Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJune 30, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-18537Prevalence of prediabetes and type 2 diabetes mellitus in south and southeast Asian women with history of gestational diabetes mellitus: systematic review and meta-analysis PLOS ONE Dear Prof. Saravanan, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 16 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors report the prevalence of pre-diabetes and diabetes among women with prior GDM. The main challenge in understanding these data is the high level of heterogeneity. The heterogeneity is not surprising given the variation in populations, in follow-up time and in diagnostic criteria of both GDM and of the outcomes of T2DM and pre-diabetes. This heterogeneity precludes simple summary statistics such as overall prevalence. It makes no sense to average the prevalence of diabetes in cohorts that are so different (eg 27 women followed for two years in Pakistan with 342 women followed for up to 15 years in Malaysia), since the average can’t be applied to anyone. A narrative description with some attempt to group by important risk factors is the approach needed here. This also relates to the study aims, which indicate an intention to estimate pooled prevalence, when such an outcome was never likely to be possible. Even if the attempt was to estimate a prevalence for the region, it can only have meaning when stratified by follow-up time, and depends on getting studies from each country in the region. Furthermore, weighting the prevalence estimates by sample size (as per meta-analysis) does not help in estimating the prevalence in the region, as a large study from a small country will skew results towards the small country. I couldn’t find the supplementary tables. I was concerned about the quality and representativeness of some of the studies. Three studies followed fewer than 100 women with GDM, and it seems rather unlikely that such studies have an adequate epidemiological design to provide T2DM incidence in a manner that can be generalized. For example, reference 35 provides data on only 27 women. Looking at the paper itself, it becomes apparent that the recruitment was from a tertiary hospital, and that of the 78 women identified with GDM, only 27 were re-screened for T2DM. The 78 is likely a biased sample of the general GDM population, and the 27 are likely a biased sample of the 78. Such a study doesn’t contribute usefully to the authors’ aims. How carefully have other studies been reviewed? Abstract results. ‘The relative risk of T2DM among women with history of GDM from SA and SEA was 13 times higher than’. A relative risk can’t be higher in one group than in another. Only the risk can be higher. Line 68-69. ‘The rate of prediabetes among these women was observed to be between 3.9% and 50.9%’. The word ‘rate’ implies a time component, but these look like prevalence data. Please be more precise with language. Line 71. ‘during 6 weeks postpartum to 28 years postpartum’. Replace ‘during’ with ‘from’. Line 229. Relative risk of diabetes appears to have been calculated from the published data, and presumably therefore was unable to adjust for confounders such as age. If this is the case, then the RR is quite possibly very misleading, and should not be presented. Line 249. ‘indicating that it lies closer to the pooled overall prevalence’. Closer than what? English language use needs to be improved throughout by a native English speaker. Reviewer #2: The growing prevalence of type 2 diabetes in SA and SEA regions is a major concern. Gestational Diabetes is well recognised as a major risk factor for future diabetes. However, the lack of data in SA /SEA populations until recently, has been a major limitation to understand the true impact of this problem and to develop effective interventions. Improved understanding of the risks and opportunities to mitigate this can have he benefits for the prevention of T2DM and maternal health. This systematic review and meta- analysis addresses this important issue and provides a fairly good insights on the risk of T2DM in patients with GDM. The work presented here is of good quality but there are a few points that need clarification. 1. Abstract : This is good overall. It would be good to provide some data/figures in relation to the last sentence of the results section. 2. Introduction: It is well written and references and places the research in context. 3. Methods: A lot of detail is provided and the essential ,principles of systematic review have been followed. PRISMA guidelines have been adhered to. I would suggest it would be better to describe the combinations of SEARCH terms used to identify the relevant papers. It is surprising to see that Chinese data was not considered in this study. Why? What group would Chinese be categorised under by the authors? Although SA and SEA share many common characteristics, many would regard them as distinct ethnic groups. What is the rationale in combining them? As evident from the data and also the meta analysis, there is considerable heterogeneity between the studies. Moreover , including retrospective, cross sectional and prospective studies together actually weakens the study. Wonder if it would be more prudent to focus on prospective studies that have a nonGDM comparison group. It is common experience that most GDM patients do not attend follow up. It is therefore difficult to ascertain if all those with GDM were assessed for the duration of the studies and if they had a test to confirm the glycemic status. Lot of attrition can be expected in these situations and can therefore lead to under or over estimation of the true risk. No data is provided regarding this. Also, were there any other tests eg HbA1c used to diagnose pre-diabetes and diabetes? Given the high prevalence of T2DM in these populations, it is possible that some of the subjects classed as GDM may in fact be T2DM or PRE DIABETES prior to pregnancy. How was this addressed in the studies? For the 3 studies that were used for computing Relative Risk, was that based on incident Pre-diabetes or Diabetes? It would be good to see some data on additional risk factors if available eg parity, family history? A risk score /calculator I mentioned in the manuscript but I could not find it ( apologies if I missed it). Discussion The discussion is well written and balanced. It can be improved by some reference to data in other populations and how these findings compare by providing some figures and data. More so with reference to other ethnic groups with similarly high pre disposition to T2DM such as PIMA Indians etc. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Srikanth Bellary ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Prevalence of prediabetes and type 2 diabetes mellitus in south and southeast Asian women with history of gestational diabetes mellitus: systematic review and meta-analysis PONE-D-22-18537R1 Dear Prof. Saravanan, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Diane Farrar Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments: I have enjoyed reading this informative, very well written and conducted review, I commend you and your colleagues for your hard work |
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PONE-D-22-18537R1 Prevalence of prediabetes and type 2 diabetes mellitus in south and southeast Asian women with history of gestational diabetes mellitus: systematic review and meta-analysis Dear Dr. Saravanan: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Diane Farrar Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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