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PONE-D-21-40133How health literacy relates to venous leg ulcer healing: A scoping review.PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Bouguettaya, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 24 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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I agree with reviewer #1 that the concepts (health literacy and knowledge) should be more clearly defined. They are the basis for this paper. I think the comment about the different dimensions is important. The other comments, of course, fit seamlessly into this feedback and deserve the necessary attention/focus. I encourage the authors to revise their paper and submit an amended version. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: N/A ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for the opportunity to read this manuscript. I have read it with great interest because I think this is an important topic to investigate. I have read the manuscript and it puzzles me because it features two concepts ( knowledge and health literacy). I think it is important to be distinct with these concepts especially as the purpose of this scoping review was to investigate HL and VLU. The two concepts are not clearly described at this stage. Consider revising aim and result and discussion. Introduction Describes VLU very well. But the section about HL needs to be elaborated. The authors write about general and specific HL. This way of describing HL is new to me. To my knowledge , HL levels refer to three dimension functional, communicative or critical ( Nutbeam, 2009). I wonder if the authors mean generic or disease specific instruments? However, this categorisations or levels need to explained further. I lack information about the different dimensions in HL: functional, communicative and critical HL or functional/basic, communicative/interactive and critical HL depending on different definitions. Also, a description of what these dimensions entails. Further, FHL, C& C HL scale by Ishikawa was first developed and tested in a sample of patients with diabetes. Ishikawas instruments have been translated to different languages and have been tested in different populations (eg. to mention some, office workers, patients with Parkinson, patients with obesity). The original FHL and CC & C HL by Ishikawa was valid and reliable in a group with diabetes. But the questions were not explicitly linked to diabetes ( example of one question in FHL scale: Do you think that it is difficult to read health information because the text is difficult to see (even if you have glasses or contact lenses)? Therefore, I wonder if the “etiquette” that it is a disease specific instrument is perhaps not fully correct. I lack information on how to measure HL, there are a variety of instruments available. Suggestion of references to read more about the concept of HL Nutbeam, D. (2000). Health literacy as a public health goal: a challenge for contemporary health education and communication strategies into the 21st century. Health promotion international, 15(3), 259-267. Nutbeam, D. (2009). Defining and measuring health literacy: what can we learn from literacy studies?. International journal of public health, 54(5), 303-305. Nutbeam, D., & Muscat, D. M. (2020). Advancing health literacy interventions. In Health Literacy in Clinical Practice and Public Health (pp. 115-127). IOS Press. Sørensen, K., Van den Broucke, S., Fullam, J., Doyle, G., Pelikan, J., Slonska, Z., & Brand, H. (2012). Health literacy and public health: a systematic review and integration of definitions and models. BMC public health, 12(1), 1-13. Line 127 In the rationale, “… specific HL in VLU is poor…(32). This study investigates knowledge and educational needs, but the study does not use a valid and reliable HL instrument to evaluate HL. In fact, the concept is not at all mentioned in this article. Therefore, I do not think this article should be referred to in the rationale. Method When reading the description of the five included studies, no one seem to have HL as an outcome measure. Non seem to have valid and reliable instruments to measure HL. Instead included articles have outcome measures of knowledge. The authors need to explain the choice of eligible articles, and if the included articles in fact measures HL or if the measure knowledge after an educational intervention. The alignment between aim, research questions and result is not clear to me. Also, the categorisation between general and specific HL puzzles me. I expect to read about sufficient, problematic and inadequate levels of HL and this is not mentioned at all in the result. The result section would be easier to read if there were subheadings, the same as the three research questions. Discussion may need to be revised after clarification of concepts that are used. Reviewer #2: ABSTRACT: The abstract is clear and reflect the findings and conclusions of the review. BACKGROUND, OBJECTIVES, AND METHODS: The background is clear and concise. It establishes the context of the review. The authors might want to consider an update of some of the references – for example, there is new data in estimating venous leg ulcer prevalence/complex wounds prevalence. The primary research question is clear. The secondary research question addresses the relationship between two variables – I would suggest explaining what kind of relationship. The methods section is well written. Review is reported in the line with PRISMA ScR. Protocol was published in advance (Weller et al., 2021). The authors have built this scoping review using Levac et al. and have described proposed methods in a Protocol (Weller et al., 2021), however there is a mismatch between the protocol and the manuscript. It relates to the critical appraisal (Stage 5 of Levac et al.). I suggest that authors discuss these differences and explain how/if they have carried out critical appraisal using CASP (as written in the Protocol). This might be important, as the authors have excluded 1 record based on unclear method and 14 records based on unclear/lack of details. RESULTS: The studies included were clearly presented. Relevant data was reported in the text and the tables/appendix. There is a mismatch between the Protocol (Weller et al., 2021) and the manuscript (CASP evidence profile table is missing). I would suggest that authors discuss differences. p10/l210,211 - consider adding details/result of statistic test. p11/l236 compression adherence/self management? Tables: Table 1: Included studies p20/results column - if this is p value - please add to the result. p.28/results column - please omit the question (?How much data to pull from this paper) and details of results. DISCUSSION: The discussion is well written. The authors have appropriately interpreted the results of the review. They discuss the completeness and applicability evidence. Limitations: p12/l273 - It is not clear how/what significant limitation impacted the scoping review - perhaps it is only a language issue (the language is unclear, making it difficult to follow). Scoping review has identified the lack of evidence, which is fine and it emphasised what needs to be done in the future. You could not answer at your research questions in full due to i. lack of evidence and ii. certainty of evidence. Lack of evidence should not be confused with the certainty of evidence. CONCLUSION: The implications for practice and research are clear and concise, which helps the reader to receive a clear message. The authors are cautious in their implications; however, this matches the certainty of the evidence. 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PONE-D-21-40133R1How health literacy relates to venous leg ulcer healing: A scoping review.PLOS ONE Dear Prof. Weller, Dear Carolina Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. All comments have been considered and the manuscript is almost ready for acceptance. There is still one comment from the reviewer (place of quality assessment of reporting) that I think is important and requires the necessary attention. In addition, there are some typographical comments. I am happy to expedite the review when the manuscript is resubmitted and make a final decision ASAP. Therefore, I invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the minor points raised. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 21 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols. Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Professor Dimitri Beeckman, PhD Academic Editor, PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments: After a thorough review by the reviewer and by me, I am pleased to inform you that your manuscript is almost ready for acceptance. There is still one comment made by the reviewer (place of reporting quality assessment) that I think is important and requires the necessary attention. In addition, there are some typographical comments. May I ask you to revise the manuscript and upload a new version. I will be happy to review it myself before accepting the manuscript for publication. It is a very interesting manuscript and I would like to thank you for submitting it to PLOS ONE. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed. However, I suggest that authors consider dividing description of procedures of critical appraisal (add to Methods section) from reporting the quality of evidence (which should stay in Results section). Typographical errors: line 92, remove one dot (hold. .) line 103, add dot after reference (20). line 106, add dot after reference (17, 20). line 124, add dot after reference (26). [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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