Peer Review History
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PONE-D-22-06872Psychometric properties of three online-related addictive behavior instruments among Bangladeshi school-going adolescentsPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Islam, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The manuscript has been evaluated by two reviewers, and their comments are available below. The reviewers have raised a number of major concerns. They request improvements to the reporting of methodological aspects of the study such as clarification regarding the data set and analysis, and the questionnaires used. Could you please carefully revise the manuscript to address all comments raised? Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 16 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank-you for the opportunity to review the manuscript, “Psychometric properties of three online-related addictive behavior instruments among Bangladeshi school-going adolescents”. The purpose of the study was to develop and investigate the psychometric properties of the Bangla Internet Gaming Disorder Scale– Short-Form (IGDS9-SF), Gaming Disorder Test (GDT), and Bergen Social Media Addiction Scale (BSMAS). The study adopted a cross-sectional survey with paper-and-pencil. While the manuscript was generally well-written, I have some concerns about key study information that appears to be missing from the manuscript; and, some clarification from the authors regarding the data set and analyses are also recommended. My comments are outlined below and I sincerely hope that the authors find them helpful in any future revisions of their work. 1. In the introduction section, I suggest that the authors describe some to the three main scales of the article. A brief review of the research on these three scales in relation to the measurement of Internet Gaming Disorderm, Gaming Disorder and social media addiction and clarification of the importance of these three scales. 2. In the participants section, due to the global impact of COVID-19 and the possible impact of the pandemic on problematic Internet behavior among adolescents, I suggest that the authors include a description of the pandemic in Bangladesh (with particular emphasis on the impact on adolescents) 3. Regarding to the demographic measure, it is curious why included maritial status, family type, monthly family income, and current living status? From the following analysis, these demographic variables did not have any relationship with the statistical analysis. Perhaps the authors could consider further comparisons for these personal background variables on the three scales (presented in an appendix). 4. In the results section, I suggest that the authors use the Shapiro-Wilk test to test whether the data conform to a normal distribution, rather than just presenting the values of Skewness and Kurtosis. In the case of addiction measures, the data can easily violate the normal distribution, so perhaps using other estimation (e.g., DWLS) for CFA is a better way to address this issue. 5. I also suggested to explain why adding the estimation of the correlation of measurement error of the items in Figure 1. 6. Regarding to the convergent validity, it's a bit confusing, why the correlation coefficient between the scales can demonstrate the convergent validity. Moreover, there is also a demonstration of the convergent validity in the section of scale-level psychometric properties. It is recommended that the author add explanations or adjust the positions of the two. Reviewer #2: The presentation of the validation of the adapted versions of three scales belonging to the topic of internet addiction is to be appreciated. Beyond these, there are a number of methodological issues, more precisely certain aspects that do not consistently support what the authors claim. Find the related details below: (1) The theoretical framing of the research is missing. The relevant theories for the behavioral addictions analyzed in this research should be mentioned. (2) Previous studies in the psychometric literature regarding versions adapted in other languages/cultures are also missing. A few are only mentioned in the Discussions section. To complete these aspects and to emphasize the importance/necessity of the extension of this empirical body, an extension to which you are actually trying to contribute. (3) It should also be mentioned that the validation studies include CTT, as well as advanced approaches (i.e., IRT). For IGD9SF mention: https://doi.org/10.1007/s11469-018-9890-z For BSMAS mention: https://doi.org/10.1556/2006.6.2017.071 https://doi.org/10.1007/s11469-021-00732-7 Also mention the studies that proposed various cutoffs: For IGD9SF https://doi.org/10.3389/fpsyt.2020.00470 For BSMAS https://doi.org/10.1556/2006.2021.00025 Even if you mentioned some of them (not all) in the Discussions, they must be specified (synthetically, obviously) in the theoretical background as well (4) Page 8, line 3: It should be mentioned that the adapted versions of the Patient Health Questionnaire [PHQ-9] and Generalized Anxiety Disorder [GAD-7] questionnaires were used). (5) You did not mention anything about outliers, multivariate data distribution, estimation method used, in CFA (6) You analyzed the reliability using the Cronbach alpha coefficient, although the tau-equivalence assumption is clear that it is not fulfilled because all item discriminations are not equal. To be completed here with model-based reliability, which does not require tau-equivalence (7) You did not explain the connection between floor effect and ceiling effect with psychometric robustness. More precisely, you emphasized that these effects are not present (although in the case of one scale the cutoff recommended in the literature was slightly exceeded), but you did not explain which is relevant to the validity of the studied scales (8) According to the data presented in Table 6, it is a problem related to the IGD9SF scale. From what you report, it appears that only 34% of the variance is explained by the modeled latent variable, that is, internet gaming disorder. You did not correctly reproduce the amendment proposed by Fornell and Larker (1981). They specified that AVE has a cutoff >.50, but a threshold of .40 is accepted only if CR>.60. You mentioned something else on page 15, namely that it is about values lower than .50, although the authors explicitly mention that the threshold of .40 is also accepted. It can be seen that this criterion is not met in your case, since AVE is .34. (9) You did not discuss anything about the fact that a third of the items of this scale have small slopes, slightly above the allowed threshold. Obviously, that is why the AVE is so small. (10) You correlated the residuals in three situations and did not explain anything. Anyway, this option is considered in the psychometric literature to be avoided because it represents an artificial forcing to obtain a good model fit. To inspect the covariance matrix (11) It should be mentioned that the RMSEA in the case of BSMAS indicates a mediocre fit between your model and the data (12) Page 17 _ You stated that: "In the present study, all fit indices obtained in the CFA were well-accepted in their conventional thresholds". As I mentioned above, it is to be discussed here. The term “all” is too inclusive compared to the results obtained. So reformulate, nuance and explain. Good luck! ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Elena Stanculescu ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Psychometric properties of three online-related addictive behavior instruments among Bangladeshi school-going adolescents PONE-D-22-06872R1 Dear Dr. Islam, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Keiko Nakamura Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thanks to the author for revising the manuscript. The questions I raised have been properly answered and corrected by the authors. The quality of the article has also improved. I suggest that this article can be published, and good luck to the author Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: I-Hua Chen Reviewer #2: Yes: Elena Stănculescu ********** |
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PONE-D-22-06872R1 Psychometric properties of three online-related addictive behavior instruments among Bangladeshi school-going adolescents Dear Dr. Islam: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Professor Keiko Nakamura Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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