Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMay 6, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-13251Prevalence of hepatitis B and C virus infections in Lao People’s Democratic Republic: a population-based cross-sectional surveyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Miyano, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 08 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Additional Editor Comments: Dear Author, Thanks for sending the paper intitled: "Prevalence of hepatitis B and C virus infections in Lao People’s Democratic Republic: a population-based cross-sectional survey". This is the first population-based prevalence investigation of hepatitis B and C viruses in the Lao People's Democratic Republic. The study is significant however some issues were raised by reviewers and I suggest major revision of this article. Sincerely, Livia [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Dear authors, The paper entitled has has merit and will probably give a significant contribution to the field. However, some improvements should be made to make it suitable for publication. -Table 1 is disorganized and needs to be better structured. For example, it would be better to have separate columns for the studied population and the "n" sample. Furthermore, it would be better to use it in comparison with the results obtained in the study rather than in the introduction. Methods -Lines 129-131: In the sentence: “For the third stage, 42 participants 130 (including 8, 6, 6, 16, and 6 in the 1–2, 5–14, 15–19, 20–39, and ≥40 year age groups, 131 respectively) were randomly selected...” What do these numbers mean? Please, clarify. Results: -In general, tables could be better structured and organized. Table 2, for exemple, could be summarized by classifying age groups every 10 years. -Page 18, line 219: “those WHO REPORTED sharing needle for drug injection showed...” -As no variables were statistically significant, table 4 is not necessary. Discussion Page 20, line 238: “In addition, female HBV carriers have lower viral loads than male carriers...” The authors did not performed viral load analysis in this study. If this comment refers to another study (reference 42), this needs to be clarified. Page 21, lines 245-255: Could this difference be related to the sexual behavior of individuals aged 20-29 years? Are they more likely to be single? Multiple partners? Non condom users? Page 22, line 267: “...the differences in sexual practice and parent-to-child transmission...” it would be better to replace "parent-to-child" with "vertical transmission". Page 22, lines 275-277: The sentences “Hmong people have been recognized as having a high prevalence of HBV infection by the studies in the US [49-52] and Thailand [53-55] due to their sexual risk behaviors.” And “Some papers indicated that Khmu people had higher likeliness of aspiration to the commercial sex industry due to their economic restriction...” Please check if these affirmations complies with ethical criteria, as associating an ethnicity with risky sexual behavior can give rise to discrimination. I suggest rewriting these sentences observing this criteria. Reviewer #2: The study presented by Miyano et al is the first population-based prevalence investigation of hepatitis B and C viruses in the Lao People's Democratic Republic. The study is significant since it is the first population-based prevalence study in this country, bringing new information to the region. Despite its merits, the article contains some major aspects that must be corrected and clarified: - Title: To highlight the significance of the work, the authors should mention in the title that it is the first population-based prevalence study made in the country. - Abstract: Line 44 - phrase is not clear, needs adjustment - Instroduction Line 89 - phrase is not clear, needs adjustment - Materials and methods: Section "Sample size calculation" Lines 112 to 120 - We know that the authors used a sample size from the rubeola and measles studies, but it would be clearer and more straightforward to begin with the sample size for hepatitis B and C. Line 130 - Why were the age groups divided in this way? Is there a reason? Was it based on the population's average age? Please elaborate on this point. - Results: Line 169 - Is the population based on the rubella and measles survey? or is it the population already estimated for hepatitis B and C? This is not very clear. Line 171 - The same goes for this sentence, it is noticed here that the population examined is larger than the estimated sample n for HBV and HCV. Is this population based on the rubella and measles survey, or on the estimated population for hepatitis? Please clarify. Table 2 - The sum of the individuals in this "Sex" category does not match the total of the analyzed population, nine individuals are missing. Are they missing their sex? Provide the missing data in the table, either as a new column or footnote identifiable by a marker. Table 2 - The same occurs for the ethnicity category, 73 individuals are missing in the sum to reach the total value. And also in the "Education history" category, 199 individuals are missing for the total sum of the population. In the paragraph of the section "Seroprevalence of HBsAg" (lines 182 to 195) and "Seroprevalence of HCV-Ab" (lines 210 o 220), provide the absolute number of the number of cases for the data presented. Table 3 and 4 - Provide the absolute number of cases for the data presented. - Discussion: Lines 239 to 240 - Because the study offered as a comparison was conducted on a relatively specific group, the placement should be interpreted with caution. Studies in different communities and areas may demonstrate different or equal prevalences for HCV, where women may have a greater or equal soprevalence for HCV than males. (Niu et al, 2016 [DOI: 10.1186/s40064-016-3224-z]; Peliganga et al, 2021 [DOI: 10.3390/pathogens10121633]; Rangel et al, 2021[DOI: 10.1016/j.clgc.2020.08.006]; Bisseye et al, 2018). Lines 258 to 259 - The placement presented was unclear. However, there were no cases in adults under the age of 30, and was maternal-infant transmission suspected? Did you mean to mean those over the age of 40? In addition, the fact that the prevalence of hepatitis C grows with age, as studies have demonstrated, is an interesting approach to consider and discuss. (Peliganga et al, 2021 [DOI: 10.3390/pathogens10121633]; Abdella, et al, 2020 [DOI: 10.1371/journal.pone.0241086]; Vermeulen et al, 2017 [DOI: 10.3201/eid2309.161594]). Lines 269 to 270 - The term used is out of date and should be replaced by sexually transmitted infections. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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PONE-D-22-13251R1Prevalence of hepatitis B and C virus infections in Lao People’s Democratic Republic: the first national population-based cross-sectional surveyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Miyano, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 11 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments : Dear Author, Thanks for sending the revision of this manuscript. After reading the comments of reviewers, I suggested minor revision, Sincerely, Livia Villar [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Dear authors, The manuscript was improved considerably. Most of my queries were addressed. However, I would suggest that a careful review of the language be carried out before publication. Reviewer #2: I don't have any other observations. All comments have been addressed. I congratulate the authors for their work. ********** 7. 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Prevalence of hepatitis B and C virus infections in Lao People’s Democratic Republic: the first national population-based cross-sectional survey PONE-D-22-13251R2 Dear Dr. Miyano, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Livia Melo Villar Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Dear Author, Thanks for sending me the paper for my evaluation. After reading reviewer's comments and author's response, I recommend the publication of this paper, sincerely, Livia Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-22-13251R2 Prevalence of hepatitis B and C virus infections in Lao People’s Democratic Republic: the first national population-based cross-sectional survey Dear Dr. Miyano: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Livia Melo Villar Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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