Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionOctober 12, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-32770Preferred Music-Listening Level in Musicians and Non-MusiciansPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Kluk, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. Our apologies that the review of your paper has taken so long and you will see that we were only able to secure one reviewer. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The independent reviewer has a number of comments about the methodology, especially the NESI procedure and the sampling approach. As editor, I concur with this and also have some additional comments which are attached including some reflections on the discussion which you should consider. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jun 16 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Peter Thorne, CNZM PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: When submitting your revision, we need you to address these additional requirements. 1. Please ensure that your manuscript meets PLOS ONE's style requirements, including those for file naming. The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and 2. We note that the grant information you provided in the ‘Funding Information’ and ‘Financial Disclosure’ sections do not match. When you resubmit, please ensure that you provide the correct grant numbers for the awards you received for your study in the ‘Funding Information’ section. 3. Thank you for stating the following financial disclosure: "* AOD, EP, KK NIHR (National Institute for Health Research) Manchester Biomedical Research Centre * EP, KK MRC (Medical Research Council), UK (MR/L003589/1)" Please state what role the funders took in the study. If the funders had no role, please state: "The funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript." If this statement is not correct you must amend it as needed. Please include this amended Role of Funder statement in your cover letter; we will change the online submission form on your behalf. Additional Editor Comments (if provided): This is an interesting and overall well-written paper that looks at the preferred music listening levels in musicians and non-musicians. There are a number of areas which could be addressed to improve tje manuscript. Line 91: More detail is needed on the characteristics of the participants, especially the types of gigs/concerts and instruments used by the musicians group. This could be an additional supplementary table Line 143: Explain why the statistical analysis of the audiogram relates solely to 8kHz, given they have overlapping SD, or analyse the audiograms across the range of frequencies. Line 170: It would be useful to have more descriptions about the NESI approach and how it was undertaken. Details of the type of noise exposure for all the participants would be of interest given that potentially the main noise exposure for the musicians was the concerts and gigs. It would help to understand the relationship of the effect of NESI on preferred listening levels and musicianship (line 261) and the possibility of hearing damage as a cause of the relationship in the discussion. What was the extent of hearing protection use in these participants given the focus on the importance of hearing protection in the paper. This appears in the discussion only as a comment. Line 273. provide a reference for the activation of the IPL in musicians and the role of the IPL in perception. The structure of the discussion implies that the 3 aims are independent. The possibility of hearing damage from excessive sound exposure from continual loud music could be the key factor and needs to be discussed more relative to the type of exposures and the segmentation across the lifespan. This is mentioned, and the possibility of synaptopathy is a good point, but generally it is glossed over in favour of other theories, including vestibular activation for which no data is presented. Unfortunately because of the lack of testing in the extended high frequencies and lack of any other audiometry testing, such as speech reception in noise it is not possible to rule out a hearing deficit as a cause of the relationship of musicianship and preferred listening levels. The possibility of hearing damage as a significant contributing factor needs to be more strongly emphasized in the conclusions along with the importance of future research that investigates the integrity of high frequency hearing and hearing performance in musicians when investigating music listening levels. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for the opportunity to review this manuscript. Please find below my comments for your consideration. ABSTRACT: - The last sentence of the abstract concludes that, '...use of hearing protection is vital for their hearing health and career longevity'. How is hearing protection related to music listening levels - which is the focus of your study? Your three main findings relate to listening levels specifically. Perhaps, you would want to consider a concluding remark related to safe listening and hearing conservation (which will include elements of hearing protection for musicians when playing instruments). MATERIALS AND METHODS: - Participants - how were the participants identified and recruited? What was the sampling/recruitment strategy? - Preferred music level - 'Following the hearing screening, participants were presented with six music samples and one environmental sound...'. What were the six music samples and environmental sound? The bird sound is first mentioned in the 'results' section. It needs to be introduced in the methods. - What was the duration of the sample sounds if they were not stopped? - 'This process was repeated three times and an average value was determined for each music sample'. Was there a break between the three times or was it simultaneous? - Noise exposure - How long does it take to conduct the NESI interview? - The original Guest paper on NESI, ' The methods by which noise exposure data are obtained and combined fall into seven basic categories: (a) identification of exposure activities, (b) segmentation of the lifespan, (c) estimation of exposure duration, (d) estimation of exposure level, (e) consideration of hearing protection, (f) quantification of firearm noise exposure, and (g) calculation of noise exposure units'. Did you do this in your research when using NESI? This section needs greater detail. For example, were participants given examples of different sources of noise exposure? Was there segmentation of lifespan? - Analysis - How was the NESI score calculated? DISCUSSION: If the above questions related to NESI are clarified, there can be a better judgement of the discussion of noise exposure on page 13. Given that you categorized noise exposure into occupational, recreational and firearm use, my assumption is that musicians will have high occupational and recreational noise exposure purely by nature of their work and interest. That would mean that the comparable group should have been recruited from similar occupational groups where there is noise exposure as part of their daily work. LIMITATIONS: My suggestion is to remove 'time constraints' as a reason for the smaller sample size. Instead just state that you had a smaller sample than what was planned. - Page 16, ' Additionally, it could be considered that the use of a subjective self-report measure of noise exposure (see [35], Section 1.3.10)'. I am not sure what this sentence is about? ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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Preferred Music-Listening Level in Musicians and Non-Musicians PONE-D-21-32770R1 Dear Dr. Kluk, Thank you for your re-submitted manuscript and for addressing the issues raised during the review. We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Peter Thorne, Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): The issues and comments are all suitably addressed. Thank you. Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for the response to the review. These were satisfactorily addressed. You may consider adding an anonymized dataset as supplementary material. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No ********** |
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PONE-D-21-32770R1 Preferred Music-Listening Level in Musicians and Non-Musicians Dear Dr. Kluk: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Peter Rowland Thorne Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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