Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMay 7, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-13389Receiving quality antenatal care service increases the chance of maternal use of skilled birth attendants in Ethiopia: Using a longitudinal panel surveyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Mohammed, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Your manuscript has been assessed by two peer-reviewers and their reports are appended below. The reviewers comment that your manuscript would benefit from more consistency in the use of terminology across the manuscript. In addition, the reviewers comment that the methodology and data analysis described in this study require additional detail. Furthermore, the discussion section would benefit from a deeper discussion of the implications of this study on future studies and policy making. Could you please carefully revise the manuscript to address all comments raised? Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 12 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Dear authors This is interesting research area. I found the question authors raised very important. Coverage of antenatal care alone couldn’t bring required skilled birth attendance. The coexistence of low quality and coverage ANC in Ethiopia and LMICs, has been obstacle to improve maternal and child health for decades. However, I have also issues to be addressed in the new version of the manuscript. Please, find the comments below: The authors need be consistent while using terms throughout the manuscript. For instance, postnatal vs postpartum, mothers’ vs women, health care providers vs health professional, skilled birth attendant vs skilled workers, antenatal care vs prenatal care, ANC component quality vs ANC quality etc. Background Is quality ANC guarantee to use skilled birth attendant? What is an evidence in high-income countries? What really contributed to low skilled birth attendant utilization for a women who had at least one ANC visit? Do you think your design is appropriate to explore it? Method Study design “Then, women expected date of delivery was estimated…” how do you overcome recall bias here? Study population Who are your source and study population? “All postnatal mothers who had any ANC visit during pregnancy,….” Do you mean all women who received ANC from skilled attendants? What about women who received ANC from other professionals? Sampling technique Check how sampling were conducted for panel study? How stratification is performed? “At the second stage, 35 households per cluster were selected and all pregnant women aged 15-49 in the selected households were enrolled and interviewed.”? Data collection method “In PMA-Ethiopia panel survey,…” what makes it panel? How many times did they collect the data? This part need detail explanation of tool, data collectors and techniques unless it has been explained elsewhere. How did you make sure women delivered by skilled attendant (health professional with midwifery skills)? Do you think rural women can differentiate these health professionals? “did you deliver by a skilled attendant?” “type of professional skilled birth attendant” People rarely measure quality due to its measurement issues; how did you measure quality of ANC? Can we say “quality ANC” by measuring the ANC components only? Have you tried to use model to measure quality? How do you see demand and supply side issues? Have you considered weighting while calculating ANC quality score from these 13 variables? What will be your answer if reader ask you is it fair to give one for HIV test, taking stool sample, birth preparedness and complication readiness etc.? Data management and analysis What were the proportion of missing? How missing data were managed in this analysis? Why weighting was conducted? How weighting was conducted? Have checked multi-collinearity? For instance, ANC quality vs ANC4+ “….generalized estimating equation (GEE) Poisson regression model was fitted…” was there significant correlation? Do GEE account for significant correlation within clusters? Result Table 1- some category need categorizing, since the cell percentage is very small. “Number of months pregnant women first talked to health care provider (<=4 months vs >4 months)” what do you mean? Do you mean time of first ANC initiation? Please take the following to method section; “In this study, 13 major prenatal care services received by mothers were used to create antenatal care quality index from women’s perspective. Women were classified as received ‘better ANC quality’ if they received more than the 75th percentiles of ANC service.” Type of service received: Have you tried principal component analysis? No need of repeating the model in the result; “Generalized estimating equation Poisson regression model was used to assess the effect of ANC quality on maternal use of skilled delivery.” What community level factors or individual level factors did you identify in your case? Discussion “Improving the ANC service delivery rather than focusing primarily on facility readiness (inputs) may increase women and partner perceived quality of care because use of services and outcomes are the result not only of the provision of care but also of women’s experience of that care.” what if the low quality ANC was due to inputs/facility readiness? Or what if skilled attendants failed to perform the ANC components due to supply side problems, knowledge, skills, attitude etc.? What do ANC quality (54%) tell us? Nearly half of the participants received quality ANC…. What is the implication of your study? Reviewer #2: 1) The abstract needs to be improved. Author should focus more on the findings of this study, and can add important findings in the result section. 2) The use of skilled birth attendant at the time of delivery or following the delivery is not clear in the whole manuscript. Also, author should clarify the role of skilled birth attendants following the delivery. What are the current practices of skilled birth attendant utilization? 3) The rationale of this study is poorly established. Author should explain in the introduction section how skilled birth attendant could prevent maternal deaths. As the study focused that receiving quality antenatal care service increases the chance of maternal use skilled birth attendant at/following the delivery, author should explain how quality antenatal care service utilization can improve the chance of maternal use of skilled birth attendant. 4) Author should mention whether they collect self-reported data or clinically confirmed data. What measures are taken to collect self-reported data? 5) Why author did not consider some important individual level factors like women education or husband education? These factors could have an influence on utilization of skilled birth attendant during or following the delivery. 6) The manuscript has several typo-errors and inconsistency in reference style. Please follow journal guideline and use academic English editing. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Md. Obaidur Rahman ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Receiving quality antenatal care service increases the chance of maternal use of skilled birth attendants in Ethiopia: Using a longitudinal panel survey PONE-D-22-13389R1 Dear Dr. Mohammed, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Aklilu Habte Hailegebireal, MPH Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-22-13389R1 Receiving quality antenatal care service increases the chance of maternal use of skilled birth attendants in Ethiopia: Using a longitudinal panel survey Dear Dr. Mohammed: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Aklilu Habte Hailegebireal Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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