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Original SubmissionJune 29, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-18389No evidence for risk compensation in undergraduate students after SARS-CoV-2 antibody test results: a randomized controlled trialPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Rosenberg, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 19 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: No main concerns on this article. Some comments: - informed consent process: the remote consent administration may not be as effective for transferring correct information to students; probably in this case a telephone contact to better understand students' perception and knowledge of COVID would have been more effective - apart from test accuracy, could you comment on the understanding of the relation between a positive test and the real protection from COVID infection? Students may not be aware of this relation and this relation is not so strong - could you comment on the reasons of 23% of students lost to FUP? - could you comment on the small number of participants tested positive? Reviewer #2: In general, the manuscript is well-written and describes an interesting study of risk compensation. The following represent relatively minor criticisms. It would be most useful to evaluate the data and code used for analysis. * Analysis issues: The analysis is performed on dichotomized Likert scale responses. The protocol does specify this analysis, but does not specify the dichotomization criteria prospectively. Given the distribution of the data, it does seem unlikely that the choice of dichotomization would matter, but a more principled approach to the analysis would respect the specific structure of the response. After all, if the data were not going to be analyzed as Likert scaled values, then why collect them as such? Alternatively, the protocol should have pre-specified the dichotomization criteria. The authors do present an alternative analysis treating the Likert scale responses as interval scaled as a sensitivity analysis. This is comforting but does not necessarily completely ameliorate the issue. A reasonable analysis for these data would be an ordinal logistic regression analysis. A basic approach would be to use a proportional odds model (McCullagh and Nelder, 1989). McCullagh and Nelder also present a slight extension useful for testing the proportional odds assumption versus monotonically changing odds. For an excellent exposition on the nuts and bolts of implementing the proportional odds model, assessing goodness of fit, and interpreting the results, see Harrell (2010). Professor Harrell has also made numerous resources available online. Furthermore, is there any specific reason not to include all data in a single analysis with two factors (seropositivity status and intervention) and their interaction effect? The imbalance might mitigate against this, but it would still be of interest to evaluate the interaction term. And, along those lines, although it is probably only feasible (if at all) with the dichotomized version of the data (or with the Likert scale data treated as interval scaled), a full model would consider three fixed effects (seropositivity status, intervention, and time) and their interactions. However, this model would require a method for handling the repeated measures across time for each subject. This could be carried out using the 'nlme' R package, most likely (Pinheiro and Bates, 2017). However, convergence is always an issue for these binomial responses. But, treating the responses as intervals scaled should meet with no issues. There are several R packages that extend this modeling in a Bayesian framework as well as other frameworks such as STAN (Carpenter et al, 2017) which could also be used to perform such modeling. An interesting alternative approach to the sensitivity analysis could be carried out using the concept of specification curve analysis (Simonsohn, Simmons, and Nelson, 2020). In a nutshell, the idea is to specify all of the alternative paths that the analysis could have taken to assess the impact of the one path that was actually chosen. It would be quite feasible to implement this analysis using the 'specr' R package (Masur and Scharkow, 2020). * Interpretation issues The study sample represents a subset of students who self-selected to join the study (34.4% of randomly selected, eligible IU-B undergraduate students). It could be that in this subset there is no observed risk compensation, but that in the complementary subset of students that did not self-select into the study there is some observed risk compensation. To be able to widen the scope of inference likely requires some assumptions about the comparability of these two subsets. There seems to be no real way to avoid this so it must be addressed in the limitations. The authors state "However, the results are likely to be generalizable to other young adult populations at other predominantly white universities similar to the one where this study was conducted." (lines 339-340). Is race a deciding factor here? If so, please provide some citations that would support this. Not only did states differ in their approaches to handling COVID-19 issues broadly, but even cities within states differed, as did universities within states. And, students at different universities could come from a more or less heterogeneous background. It seems as though all of these effects make it more difficult to generalize rather than more easy. The authors mention "potential for confounding" in line 347. Please list these potential issues, if only briefly or at a high level. In Figure 2, please show all available data rather than only three time points. Also, the bars in these figures appear offset in a way that makes them hard to interpret. Although the stacked bar approach is not ideal, it is hard to suggest an alternative. One might attempt grouping bar charts but this is not likely to end well. Given the linear model approach that was executed in the appendix, please also provide a plot of the least squares estimates over time for each combination of seropositivity status and intervention. * References Carpenter, B., Gelman, A., Hoffman, M.D., Lee, D., Goodrich, B., Betancourt, M., Brubaker, M., Guo, J., Li, P. and Riddell, A., 2017. Stan: A probabilistic programming language. Journal of statistical software, 76(1). Harrell, F. E. (2010). Regression Modeling Strategies: With Applications to Linear Models, Logistic Regression, and Survival Analysis. Springer Series in Statistics. Masur, P. K. and Scharkow, M. (2020). specr: conducting and visualizing specification curve analyses. https://cran.r-project.org/web/packages/specr/ McCullagh, P. and Nelder, J. A. (1989). Generalized linear models. Pinheiro, J., Bates, D., DebRoy, S., Sarkar, D., Heisterkamp, S., Van Willigen, B., & Maintainer, R. (2017). Package ‘nlme’. Linear and nonlinear mixed effects models, version, 3(1). Simonsohn, U., Simmons, J. P., and Nelson, L. D. (2020). Specification curve analysis. Nature Human Behaviour, 4(11), 1208-1214. Reviewer #3: Thank you for asking me to review this article. Highly transmittable infectious diseases, such as COVID-19 are public health emergencies of international concern. There is still no definitive cure for some of those highly transmittable illness. Immunization and breaking the chain of infection is the only successful approach to mitigate its spread. However, while on one side immunization coverage is conditioned by the people’s acceptance of these vaccines, on the other side natural infection or vaccination has important potential consequences on preventive startegies and for disease control. In this context, aim of the paper under review is to assess whether objective information about antibody status, particularly for those who are antibody negative and likely still susceptible to SARS-CoV-2 infection, increases protective behaviors and, moreover, assessing whether a positive antibody test results in decreased protective behaviors. The subject under study is certainly important, especially in the historical period we are experiencing. The article presents interesting results but it must be further improved. Title: it can be improved, highlight the object of the study. Abstract. I encourage the authors to add more detail about their core contributions in the abstract. Introduction: The authors should make clearer what is the gap in the literature that is filled with this study. The authors must better frame their study within the vast body of literature that also addressed the issue of knowledge concerning COVID-19 that can affect the implementation of control measures in different groups of population (refer to articles with DOI: https://doi.org/10.3390/ijerph182010872). Methods: The survey was conducted using a non-standard tool. The use of an unreliable instrument is a serious and irreversible limitation. A validation process must be performed to evaluate the tool. What about reliability, intelligibility and validation index? Was a pilot study performed? The enrolment procedure must be specified. How did the authors choose the way to select the sample? This can represent a great bias origin. How did they avoid the selection bias? The authors do not propose a minimum sample size. Without the numerical identification of the reference population is not clear the validity of the study. A non-representative sample is by its self a non-sense-survey. Statistical analysis: I suggest to insert a measure of the magnitude of the effect for the comparisons. Please consider to include effect sizes. Discussion: I also suggest expanding. Emphasize the contribution of the study to the literature. The discussion must be updated with the discussion regarding knowledge about the diseases (see the above mentioned reference) that can be an important confounding factors for this study. The Authors should add more practical recommendations for the reader, based on their findings. Also, the section of limitations and future search is also very short, the Authors could elaborate on that. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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Does receiving a SARS-CoV-2 antibody test result change COVID-19 protective behaviors? Testing risk compensation in undergraduate students with a randomized controlled trial PONE-D-22-18389R1 Dear Dr. Rosenberg, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. 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Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: No additional comments. On my opinion the information requested have been exhaustively addressed expecially for my concerns. Reviewer #2: The authors have done an excellent job of thoroughly responding to all comments. The implementation of the analysis in SAS is nicely done as well. Reviewer #3: The main problems of the questionnair validation and unreppresentative sample are still on. This make the paper no sense. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Manuela Monti Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No ********** |
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