Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionAugust 11, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-22136Association between Abdominal Obesity and Diabetic Retinopathy in Patients with Diabetes Mellitus: Systematic Review and Meta-analysisPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Liu, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 08 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Liu et al. conducted a study on “Association between Abdominal Obesity and Diabetic Retinopathy in Patients with Diabetes Mellitus: Systematic Review and Meta-analysis”, in which they explored the association between different parameters of abdominal obesity and the risk of diabetic retinopathy in diabetes mellitus patients. They found that waist circumference and waist-hip ratio were significant predictors of diabetic retinopathy while visceral fat area, lipid accumulation product and visceral adiposity index were not. In my opinion, this study may be improved by incorporating the following edits: 1. The authors frequently use acronyms such as DR, WC, WHR, WHtR, etc without first defining them in the text. The first usage of an acronym within the full-text should always be defined with its full form alongside the acronym in brackets. Please make these changes for all acronyms used in the article. Definitions made in this form in the abstract do not carry forward into the main text of the article and must be redefined. 2. The authors should consider rephrasing lines 42-44 to “Currently recognized risk factors affecting the development of DR include the duration of diabetes, elevated HbA1c, blood glucose, blood pressure, serum cholesterol, and low-density lipoprotein levels.” 3. In lines 58-59, the authors should consider removing the sentence, “Therefore, studies further clarifying the association between abdominal obesity and DR in diabetic patients is essential.” This sentence is not well-suited for the introduction and would be more appropriately placed in the discussion section if the authors feel that some aspects of the association they are exploring within this article are not adequately clarified despite the them performing a meta-analysis to this end. 4. The authors should clearly state within the introduction section that they are performing this meta-analysis to synthesize all current data and reach a definitive conclusion in order to address the contradictory and ambiguous current literature and clarify the situation at hand. 5. The authors should also clearly state the aims of this meta-analysis at the end of the introduction section. They should state the outcomes they seek to explore and ambiguities in the data they hope to resolve. 6. While the authors have provided adequate background knowledge regarding the field at hand in the introduction section, they have not appropriately contextualized the study in light of previous systematic reviews and meta-analyses exploring this association. Do previous systematic reviews or meta-analyses exploring this topic exist? If so, the authors should mention them and highlight why they believed it necessary to update them, and what additional utility the current study hopes to provide. If not, the authors should clearly state that this is the first study of its kind. 7. The authors should take care to highlight the novel features of the analyses they are undertaking in the introduction section. What makes this study unique and different from other studies exploring this association? Are the authors exploring any unique outcomes or do they perhaps hope to utilize any new analyses which would improve the accuracy and reliability of previous results? 8. In the methodology section, please clearly state what comparison or control group the authors are referring to for this study. 9. In lines 89-90, the authors state that “The search process was performed independently by two authors (SF and LZ).” Please clearly state how these authors resolved any disagreements. 10. In the search strategy portion of the methodology section, the authors should clarify if the search was performed with any language restrictions. If so, the authors should provide a compelling reason for this restriction. If not, the authors should clearly state that the search was performed with no language restrictions. 11. Please change lines 115-118 to “The quality of case-control and cohort studies was assessed by the Newcastle-Ottawa Scale (NOS), which contains eight items in three major sections: population selection, comparability, and exposure[18].” 12. In the search strategy portion of the methodology section, please clearly state that the articles were first screened on the basis of title and abstract, at which point any duplicates were removed, and the remaining articles were then sent for a full text review. 13. In line 122-123, the authors state that they used the I2 statistic to distinguish between using a random- and a fixed- effects model for their analysis. A suitable reference should be provided, justifying the usage of the I2 statistic in this manner. 14. In the methodology section, please clearly state that the analysis was used to generate forest plots which were then assessed for significance. 15. The “measurements and definitions” portion of the methodology section is somewhat ambiguous and confusing. Did they authors utilize these formulae in the present analysis? If so, then these formulae would be better placed in the statistical analysis section. If not, then extraneous information like the formulae should be removed from this section as they provide no additional utility and are not pertinent to the study at hand. 16. In line 141 please consider highlighting Figure 1 as the PRISMA flowchart. 17. In the results section, please add a summary statement about the results of the quality assessment. How many articles included in the analysis were of high methodological quality? 18. Lines 153-155 from “The results indicated….” are very poorly phrased which leads to significant ambiguity and confusion for the reader. The authors should revise and amend these lines for the sake of clarity and comprehension. 19. In lines 157-158, instead of stating that the “P value of Egger’s test was greater than 0.05”, the authors should simply mention that there was no publication bias significantly influencing the results of this analysis. 20. Please rephrase line 163 to “….. showed that no single study had a substantial effect on risk estimates” 21. The authors should also explore whether any significant heterogeneity was attributed to any single study and was perhaps resolved to the point of non-significance upon its removal. 22. Lines 164-166 “A total of six abdominal obesity evaluation indicators included in this meta-analysis were WC, WHR, WHtR, VFA, LAP, and VAI in 24 studies.” should be removed as they provide no additional information beyond what has already been provided previously. 23. Please provide figure and table legends and title and label all figures and legends appropriately within the text. 24. The authors should also provide a legend or index for the supplementary information. 25. Lines 190-191, please refrain from making statements commenting on the positivity or negativity of associations for statistically non-significant outcomes. 26. In the discussion section, please highlight the novelty of your findings. Were the results of the analysis unique and were they different from previous such analyses? If so, please provide a valid reason for this change in results. If not, please highlight the additional utility your findings may provide, either in the form of additional validation or simply being more up to date with current literature. 27. In the discussion section the authors should discuss the significance of their findings. How were these findings important? What do they demonstrate that may alter guidelines or inspire change in clinical or research practices in this field. The authors should also specifically mention any new avenues of research that have opened up as a result of this study. 28. The article contains many grammatical and language errors. While the most significant ones have been highlighted above, many still remain which make the article confusing for the reader. The authors should revise the writing and should take care to amend these grammatical and language errors for the sake of readability and comprehension. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Association between abdominal obesity and diabetic retinopathy in patients with diabetes mellitus: a systematic review and meta-analysis PONE-D-22-22136R1 Dear Dr. Liu, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Tariq Jamal Siddiqi Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Muhammad Talha Maniya Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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PONE-D-22-22136R1 Association between abdominal obesity and diabetic retinopathy in patients with diabetes mellitus: a systematic review and meta-analysis Dear Dr. Liu: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Tariq Jamal Siddiqi Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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