 1). Of course, the Results part gives an answer to the question above, but there is a slight inconsistency in using terms in different parts of the manuscript, such as upregulation, shifting, context effect. Please, correct it. METHODS 5. Lines 156 – 159: Although, I understand that Reference #29 contains the methodological background of EST, it would be useful to add some more information about the stimulus material (e.g., database, ID number of selected pictures; selection criteria for depicting social scenes/faces/emotional expression etc). 6. Was the smaller detail of the pairs of picture (contextualized) always a face/facial expression? If yes, it would be great to clarify it in the text. (lines 156-159). 7. Line 159: What was the purpose of the happy/sad emojis? Please, add a short explanation. RESULTS 8. Lines 193-194 and 241-242: Please, check the valence ratings in the non-shift condition (S1 Table: 5.850 vs 6.129), if there is a significant difference between them. (This difference seems to be too small.) 9. Lines 251-252 and S1 Table: The changes in valence ratings are in the focus of the study, however, it is very interesting that arousal ratings are always higher for the second pictures than for the first ones. What could be the reason for that? Do you have an explanation? DISCUSSION 10. Lines 338-342: Please, explain the top-down manner of changes in valence and arousal (due to the context) more detailed. 11. Lines 472-473: It is unclear, what is the exact limitation related to the pictures (from IAPS database and the collected pictures from the internet)? IN SUM This is a well-designed, innovative fMRI-study to explore the effect of context and valence. I recommend it for acceptance after minor changes. Reviewer #2: In this paper, the Authors aim to study the mechanisms of emotional flexibility (i.e., the change of emotional responses according to the context), performing both behavioral tests (valence, arousal, reaction times) and functional brain imaging (fMRI). Major comments: Line 359: Eye movements should be taken in consideration as a possible explanation of occipital activity; the Authors should mention the lack of eye movement recording among the limitations of the study "facial expression" appears quite late in the manuscript; it should be mentioned in Keywords and Abstract (and/or title?) The mask used in the analysis is mentioned in different manners: e.g., line 35 "explicit", line 131 "external", line 273 "exclusive"; the Authors should use consistently the most appropriate one and explain clearly what it means Table 1 not necessary, same concept is adequately explained in text Line 443: it should probably read "context"? Line 445: is it referred to "negative to negative", not " negative to positive"? Minor points: line 147: "standardized handedness questionnaire": commonly quoted as "Edimburgh inventory" Several language imperfections, too many to mention them all (the Authors should have the English checked throughout); some examples: line 38 ans 138: it should read "it resulted IN a" line 61: it should read: "pride instead of sadness" line 128: "/even": ? line 146 and 166: parenthesis missing line 151: "and were excluded with any history...": grammar!? line 187: "crosses were presented with variable duration" line 199: "Four hundred and nine volumes were acquired...." line 372: "inferring affective states OF others" line 376 and following: "Beyond its role ... reported arousal": grammar!? Reviewer #3: Biró et al., explored the neural correlates of emotional response during context shifting. This work links emotional context shift to changes in the BOLD response. This work may be of interest to communities investigating the role of context during emotional processing. I have comments and questions about the manuscript that need clarification. 1. I recommend that the authors review the grammar of the manuscript. Some errors disrupt the clarity of writing, e.g., hyphens (line 57, 118, 119, 415) and parentheses (line 88, 411, 430, 440) when not necessary. 2. Further, the authors should address the structure of the manuscript. There are several one-sentence paragraphs throughout the manuscript, e.g., lines 203, 241, 364, 393, 427, and 453. The flow of the introduction and discussion should be improved to paint a clearer picture of the existing literature and interpretation of the results. 3. On lines 245/256 the authors discuss the accuracy of participants' responses. The values in parentheses (mean: 22.93, range 19-24) do not seem to reflect the accuracy rate which leads me to believe they are an error, could the authors please explain these values? 4. In the methods section of the manuscript, the authors detail how behavioural data will be analysed with “descriptive and non-parametric statistics”. I suggest the authors use non-parametric tests where the assumptions for parametric tests have been violated and specify this in-text. Further, I assume non-parametric tests have been employed due to violation of normality, have the authors considered transforming the data to better fit the normal distribution? 5. It would be beneficial to the reader to specify the levels of the ANOVA in the results section. 6. In the supplementary material, table S2 specifies in the legend: “Different letters (a, b, c) represent significant (p < .05) difference between mean scores, whereas the same letters represent non-significant difference between mean scores according to the paired post hoc test of repeated measure of ANOVA". I find this difficult to follow and suggest the authors present all behavioural results as figures in-text, with significance denoted by asterisks. 7. When using acronyms, use the full term first followed by the acronym in parentheses, e.g., Theory of Mind (ToM). 8. There are details of stimuli selection from the International Affective Picture System (IAPS) in the discussion section, which is not included in the methods section of the manuscript. Please ensure any relevant information about the stimuli and/or task is included in the methods section. 9. The authors should ensure they use the same referencing style throughout the manuscript, e.g., lines 397- 399. 10. There are several small clusters after masking, e.g., cluster size = 2 for amygdala activation for positive pictures in a negative context > positive pictures without context. How can the authors be sure they are not over-interpreting small clusters? ********** 6. 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