Peer Review History

Original SubmissionJune 7, 2022

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Decision Letter - Walid Kamal Abdelbasset, Editor

PONE-D-22-15394Acute pre-exercise hydrogen rich water intake does not improve running performance at maximal aerobic speed in trained track and field runnersPLOS ONE

Dear Dr. Krejčí,

Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process.

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Walid Kamal Abdelbasset, Ph.D.

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PLOS ONE

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1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions?

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously?

Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: No

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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5. Review Comments to the Author

Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)

Reviewer #1: A randomized placebo-controlled crossover research study aimed to investigate the effects of ingesting hydrogen rich water (HRW) on running time in track and field runners (n=24). Time to exhaustion, post-exercise blood lactate concentration, maximal heart rate, and oxygen uptake were not significantly different between placebo and HRW.

Minor revisions:

1- Abstract: Define r.

2- Table 1: Indicate if the distribution of the variables were checked for normality. For nonparametric data, summarize using median, first and third quartiles.

3- Line 229: Within the text, indicate the statistical method used to estimate the correlations. Since the p-value tests the null hypothesis that the correlation equals zero, it may be more precise to state that the correlations were not statistically different than zero.

Reviewer #2: Title: Acute pre-exercise hydrogen rich water intake does not improve running performance at maximal aerobic speed in trained track and field runners

GENERAL COMMENTS

This study investigated the effects of acute, pre-exercise, hydrogen-rich water (HRW) ingestion on running time to exhaustion at maximal aerobic speed in trained track and field runners. I have read with attention the previous reviewers’ comments. I feel that the study is interesting, but however, I found that there are several challenges in carry out other studies, due to a prori no results may not directly to indicate that exercise hydrogen-rich water intake does not improve running performance, it was evaluated at a particular condition (maximal aerobic speed), but not at anaerobic speed, and with a “time” as a performance marker, but not at other markers (efficiency of running, glycogen content, fat, CHO etc), and with specific sample characteristics (young runners). Additionally, the study protocol and design it is high-quality, and easy to replicate, then I like to recommend the study for future other studies that can help us to carry out other more complex studies.

ABSTRACT

It is well design

INTRODUCTION

-I like to suggest to the authors to include a little more information regarding that pre-exercise H2 ingestion have been reported not at all exercise modalities, intensities, volumes, nor including other outocmes more thatn the “time” in a performance, and population (runners trained).

Methods

I found the methods reported in a very good quality

The study protocol figure is very understandable

Statistical analyses are very clear.

RESULTS

There are very clear described.

DISCUSSION

-I like to suggest to the authors to include some future potential other study conditions as I have stated previously (i.e., other populations), where this previous study give us only a high-quality, but very specific condition in which the hydrogen rich water (HRW) ingestion do not add new advantages.

Tables

Are very clear

Figures

Are very clear

References

Are very up-dated.

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Reviewer #1: No

Reviewer #2: Yes: Cristian Alvarez

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Revision 1

Reviewer #1

A randomized placebo-controlled crossover research study aimed to investigate the effects of ingesting hydrogen rich water (HRW) on running time in track and field runners (n=24). Time to exhaustion, post-exercise blood lactate concentration, maximal heart rate, and oxygen uptake were not significantly different between placebo and HRW.

1– Abstract: Define r.

Response: Thank you for your comment. The abbreviation was replaced with the full title and the sentence now reads “Spearman’s correlation coefficients ranged from −0.28 to 0.30, all p ≥ 0.16”.

2– Table 1: Indicate if the distribution of the variables were checked for normality. For nonparametric data, summarize using median, first and third quartiles.

Response: Thank you for this suggestion. It is our mistake that we neglected to check the normality assumption. We added the results of the Shapiro-Wilk test. Three variables were significantly different from the normal distribution. We therefore added median, first and third quartile values to Table 1. In the correlation analysis we switched to a non-parametric alternative – Spearman’s correlation coefficient.

3– Line 229: Within the text, indicate the statistical method used to estimate the correlations. Since the p-value tests the null hypothesis that the correlation equals zero, it may be more precise to state that the correlations were not statistically different than zero.

Response: We re-read the manuscript and found that there was no clear distinction between the analysis of individual responses and correlation analysis. We rearranged the text and hope this helped to make it clearer. Spearman’s correlation coefficient as the statistical method used was added to the text. Thank you for your comment regarding the null hypothesis of zero correlation. We rewrote the sentence. Please see the Results section in the manuscript.

Reviewer #2

GENERAL COMMENTS

This study investigated the effects of acute, pre-exercise, hydrogen-rich water (HRW) ingestion on running time to exhaustion at maximal aerobic speed in trained track and field runners. I have read with attention the previous reviewers’ comments. I feel that the study is interesting, but however, I found that there are several challenges in carry out other studies, due to a prori no results may not directly to indicate that exercise hydrogen-rich water intake does not improve running performance, it was evaluated at a particular condition (maximal aerobic speed), but not at anaerobic speed, and with a “time” as a performance marker, but not at other markers (efficiency of running, glycogen content, fat, CHO etc), and with specific sample characteristics (young runners). Additionally, the study protocol and design it is high-quality, and easy to replicate, then I like to recommend the study for future other studies that can help us to carry out other more complex studies.

ABSTRACT

It is well design.

INTRODUCTION

I like to suggest to the authors to include a little more information regarding that pre-exercise H2 ingestion have been reported not at all exercise modalities, intensities, volumes, nor including other outocmes more thatn the “time” in a performance, and population (runners trained).

METHODS

I found the methods reported in a very good quality.

The study protocol figure is very understandable.

Statistical analyses are very clear.

RESULTS

There are very clear described.

DISCUSSION

I like to suggest to the authors to include some future potential other study conditions as I have stated previously (i.e., other populations), where this previous study give us only a high-quality, but very specific condition in which the hydrogen rich water (HRW) ingestion do not add new advantages.

Tables

Are very clear.

Figures

Are very clear.

References

Are very up-dated.

Response: Thank you for your comments and suggestions, particularly relating to the Introduction and Discussion.

Regarding the Introduction, we followed your suggestions, and some of the sentences were rewritten in order to be more specific and explanatory. In addition, we also added the results of some very recent studies that shed more light on the specific exercise intensities, where H2 showed an ergogenic effects. Please, see lines 57–68.

Relating to our approach in the writing of the Discussion, our main goal, particularly in this study, was to investigate whether pre-exercise hydrogen rich water (HRW) intake using our specific hydration strategy (time, dose, chemical properties of HRW) improved running time to exhaustion in very specific population, i.e. trained field and track athletes. To date, we have published six H2 studies in relation to different modes of exercise, intensity level and population. For instance, one study investigated the effect of H2 inhalation on the functional state of post-COVID-19 patients. However, the take home message of the present study was to show coaches that if they decided to use HRW immediately before the race in well trained athletes, HRW does not work well in terms of the expected improvement in running performance across distances from 1500 m to 3000 m. We absolutely agree with your opinion to design future studies that investigate different physiological variables, biomarkers, and population etc. When working with well-trained athletes, there are many practical issues that need to be considered. For example, the research needs to fit around the athletes‘ training programmes and cannot interupt their schedule too much. Nevertheless, our study includes many references to previous studies showing the positive effects of H2 supplementation on fitness, performance, physiological and psychometric responses.

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Decision Letter - Walid Kamal Abdelbasset, Editor

PONE-D-22-15394R1Acute pre-exercise hydrogen rich water intake does not improve running performance at maximal aerobic speed in trained track and field runnersPLOS ONE

Dear Dr. Krejčí,

Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process.==============================

Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 01 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.

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If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter.

If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols. Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols.

We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript.

Kind regards,

Walid Kamal Abdelbasset, Ph.D.

Academic Editor

PLOS ONE

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Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice.

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Reviewers' comments:

Reviewer's Responses to Questions

Comments to the Author

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Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed

Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed

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2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions?

The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented.

Reviewer #1: (No Response)

Reviewer #3: Yes

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3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously?

Reviewer #1: (No Response)

Reviewer #3: Yes

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4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available?

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Reviewer #1: (No Response)

Reviewer #3: Yes

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5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English?

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Reviewer #1: (No Response)

Reviewer #3: Yes

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6. Review Comments to the Author

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Reviewer #1: (No Response)

Reviewer #3: The manuscript written in well organized manner, design of the study well constructed, only one comment related to manuscript title as it should contain research type.

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Reviewer #3: No

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Revision 2

Reviewer #3: The manuscript written in well organized manner, design of the study well constructed, only one comment related to manuscript title as it should contain research type.

Response: Thank you for this suggestion. We added the following words to the title: “A randomized, double-blind, placebo-controlled crossover study”. We looked at the titles of articles in PLOS ONE to see how this type of study is most often writen. We found that a hyphen and a comma are very often used. We therefore rewrote the occurences of this phrase in the abstract and at the beginning of the method section.

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Decision Letter - Walid Kamal Abdelbasset, Editor

Acute pre-exercise hydrogen rich water intake does not improve running performance at maximal aerobic speed in trained track and field runners: A randomized, double-blind, placebo-controlled crossover study

PONE-D-22-15394R2

Dear Dr. Krejčí,

We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements.

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Walid Kamal Abdelbasset, Ph.D.

Academic Editor

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Comments to the Author

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Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed

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2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions?

The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented.

Reviewer #3: Yes

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3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously?

Reviewer #3: Yes

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4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available?

The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.

Reviewer #3: Yes

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5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English?

PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.

Reviewer #3: Yes

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6. Review Comments to the Author

Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)

Reviewer #3: All my previous comments had been made. Thanks for your efforts in correcting the manuscript to be processed

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Reviewer #3: No

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Formally Accepted
Acceptance Letter - Walid Kamal Abdelbasset, Editor

PONE-D-22-15394R2

Acute pre-exercise hydrogen rich water intake does not improve running performance at maximal aerobic speed in trained track and field runners: A randomized, double-blind, placebo-controlled crossover study

Dear Dr. Krejčí:

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