Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionSeptember 20, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-26135The rpoS gene confers resistance to low osmolarity conditions in Salmonella enterica serovar TyphiPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Cherayil, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Both reviewers are positive about the study, however, they also have some valid suggestions. In particular, both felt the introduction lacked crucial background information and that additional experiments are required to confirm the conclusions. I agree that this would significantly improve the paper. If you do resubmit, please clearly justify the omission of any of the suggested experiments in your response to the reviewers. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 24 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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We will update your Data Availability statement to reflect the information you provide in your cover letter. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This research describes the observation that a commonly used laboratory strain of Salmonella enterica serovar Typhi, Ty2, is hypersensitive to hypotonic conditions. The authors show that unlike the Salmonella enterica serovar Tyhphimurium strain SL1344, hypotonic conditions reduce viability of Ty2 and increase sensitivity to the detergent Triton X-100. They hypothesize that the increased sensitivity is due to the known mutation in rpoS in Ty2. They transfer the wildtype rpoS gene from SL1344 to Ty2 and observe increased resistance to hypotonic conditions and conclude that rpoS confers resistance to low osmolarity conditions in S. Typhi. The manuscript is well-written and is a good start to an interesting study of the role of RpoS in resisting hypotonic conditions. However, some additional information and experiments are needed for clarification and to fully support their conclusions. Major 1. Please provide more information in the manuscript about plasmid pBH in addition to the reference provided, such as the promoter and copy number. Is the plasmid borne rpoS gene controlled with the rpoS native promoter or is it driven by a constitutive promoter? 2. The given reference for pBH suggests that rpoS expression in this study is driven by the trp-lac promoter. Why did the authors choose to use constitutive expression for this study? The authors need to careful about the conclusions and the title because this study is solely testing whether constitutive expression of rpoS can confer resistance to low osmolarity. 3. Please provide growth curves for strains containing empty plasmid and the rpoS expression plasmid. Constitutive expression, in general, often results in overexpression and/or expression at inappropriate times during the growth phase compared to wildtype. If there is a detrimental effect on growth, then overnight growth of the rpoS expressing strain under shaking conditions may have not reached saturation (which the authors state could affect susceptibility or resistance to hypotonic conditions). Alternatively, aberrant expression of large amounts of a protein, especially regulatory, could lead to activation of other stress pathways that could result in a similar resistance phenotype. This would not be seen in the empty plasmid control and could lead to misleading conclusions. 4. Please provide evidence for expression of rpoS in the strain containing the rpoS expression plasmid. On lines 307-308, the authors claim to have shown that expression of rpoS in Ty2 increased survival in water. Currently, the only evidence that the gene is expressed is a phenotypic readout of reduced sensitivity to hydrogen peroxide. Evidence of rpoS gene expression either by qRT-PCR (of rpoS itself and/or selected rpoS target genes) or with Western blotting is needed to support these claims. Is the expression level comparable to native expression under the experimental conditions? Minor 1. Please include additional information about tube size and volumes used for culture growth. For growth curves, what volume was taken out of the culture for absorbance readings? 2. Please provide more information about the qRT-PCR analysis. Were the qRT-PCR primer efficiencies calculated and equivalent? 3. In Figure 5, why does the presence of the empty vector confer some resistance to hydrogen peroxide? Is this statistically significant? Reviewer #2: The authors present a study in which the Salmonella Typhi strain Ty2 is shown to be sensitive to low osmolarity and that this can be reversed by introducing a cloned WT rpoS gene into the strain. The study is well-presented with clear logic flow and associated figures. However, I do have specific comments below that should be addressed. 1. The introduction needs more discussion of both the rpoS gene itself in relation to environmental stress resistance and the state of past rpoS research in Salmonella Typhi. I realize that a full discussion of rpoS would be large (potentially beyond scope of this introduction), but the reader should have some more information about this gene than what is currently present. For the S. Typhi rpoS literature, the labs of Norel and Curtiss have significant contributions to this area and should be discussed (both in introduction and discussion). 2. Line 56-58. This sentence should be cited with references – there is a large body of work that established this. 3. Sentence ending in line 61 should also have more references beyond just a single review since many studies have worked in this area. 4. The “nail in the coffin” for this study would have been to take a WT, low-osmolarity resistant S. Typhi strain and mutate that rpoS gene and then show similar loss in resistance as seen in Ty2. And then, complement this mutant with the cloned WT rpoS. This experiment would significantly add to this study. 5. The authors should more fully discuss the possibility that the low osmolarity sensitivity in Ty2 could be due to some other factor than rpoS, and that the cloned/overexpressed rpoS is just compensating for that other factor. It would also be helpful to introduce the cloned rpoS gene into other S. Typhi rpoS mutant, low osmolarity sensitive strains and confirm that this reversed the sensitivity in the same manner (or not). In addition, it would be informative to test the S. Typhi strains/isolates with WT rpoS genes for low osmolarity resistance – do they all display this, as predicted? If not, then maybe there is some other rpoS-independent factor at play. But if so, then that really bolsters the rpoS model presented in this paper. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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The rpoS gene confers resistance to low osmolarity conditions in Salmonella enterica serovar Typhi PONE-D-22-26135R1 Dear Dr. Cherayil, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Olivia Steele-Mortimer, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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PONE-D-22-26135R1 The rpoS gene confers resistance to low osmolarity conditions in Salmonella enterica serovar Typhi Dear Dr. Cherayil: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Olivia Steele-Mortimer Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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