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Original SubmissionOctober 14, 2022
Decision Letter - Svetlana P. Chapoval, Editor

PONE-D-22-28448Early exposure to farm dust in an allergic airway inflammation rabbit model: Does it affect bronchial and cough hyperresponsiveness?PLOS ONE

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Reviewer #1: This is an interesting and generally well presented manuscript describing experiments trying to understand the potential protective role of a farm environment on allergen sensitisation and subsequent responses to allergen exposure. The latter have been measured as mechanically-induced cough reflexes and responses to methacholine as a measure of bronchial responsiveness. Whilst this is an topical area of research, I have a number of comments that require further explanation/clarification to improve the impact of the work:

1) From Figure 1 it appears that the two groups of rabbits were housed in different environments for six weeks, before both being transported a "controlled zone"in the animal unit of the University. They were then sensitised to ovalbumin several weeks later in this new environment. Why were the animals not sensitised to ovalbumin at the end of the initial exposure period whilst in situ in their two different environments? What was the rationale for leaving them several weeks before subsequently sensitising them in a new environment? This makes no sense whatsoever given what the authors claim they were trying to investigate.

2) The route of administration of the ovalbumin sensitisation was ip. Why was ovalbumin chosen as the allergen and not house dust mite as a more clinically relevant allergen? Also why was the ip route used for sensitisation rather than the more relevant nasal or inhalation route?

3) Rabbits are very sensitive to tussive agents such as inhaled citric acid or capsaicin that elicit cough in man. Why were responses to these agents not used rather than (or additional to) mechanical stimulation, not least because these could have looked at the cough sensitivity in conscious animals?

4) P17 - PD50 and PD100 were significantly lower for the F group compared with the C group when analysing the raw data, which disappeared when the results were adjusted for age/weight. However, on P13 of the manuscript the authors report that "pups in F were lighter and younger than rabbit pups in C". Surely these data mean that exposure to the farm environment has had some biological effect(s) and because of the differences at baseline the groups are not matched at the time of the cough and methacholne assessment meaning you should not have corrected for weight or age when assessing these effects in the two groups.

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Review Comments to the Author

Reviewer #1: This is an interesting and generally well presented manuscript describing experiments trying to understand the potential protective role of a farm environment on allergen sensitisation and subsequent responses to allergen exposure. The latter have been measured as mechanically-induced cough reflexes and responses to methacholine as a measure of bronchial responsiveness. Whilst this is an topical area of research, I have a number of comments that require further explanation/clarification to improve the impact of the work:

1) From Figure 1 it appears that the two groups of rabbits were housed in different environments for six weeks, before both being transported a "controlled zone" in the animal unit of the University. They were then sensitised to ovalbumin several weeks later in this new environment. Why were the animals not sensitised to ovalbumin at the end of the initial exposure period whilst in situ in their two different environments? What was the rationale for leaving them several weeks before subsequently sensitising them in a new environment? This makes no sense whatsoever given what the authors claim they were trying to investigate.

Response: Indeed, rabbits were housed in the specific environments for six weeks after birth and then transported to the conventional zone of the animal unit of the University of Lorraine. Intraperitoneal sensitization was performed around their 12th week of life.

The design of the study was chosen in order to investigate if early farm exposure is sufficient to have a protective farm effect on asthma, even if sensitization happens later in life.

Since few years, the first thousand days of life in human (from conception to the 2yrs old of the child) have been described as a window of opportunity for optimum health, growth and neurodevelopment. Regarding the immune system, this critical period of life seems to be a window of opportunity for immune homeostasis (1).

Previous studies have shown that early farm exposure is associated with increased regulatory T-cell numbers and responsible for a switch in regulatory T-cells (2,3). Several studies, especially those from the PASTURE European cohort, have shown a protective effect of early farm exposure on the development of asthma, atopic dermatitis, rhinitis, sensitization and food allergies (4) but usually farm exposure is continuous at least until adulthood.

In order to provide adequate preventive measures, it is needed to know if early farm exposure followed by an exposure break is sufficient to provide prevention of allergic diseases, even when sensitization happens later in life.

We added two sentences in the introduction (lines 79-83 of the revised version of the manuscript) and changed the end of the introduction to explain why specific housing procedures were implemented only during pregnancy and six first weeks of life (lines 104- 107).

2) The route of administration of the ovalbumin sensitisation was ip. Why was ovalbumin chosen as the allergen and not house dust mite as a more clinically relevant allergen? Also why was the ip route used for sensitisation rather than the more relevant nasal or inhalation route?

Response: Thank you for your accurate comment. It is true that nasal sensitization to house dust mite is a more physiological way of sensitization, that have gained interest in the last years.

However, a few studies have used OVA or HDM sensitization in mice to induce allergic reactions without significant difference in the results (5,6). Nasal HDM sensitization is mostly used in mice with an abundance of literature using this model of allergic mice; in guinea pigs, we found only two studies using nasal HDM sensitization (7,8) and none in rabbits. As the volume needed for nasal sensitization depends on the size of the nasal cavity of the animal, one explanation can be that the volume of HDM needed for rabbits is too important and thus far too expensive.

Regarding routes of sensitization, even in the few studies that used aeroallergen sensitization in rabbits, rabbits were sensitized by intraperitoneal injections (9,10). We added a sentence in the discussion line 368 of the revised version of the manuscript to disclose that it’s the route of choice in rabbits.

In our study, we have chosen ip route to ovalbumin because it is the model of bronchial hyperreactivity in rabbits developed and experienced by the team in the University of Lorraine (11,12). The specific environmental exposure was already innovative, so we did not want to experience it in a new model for the team.

3) Rabbits are very sensitive to tussive agents such as inhaled citric acid or capsaicin that elicit cough in man. Why were responses to these agents not used rather than (or additional to) mechanical stimulation, not least because these could have looked at the cough sensitivity in conscious animals?

Response: Thank you for this interesting comments. Indeed, we have performed inhaled citric acid in conscious rabbits right before anaesthesia but we choose to remove it from the manuscript because only few rabbits were responders. As you asked for this information, it seems appropriate to put the results of chemical stimulation of cough in the manuscript, thus, we have added this information in the supporting information.

Only 3 and 4 rabbits of each group were responders to conscious chemical stimulation. We were not surprised by these results for two reasons:

1/ Rabbits, as guinea pig, are known to have nasal breathing only. In consequence, in conscious animals, a huge majority of aerosol is deposed in nasal cavity and the deposit of citric acid on the trachea is really low compared to human who are stimulated with inhaled citric acid through a mouthpiece with mouth breathing only.

2/ Furthermore, rabbits are described to be more mechano-sensitive than chemo-sensitive compared to guinea pigs (13,14).

Finally, we did not use capsaicin because rabbit does not cough in response to capsaicin as TRPV1 receptors are scarcely expressed in the rabbit respiratory system (15). According to several publications, rabbits do not cough at all in response to capsaicin, but about 40% of them respond to citric acid with variable intensity (16,17). We have tried to perform an acid citric challenge in conscious rabbits using several citric acid concentrations in order to assess cough sensitivity. However, a great percentage of rabbits did not cough (84.2% in control and 77.8% in farm group).

We added results regarding chemical stimulation in conscious rabbits in the supporting information and a paragraph in the discussion regarding the particularities of cough sensitivity in rabbits (lines 324-330 of the revised version of the manuscript).

4) P17 - PD50 and PD100 were significantly lower for the F group compared with the C group when analysing the raw data, which disappeared when the results were adjusted for age/weight. However, on P13 of the manuscript the authors report that "pups in F were lighter and younger than rabbit pups in C". Surely these data mean that exposure to the farm environment has had some biological effect(s) and because of the differences at baseline the groups are not matched at the time of the cough and methacholine assessment meaning you should not have corrected for weight or age when assessing these effects in the two groups.

Response: Thank you for pointing out this issue. Groups were not matched at the time of cough and methacholine assessment because we were forced to carry out the experiments a little earlier in the farm group for technical reasons (summer closure of the Animal House of the University of Lorraine). Thus, there was a difference of 20 days in the median age at the time of cough and methacholine assessment. Even if we cannot exclude that farming environment has an effect on the weight, most likely the difference in weight is due to the difference in age.

We have performed adjusted analyses on weight and age in order to explore if the difference in PD50 and PD100 was due to the baseline difference in age and weight or to the difference in environmental exposure.

We added a sentence in the methods (lines 176-178 of the revised version of the manuscript) to precise that final experiments were carried out earlier in the farm group.

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Early exposure to farm dust in an allergic airway inflammation rabbit model: Does it affect bronchial and cough hyperresponsiveness?

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Reviewer #1: The revised version has addressed the issues raised adequately. My only additional comment would be to make better reference to the work with inhaled citric acid in the main text, rather than just in the Supplementary Material.

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Early exposure to farm dust in an allergic airway inflammation rabbit model: Does it affect bronchial and cough hyperresponsiveness?

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