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PONE-D-22-33061 MILAN’S FORGOTTEN EPIDEMIC OF SUMMER 1629, A FEW MONTHS BEFORE THE LAST GREAT PLAGUE: AN INVESTIGATION INTO THE POSSIBLE CAUSE. PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Galli, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Thank you very much for submitting your manuscript "MILAN’S FORGOTTEN EPIDEMIC OF SUMMER 1629, A FEW MONTHS BEFORE THE LAST GREAT PLAGUE: AN INVESTIGATION INTO THE POSSIBLE CAUSE" for consideration at PLOS Neglected Tropical Diseases. As with all papers reviewed by the journal, your manuscript was reviewed by members of the editorial board and by several independent reviewers. In light of the reviews (below this email), we would like to invite the resubmission of a significantly-revised version that takes into account the reviewers' comments. We cannot make any decision about publication until we have seen the revised manuscript and your response to the reviewers' comments. Your revised manuscript is also likely to be sent to reviewers for further evaluation. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 11 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The authors used information collected at the time of the occurrence of the possible epidemic and, therefore, there is inherent difficulty in analyzing the data. There is great precariousness in the existing data in the analyzed record, justifiable by the historical component of the collection. Overall, the authors did a good job discussing the limitations of the study. As a contribution to the discussion, perhaps the information presented could be evaluated both retrospectively for the years 1601-1628 and prospectively for the years of the "plague" period. The resulting comparisons may reinforce the idea that it was another disease and not the beginning of the plague epidemic. For example, how was the distribution of death certificates in the three periods between cerusici and physici collegiati? This seems to be the biggest source of bias with misclassification, largely due to procedures at the time that cannot be corrected. Perhaps the comparison between the three periods could show with greater certainty that it was another disease, although the symptoms described make it difficult to say which disease it would have been. Some minor details: the access link to figure 1 is wrong; the information in figure 4 (line 119) about the sexes is not in the figure. Reviewer #2: It was a great pleasure to review the article by Galli and collaborators, both because of the historical aspect of the paper and the interest still present in the authors of learning from the past. Realizing we still have many things to discover, looking behind is essential to build a solid future. It was exciting to learn about ancient strategies to report or register disease cases, to look at the literature available at the beginning of the 17th century and the effort to name and classify medical findings. However, I have some points to raise. First, I would like to check the number of fever cases between males and females presented in the abstract. Authors say, "These deaths involved 1,627 males and 1,334 females" - the numbers, in reality, refer to the number of deaths explicitly related to people with fever without any described organ involvement and not to the total of deaths. Looking at the data collected, it's enjoyable to observe the different terms used by attending professionals according to their educational level (cerusici and phisici collegiate) and to conclude that we can still find similar inconsistencies if we look deeply into present databases. In this sense, in 1629, the lack of information under notification was understandable. What is not acceptable is that the same, for different reasons, still happens today. Also critical, regarding the article discussion, is the need for a more profound thought in other than Typhoid fever (TF) as the most probable mortality cause. Even though the living conditions, poverty, and unsafety of food and drinking water leads us to the high probability of TF and historical evidence, it's important to look to secondary data provided by the reviewed documents: firstly, only 141 people were registered as having fever associated with gastrointestinal symptoms, only 12 presented skin rash, and 2964 have any described organ involvement. GI symptoms and skin rash are not rare in TF, and their presence should have increased the fever associated with gastrointestinal symptoms and fever with rash. Respiratory symptoms are also frequent, mainly cough, and only 144 deaths were attributed to fever with respiratory symptoms. In the absence of more detailed disease information other than the distinct names used to register, extensively discussed by authors, it would be essential to go through infectious diseases that would lead us to a differential diagnosis in present similar cases, illnesses linked to compromised health and social welfare conditions like viral infections other than smallpox, that predominantly occur as summer epidemics. Reviewer #3: The paper addresses a poorly studied epidemic that occurred in the seventeenth century in Milan. The paper presents unpublished data and interesting interpretations about this epidemic. The study focuses on clinical aspects, even considering the scarcity of diagnostic resources and the inadequate classification of symptoms. Besides, it brings socio-demographic elements that allow an approximation of the magnitude and dynamics of the transmission of the 'fever' that has caused thousands of deaths. On the first aspect, I recommend the review of the article by a clinical doctor, with experience in medieval medicine and the clinical paradigms of the time, such as Galenus and others. About the second aspect, demographic and socio-epidemiological, I believe that the article can be improved by comparing estimates of the number of deaths. According to the authors "the number of deaths estimated by the chroniclers of the time is much larger than that recorded in the MML: - 8,750 deaths according to Tadino report, - “seven thousand souls have died”, according to the Tuscany resident, - 1,880 (5,993 - 4,113) deaths estimated by excess mortality, - 3,363 deaths “attributed to, or associated with fever”, according to the MML registers. The first question is whether some deaths may have been omitted from the MML's archives, for example, residents outside the Milan´s walls, jews in ghettos, migrant populations, besides people in hospitals and lazarettos. The second issue concerns the comparison between previous epidemics by means of metrics, some of which are already available in the article, such as median age of deaths, sex ratio, days from symptoms offset to death, and seasonality. Would these metrics be different for the black plague epidemic? Other outbreaks of fecal-oral transmission diseases? See, for example: Morabia (2009) doi:10.1017/S0950268809990136 and Bakach et al. (2015) https://doi.org/10.1093/trstmh/trv075. In this sense, a more accurate description of climatic, political, and demographic events, briefly mentioned by the authors, that took place in 1629 to 1630 could bring a major contribution to the text, using as information sources some chronicles and reports of the time. These suggestions do not require new calculations, but rather short supplementary texts, with reference to some historical documents and published review articles. Other minor changes: In the sentence ‘The number of deaths recorded in 1629 was 45.7% higher than the 4,113 annual average number in the period 1601-1628 and, in comparison with this, the excess deaths occurring in 1629 started in May and peaked in July (Fig. 1)”, 'highlight which values, in which months may be significantly different than expected, based on previous years. The sentence “As shown in Figure 2, there were no significant differences in the distribution of deaths by gender or age group” does not match the graph. Please correct. The graph shows that “there were no significant differences in the gender distribution of deaths among age groups”. Improve the legend of Figures 2 and 4 to explain the difference between them. What is the meaning of the numbers next to the horizontal bars? The tallest bar on the right (males) has a value of 1, and is much larger than the next bar, with a value of 6. ********** 6. 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MILAN’S FORGOTTEN EPIDEMIC OF SUMMER 1629, A FEW MONTHS BEFORE THE LAST GREAT PLAGUE: AN INVESTIGATION INTO THE POSSIBLE CAUSE. PONE-D-22-33061R1 Dear Dr. Galli, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Andréa Sobral Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Thank you for your fine contribution. On behalf of the Editors of the PLOS, we look forward to your continued contributions to the Journal. Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-22-33061R1 Milan’s forgotten epidemic of summer 1629, a few months before the last great plague: an investigation into the possible cause. Dear Dr. Galli: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Andréa Sobral Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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