Peer Review History
Original SubmissionMay 13, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-14016Microbiological Diagnosis and Mortality of Tuberculosis Meningitis: Systematic Review and Meta-analysisPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Abegaz, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please pay very careful attention to the comments provided below and make the requested changes Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 06 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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In addition, please note the following comments: Lines 129-131 and Figure 1: 1354 studies identified with 147 duplicates removed, this should result in 1207 but the next block is 232 please correct the figure and text to document the exclusions of 975/1207 - with the reasons for exclusions Figure 2 - uses a column heading effect size but this is actually the proportion not effect size (same in Fig 3, 4, 5, and 6) Once you have addressed all the comments, please carefully review the syntax and grammar of your manuscript. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I have reviewed the article by Seid and colleagues on the “Microbiological diagnosis and Mortality of Tuberculosis Meningitis: Systematic Review and Meta-analysis The overall pooled estimate of CSF culture positive Tuberculosis Meningitis (TBM) was 29.72% and the pooled estimate of mortality rate was 20.42%. It is a topic of great clinical interest but several issues arise: 1. There is need for an extensive review of the grammatical syntax and spellings 2. The section on eligibility criteria should be rewritten for clarity 3. Inaccuracies. It is not conceivable that TBM occurs in people who have had tuberculosis. TBM is active tuberculosis (line 38). 4. Lines 57 and 59 are contradictory regarding the clinical presentation of TBM- the former suggests the presentation is rapid while the latter suggests a sub-acute presentation 5. The study case definition is not clear (line 93 – 94) 6. In lines 225 and 226 one expects lists but these are not presented 7. The high mortality in HIV seropositive participants was noted. Was this stratified by CD4 count or antiretroviral therapy use? 8. What is the role of molecular diagnostics like Xpert Ultra (Shen, 2021) and metagenomic sequencing in the diagnosis of TBM? 9. Some elements in the conclusion are not supported by the study results Reviewer #2: Introduction Line 67. is the lumbar puncture technique a challenge for clinicians in low= and middle- income countries? As in line 182 & 183. Methods Literature Search Line 80. Why was leterature search limited to Pubmed, EMBASE and gray literature only? Lines 85-87. Good key words. Selection criteria Lines 96-99. Only inclusion criteria is explicitly stated here. Exclusion criteria should also be clearly stated here and not just later on e.g. lines 229 -231. Quality Assessment Line 114. ...high if >80%, medium if 60-80%, and low if 80%. Is this supposed to read, "and low if <60%." Results Study characteristics Line 138. What was the rational for excluding studies before 1985? Sub-group analysis of mortality among TBM patients Lines 163-168. Good description. Discussion Line 174. Could the high prevalence of MDR-TB be related to only part of the studies (14/310 reporting this fnding as in line 153? Lines 178 & 179. Could empirical treatment as opposed to treatment guided by drug sensitivity testing be partly responsible for mortality in TBM? ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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Revision 1 |
PONE-D-22-14016R1Microbiological Diagnosis and Mortality of Tuberculosis Meningitis: Systematic Review and Meta-analysisPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Abegaz, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please take note of the requested changes as detailed below. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 11 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols. Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Muhammad Osman, MBChB, MSc, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments: Dear Authors - Thank you for your response and edits to the manuscript. Please take note of the following important changes: line 10 - 'studies that reported culture confirmed TBM' this needs to be corrected - the aim was not to search for culture confirmed studies, the aim was to search for presumed/suspected TBM and then estimate the proportion that were culture confirmed line 33 - 10 million cases of TB were detected - the WHO estimate is of burden (everyone who developed TB), detection is much lower and dropped further due to COVID disruptions Line 68 - add some detail around the expertise and skill required to collect CSF by lumbar puncture (as in your previous response) Line 94-95 the definition is not clear - what is this the definition for? The discussion requires additional details on the limitations - you may either include these as you discuss the findings or expand the limitations paragraph. These should include: - trained personnel - for what taking CSF, testing CSF, where is this limited? any publications that confirm this? - rate of DR TB - this was only possible in subset of n=XX studies. Also check were these in a particular region and does this DR TB rate reflect underlying DR TB pattern in that region? - HIV TBM mortality - study not able to stratify by CD4 count or ART use; also comment on the study period, could the high HIV TBM be because it occurred in period prior to widespread ART? Figures - the heading effect size has not been changed as previously recommended and noted in the responses Table 2: please annotate this table so that the HIV studies are specified. Add a footnote so that we can see which of the 4 studies were HIV+ and which were HIV- . The detail on age and study design is in table 1 Minor notes which reflect the need for copyediting and proof reading the use of Mycobacterium tuberculosis (Mtb) - this needs consistency across the manuscript - please check nomenclature and adjust (lines 32, 35, 46, 61, 185, 195, 205 etc) TBM to be used consistently Incorrect capitalisation of words - line 53 Infants; line 72 Absence; line 185 Worldwide, line 197 Smear Check tenses through out: line 108 'is' should be was Language: line 156 'further analysis the drug resistance'; line 176 'than expected'; line 179 'definite diagnostic'; line 180 'were got'; line 181-182; line 189 'makes doubt its use'; Line 139 S/Africa needs to be spelled out; line 195 AF line 139 continent could be deleted line 143 'rest studies' [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: This is important work that needs further detailed studies to improve diagnosis and treatment outcome. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Revision 2 |
Microbiological Diagnosis and Mortality of Tuberculosis Meningitis: Systematic Review and Meta-analysis PONE-D-22-14016R2 Dear Dr. Abegaz, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Muhammad Osman, MBChB, MSc, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Dear Authors Thank you for making the requested changes to the manuscript. In the current format, I have a concern that English language editing is required. In addition to the points raised by reviewer 1 in their attached word document, please take note of the highlighted text and comments included in the attached pdf. Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: I believe this review adds something to the body of knowledge that we have. It has addressed some gaps while highlighting further areas for research. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: No **********
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Formally Accepted |
PONE-D-22-14016R2 Microbiological Diagnosis and Mortality of Tuberculosis Meningitis: Systematic Review and Meta-analysis Dear Dr. Seid: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Muhammad Osman Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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