Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionSeptember 24, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-26508Cutaneous information processing differs with load type during isometric finger abductionPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Kirimoto, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. For acceptance, it is crucial that you discuss the physiological background of the N33 attenuation in more detail, as pointed out by the reviewer. In contrast, since novelty is not part of the publilcation criteria of PLOS ONE, it is recommended, but not essential to claim the difference from the results of Gibbs et al. (cf. point 3. of the review). Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 16 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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[Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This study demonstrates that the primary somatosensory cortex (S1) and a digital muscle respond differently to electrical stimulation of digital cutaneous nerves during different motor tasks. The authors used two isometric tasks in their experiments: a force task in which the index finger was pressed against a virtual wall with a constant force, and a position task in which the index finger was held stationary while lifting the same weight. The results showed that the N33 responses in the S1 were attenuated and cutaneous-muscular reflexes were enhanced in the force task rather than the position task. The authors argued that these results indicate that somatosensory information processing differs between these two isometric tasks. However, I believe that there is insufficient data and discussion to appeal such a claim. 1. The authors argued that cutaneous information processing differs based on differences in somatosensory evoked potentials in response to cutaneous nerve stimulation. However, the manuscript does not discuss this result in depth, and the physiological implications derived from this result are minimal. In particular, only N33 was attenuated in this study, but the authors did not explain what physiological significance lies behind this. It is also necessary to consider why N33 is attenuated while other components remain unchanged. Simply stating that cutaneous information processing differs depending on the isometric tasks is not novel compared to previous studies. 2. The authors strongly argued that the greater the attenuation of the SEP, the more sensory input is needed under those conditions. However, in my view, a decrease in S1 response means that less sensory information reaches the S1, i.e., that the S1 does not need somatosensory signals from the periphery. Therefore, the authors should provide more evidence or explanation why more sensory information is needed under conditions of greater SEP attenuation. 3. The result that cutaneous-muscular reflexes are enhanced has already been described in a paper (Gibbs et al 1995). Therefore, this study lacks novelty; it is necessary to claim the difference from the results of Gibbs et al. 4. The authors only explain the isometric tasks, and there is little background information to consider why differences in SEPs occur. Since the authors measured muscle activity, they should show muscle activity between the two tasks. Since in the position task co-contraction of agonistic muscle pairs occurs, it is inferred that whole muscle activity is larger in the position task than the force task. This would be consistent with a previous study that showed that greater muscle activity is associated with greater sensory gating (Sugawara et al., 2016). We would like to know if the differences in SEP modulation simply reflect differences in the magnitude of muscle activity. 5. Introduction is not easy to understand. 1. In the first paragraph, the authors described that it is difficult to evaluate Ia and Aβ separately (lines 63-65). However, in the third paragraph, they described that many experiments have been done to stimulate cutaneous nerves (lines 79-82). These sentences are not consistent. The text should be rearranged. 2. In the first sentence of the second paragraph, the authors described that modality specific information processing is being investigated. But, in fact, only muscular information processing is mainly mentioned in the paragraph. 3. Before the last sentence of the second paragraph, it is necessary to state the reason why cutaneous information processing is examined in the position task and the force task. Minor points Lines 216-218; The authors should be more specific about the measurement of SEP. Lines 295-301; Doesn't the greater attenuation of SEP to peripheral stimuli mean that the central nervous system does not need that information? Lines 337-347; Since the visual feedback is the same in the two tasks, there is no need to discuss the influence of visual feedback on somatosensory processing. This paragraph should be deleted. Does the noise affect the results because the SEP signal is noisy in Figure 3. Does applying a 200 Hz low pass filter not change the results? ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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| Revision 1 |
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PONE-D-22-26508R1Cutaneous information processing differs with load type during isometric finger abductionPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Kirimoto, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 19 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols. Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Peter Schwenkreis Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The revised version has been improved in terms of quality of introduction compared to the original submission. However, some points remain to be revised. Related to comment 2: Although the function of sensory gating is said to reduce irrelevant information, the authors’ experiment did not show whether the sensory information was needed in such a situation. Without careful explanation, it is shortsighted to argue that a situation indicating the greater SEP gating requires more sensory information. The related sentences should be removed (lines 92-95, 286-287). Related to comment 3: The authors should add a discussion which argues a difference between a previous paper about the enhancement of cutaneous-muscular reflexes (Gibbs et al 1995), as the authors responded as the first point. Related to comment 4: The author stated that the position and force tasks require a similar net muscle torque (Lines 70-71). However, they only recorded the activity of a single muscle (FDI). We do not know whether the total activity of the whole hand muscles is equivalent between two tasks. A previous study showed that greater muscle activity is associated with greater sensory gating (Sugawara et al., 2016). The difference in sensory gating between the two tasks may simply reflect differences in the magnitude of muscle activity. As it stands, this paper may send the wrong message. Therefore, the authors should add a discussion of the possibility that differences in muscle activity that are not recorded cause differences in sensory gating between two tasks. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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Cutaneous information processing differs with load type during isometric finger abduction PONE-D-22-26508R2 Dear Dr. Kirimoto, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Peter Schwenkreis Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-22-26508R2 Cutaneous information processing differs with load type during isometric finger abduction Dear Dr. Kirimoto: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Peter Schwenkreis Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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