Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionDecember 11, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-33938The COVID-19 pandemic and its prolonged impacts on food prices, food consumption and diet quality in sub-Saharan AfricaPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Madzorera, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. In addition to addressing reviewers'' comments, please address the following comments as well:
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If your ethics statement is written in any section besides the Methods, please move it to the Methods section and delete it from any other section. Please ensure that your ethics statement is included in your manuscript, as the ethics statement entered into the online submission form will not be published alongside your manuscript. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: • I think the manuscript focused more on the diet quality rather than food price, as stated in Line 196. Therefore, I suggest to change the title to: “The COVID-19 pandemic and its impacts on diet quality and food prices in sub-Saharan Africa” • Line 69: in abstract, Dietary diversity score (DDS), should be mentioned in the Method used • Line 69-70 could be done as one sentence, no need for repetition (data collected) • Line 76-84: there is no need to write the numbers here, as they are mentioned inside the text, additional study results could be stated here • Introduction: was written systematically • Line 122-125: Reference order would be 12-13-14, not 12-14-13 • Line 150-151: All nine sites from the five countries (Figure 1) were included in the second round of data collection. (No need for repetition) • Line 160: Study design, is clearly described and detailed, still a sentence is needed to clearly stated the total sample size in each round as stated in line 273 • Line 195 and 217: It is mentioned that the diet diversity score (DDS) was computed, still the DDS results are not shown on the results and discussion sections • Line 204-205: In addition to mention previous study using PDQS, it is recommended to mention some studies used the same dependent variables to compare results • Line 242: head of household (yes or no) what does (Yes) indicates? More explanation is needed • Line 246: Wealth index, more elaboration is needed of factor analysis • Line 252: Why GEE was adopted as an analytical tool? A brief justification is needed, with model specification • Line 282 Table 1: for easy follow up and understanding, it is better to write only the percentage not numbers inside the Table • Line 299-303 and line 239: These questions (worried about food, skipped a meal, gone for an entire day without eating.) are related to food consumption behaviors which is one of the types of food security measurement. Therefore, it is better to rephrase the sentences to reflect that. The same comment is applicable to Table 2 • Line 314: Table 2: - There is no need to repeat “Impact of COVID-19” on the subheading as it was reflected of Table title. - Table title it is better to write five rather than 5. - Is there any significance difference between these percentages???? may be another test is required • Line 324: All figures numbers should be revised to match the figures attached at the end of the manuscript • Line 335: It is better to shorten the Fig 2 title • Lines 340 and 360: Also applicable to line 373 - “consumption of healthy PDQS food groups”, is it a right scientific terminology???? - Unit time is required with PDQS (week or 24 hrs) • Line 378-380: What is the source for data for” consumption of food groups at the time before the COVID-19 pandemic”, it should be stated in material and method section • Line 608: “2020;4:1401-.” Please delete the dash (-) at the end • Line 637: The publication year is missing Reviewer #2: The paper addresses an important recent topic and covered sub-researched countries in Africa. The writing is good and easy to follow; however, there is a need to improve some parts as discussed below. It would be also helpful if page number has been added to the document. Introduction: The introduction should clearly state the main contributions of the study to strengthen the argument and ensure the importance of this work related to other relevant studies. A clearly stated and well-defined contribution is the merit of any research. Authors only indicated “Therefore, it is important that as the COVID-19 pandemic persists we continue to assess its impact on the nutrition and health of the households in SSA (12).” Then, the authors have details the strengths of the work on page 39 in the discussion. These strengths /contributions should also be indicated in the introduction. Please add to the study design justification that the differences between the two samples/rounds will not cause issues in comparisons (across countries, across rounds if applicable) in the results section, especially that you conducted country-level differences in PDQS. Conclusion should include a summary of what the study is about, not only the outcomes. Minor comments are as follows: Table font is different than the text font and style. Texts in tables and figures should be in black to be more readable, it is in gray now. Page 22: “Loss of or reduced salaries” I think you meant “lost or reduced salaries” Page 23 and 24: Not sure what do “(not shown) and “(results not shown)” mean? If you meant the results are not shown in the Table, please state that clearly. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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The COVID-19 pandemic and its impacts on diet quality and food prices in sub-Saharan Africa PONE-D-22-33938R1 Dear Dr. Madzorera, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Mohammed Al-Mahish Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: The authors have adequately addressed my comments raised in a previous round of review. Thank you for addressing the comments and suggestions. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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PONE-D-22-33938R1 The COVID-19 pandemic and its impacts on diet quality and food prices in sub-Saharan Africa Dear Dr. Madzorera: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Mohammed Al-Mahish Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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