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PONE-D-22-09654Expectations and attitudes towards medical artificial intelligence: A qualitative study in the field of strokePLOS ONE Dear Dr. Amann, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Although the reviewers highlighted some positive aspects, they have major concerns that the authors need to carefully address before reconsidering this manuscript for publication. Please address in detail those comments that most concern the validity of the study proposed, including the consistency of what study participants might have grasped from the questions. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 21 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The work of Amann and colleagues describe the impact of artificial intelligence (AI) in medicine, especially in the field of stroke. The authors used a semi-structured interview approach to identify the relationship of stakeholders, such as stroke-survivors, their family and healthcare professionals, to the use of AI in a clinical context. The authors found that across study participants the use of AI is seen positively, however, they were hesitant if AI is used as a stand-alone, not supervised solution. Overall, especially the responsibility, legal and ethical aspect is discussed, and advocate that these issues need to be addressed in an appropriate fashion. In general, as an AI practitioner, who is heavily involved in clinical practice and tries to bring sophisticated AI into the clinic, I really like the comprehensive view of the authors. However, I personally would like to rephrase the AI part or at least specify that the authors most likely mean deep learning/Neural networks with their black box character. I have a few comments on the technical slang. Major comments - Discussion that AI is commonly biased, racist and sexist. Please discuss these aspects as I think this highly influences views, decisions, and may affect diagnoses and therapy. The point of view of the interviewed people that AI “may compensate for human bias” (l. 268) will definitely not happen without precautionary measures, and a subsentence like in l. 426 is not enough - Some of the comments mention digitalization of health, such as repeatedly giving information, rather than focusing on AI. As the paper should highlight the AI, I would see that the authors do highlight AI-related comments. Minor comments - L. 83-86. The “if-then” statements do also apply for AI-based solutions. For example, decision trees are a very common example. Also, the expert medical knowledge is/or can be used to train an AI system. I think the authors mean that in deep learning features are extracted by the neural network, esp. In medical imaging approaches, where it is hard to explain/interpret how the system works. - L. 89-90. In each ultrasound system to monitor any pregnancy AI is built in and used to date. Again, I think the authors mean latest deep neural networks. - L. 102. Please emphasize the perceived risks. The use of medical AI is both, emotionally impacting the patient (“a machine is treating me”) and rationally impacting (“a machine given the circumstances, no matter of night, day or the 50th patient in a row gives me the same accuracy and quality”). - L. 142. I was wondering how non-professionals deal with “ethical questions”. Even ethics experts have doubts about the use of AI and responsibility, I would like to see this discussed appropriately. L. 175. Silly, but could you please rename “Findings” to “Results”? It is more convenient for academic papers. - HCP. I assume that means Health Care Professional? Please introduce the abbreviation appropriately. - L. 223-225. This sounds like the description of a digital twin (“what worked for person X with the same symptoms/stroke signs may also work for you”). I think the name dropping would be here appropriate. - L. 525ff. I am not sure about these sentences. The problem of explainable AI is mostly because e.g. Deep Neural Networks are used for the analysis of unstructured data, but how they work is barely explainable. Whereas for structured data, models like support vector machines, logistic regression and decision trees are very easy to comprehend and interpretable. This is why particular focus is on the former instead of the latter. Reviewer #2: AI in healthcare is a complicated issue that not only stroke survivors but also physicians may lack basic knowledge on the subject. My main concern is that patients or health care providers could possibly be nudged towards certain answers in difficult questions when they lacked deep knowledge of the subject. In some responses, I think the way "AI" is used, probably refers to "automation" rather than AI; in other instance, a patient probably refers to electronic health files rather than AI. Line 436: HCP4 is probably the only specific reference to an AI system used by a participant; HCP4 refers to "CT monitoring" and goes on to express his concerns on automated arrhythmia detection... Isn't she/he referring to an ECG monitoring rather than a CT monitoring? Probably implantable Holter for paroxysmal AF detection. The study has been promoted on websites in search of participants as research on AI (?), meaning participants would probably show interest in something they are already aware about. Had health care professionals used AI tools in their everyday clinical practice? Has AI been used in the care of stroke patients at any point? If so, were patients aware of the use of AI? If not, what exactly has been evaluated in this study? Their general knowledge on the subject? Have the researchers used open-ended questions in the beginning of the interviews? what was the reaction of the researchers when answers revealed misunderstanding of what AI in stroke care means ? Did they provide information on what AI in stroke care means, before showing the clinical vignette? Despite the fact that the manuscript is well-written, I find very little evidence that participants' knowledge and, therefore, views on AI would be any different from the general population of physicians and patients, since there seems to have little practical experience arising from true encounters with AI tools. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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