Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJune 16, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-17250Adolescents with health complaints are more likely to develop persistent musculoskeletal pain: The Fit Futures StudyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Smedbråten, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 27 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The evidence level of no association is low due to the small event numbers of this study (i.e., Total=500 / Event=10~15, these sample may lead to small sample bias). So please tone down the main results. I.e., Our analyses showed no significant associations between asthma, allergic rhinitis, eczema, headache or psychological distress and persistent musculoskeletal pain onset. -> Our analyses showed low evidence of potential associations between asthma, allergic rhinitis, eczema, headache or psychological distress and persistent musculoskeletal pain onset, although the event numbers were small. #2. The authors have to cite the statistical guideline such as https://doi.org/10.54724/lc.2022.e3 Thank you. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This study aims to assess whether specific health complaints and an accumulation of 33 health complaints were associated with the onset of persistent musculoskeletal pain 2 years later. The work is systematically well done by analyzing the effect of each health complaints on musculoskeletal pain. My main concern is the necessity of this research. Although it is interesting to note that Adolescents with health complaints are more likely to 2 develop persistent musculoskeletal pain, I still wonder what this research will lead us to. I am also wondering if could self-reported questionnaire, “Do you have persistent or constantly recurring pain that has lasted for 3 months or more?” or “ Has a doctor ever told you that you have...”, work as a proper criterion. It would be great if the authors can provide some references to questions themselves to support the background. P values should follow the reporting of comparisons of absolute numbers or rates and measures of uncertainty. There is a lack of explanation for the reasons for the health complaints that have been linked to musculoskeletal pain. It would be nice to supplement it through an intensive literature review. Reviewer #2: This paper is interesting and technically well performed. I think it needs only few corrections. Abstract Both in the abstract and in the text, it should be stated that health complaints such as asthma, allergic rhinitis, eczema, headache, abdominal pain, psychological distress, AND OTHERS are assessed. Otherwise, it seems that only 5 possible health complaints are assessed. Materials and Methods 108-109: Moreover, 202 participants reported persistent musculoskeletal pain at baseline and were not at risk of developing the outcome of interest. 133-134: The measurement of persistent musculoskeletal pain at baseline was only used to identify the population at risk in our cohort study. I think that saying “the population at risk” is not correct. The population is at risk of starting chronic musculoskeletal pain but those who are excluded already have chronic musculoskeletal pain. It is more understandable that the 202 patients with baseline pain are excluded from the sample and that the measurement of persistent pain was only used to define the study population, without pain at baseline. 173-176: The accumulated number of health complaints was analysed as a continuous variable and included the specific health complaints investigated in this study (asthma, allergic rhinitis, eczema, psychological distress, headache, and abdominal pain) and other complaints captured through “other health complaints”. “Other health complaints” were collected as a yes or no variable. In the case of having more than one health complaint (apart from the 5 specific ones), was the number collected for analysis? If it did not occur in any case, indicate it in the results. Results 245: The two-year incidence of persistent musculoskeletal pain was 13.8 % (95% CI 11.1, 17.0). Adding the number of cases, not just the percentage, is not in the table either. Discussion 283-286: An association between psychological distress and future musculoskeletal pain has been demonstrated in previous studies [13], but was not found in our study. Differences in populations, exposure measurement, outcome definitions and follow-up periods might explain the discrepancy in results. The results may be influenced by the fact that patients who already have pain at baseline have been excluded from the study (202). This group probably has a higher percentage of health complaints, including psychological distress, and its inclusion would give more statistical power to the study. It would be interesting to have the data of this group of patients with pain at the beginning, how many were still in pain at the end of follow-up and how many had other health complaints. 300-303: To the best of our knowledge, this is the first cohort study to investigate the association between an accumulation of health complaints and persistent musculoskeletal pain in adolescents, including both medical diagnoses, psychological and somatic symptoms. You have to write … the association between an accumulation of health complaints and THE ONSET OF persistent musculoskeletal pain. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Adolescents with health complaints are more likely to develop persistent musculoskeletal pain: The Fit Futures Study PONE-D-22-17250R1 Dear Dr. Smedbråten, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Dong Keon Yon, MD, FACAAI Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): This is an excellent paper. Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: It would be interesting to do further research on why abdominal pain is associated with persistent musculoskeletal pain in adolescence Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Gun Ahn Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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PONE-D-22-17250R1 Accumulation of health complaints is associated with persistent musculoskeletal pain two years later in adolescents: The Fit Futures Study Dear Dr. Smedbråten: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Dong Keon Yon Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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