Peer Review History
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PONE-D-22-19951Leader Extraversion and Team Performance: A Moderated Mediation ModelPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Zhang, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== Reviewer 1: Although the paper is well written but requires several changes, a few of them are as follows Abstract Add a background sentence before stating the objective of the study. In addition, when and how data was collected [I mean how respondents were selected; in which month or year data was collected]. Besides, also highlight which software has been used for the analysis. Finally, add a conclusion sentence and add some implications. Introduction This section was very limited. There is a need to add more content [why this research is needed] and highlight the research gap by covering each relationship proposed in the model. Based on the research gap, draw the research questions and objective and add the contribution paragraph in the last. I will suggest you cite recent work instead of old work. I will suggest moving to figure 1 in the next section's theoretical background after the hypotheses end. Theoretical background and hypotheses I could not find any explanation for the distal-proximal motivational and situational strength theories. There is a need to define the assumptions of both theories first. After that, based on theoretical argument, construct your hypotheses. Referring to line 68 [author argues no work]. However, several studies investigate the mediation of work engagement. Tanskanen, J., Mäkelä, L. & Viitala, R. Linking Managerial Coaching and Leader–Member Exchange on Work Engagement and Performance. J Happiness Stud 20, 1217–1240 (2019). https://doi.org/10.1007/s10902-018-9996-9 Gutermann, D., Lehmann-Willenbrock, N., Boer, D., Born, M. and Voelpel, S.C. (2017), How Leaders Affect Followers’ Work Engagement and Performance: Integrating Leader−Member Exchange and Crossover Theory. Brit J Manage, 28: 299-314. https://doi.org/10.1111/1467-8551.12214 Methodology Add a sampling section and explain further how respondents have been selected. In addition, add each constructs item used in the study. Results Divide the results section into the measurement model and structural model. In particular, in the measurement model, use EFA to better look into the multicollinearity issues; the current results are insufficient to comment further. Discussion This section needs substantial changes. Initially, divide this section into three sub-parts: theoretical and practical implications, limitations, and future research. Secondly, discuss your result in the context of prior studies which is missing. Theoretical and practical implications require to be supported by citations. Reviewer 2: Changes which must be made before publication: I found the paper very interesting. But I have some comments which might help you improve your work: 1. I found sentence structure problems in your text that must be corrected. In introduction part: 2. the arguments of your introduction do not arrive at your research questions. 3. There are various studies on leader characteristics and team performance how your study is different from them? 4. Proper attention must be given to gap identification, problem, and research questions in your study 5. Research gap for mediation and moderation role must also be discussed. 6. Conceptual model of the study must be discussed in terms of research gap in existing studies and why it is important. In materials and methods Part: 7. Please provide the justification for using this measure of dependent variable - self-report. What are other available ways and why this one is better measure? 8. In discussion part, the discussion of findings is poorly written. It would be better if you discuss the novelty of the findings and its relevant insights with divergent views that may differ from other studies but helpful to your readers. 9. Also update the discussion part with recommendations and insights from recent literature. 10. The conclusion of the study is very shallow and merely repeating results. What are the insights of this study and what are its practical implications to real world. 11. How can you enhance the generalizability of your study? Kindly work on this. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 13 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. 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Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Although the paper is well written but requires several changes, a few of them are as follows Abstract Add a background sentence before stating the objective of the study. In addition, when and how data was collected [I mean how respondents were selected; in which month or year data was collected]. Besides, also highlight which software has been used for the analysis. Finally, add a conclusion sentence and add some implications. Introduction This section was very limited. There is a need to add more content [why this research is needed] and highlight the research gap by covering each relationship proposed in the model. Based on the research gap, draw the research questions and objective and add the contribution paragraph in the last. I will suggest you cite recent work instead of old work. I will suggest moving to figure 1 in the next section's theoretical background after the hypotheses end. Theoretical background and hypotheses I could not find any explanation for the distal-proximal motivational and situational strength theories. There is a need to define the assumptions of both theories first. After that, based on theoretical argument, construct your hypotheses. Referring to line 68 [author argues no work]. However, several studies investigate the mediation of work engagement. Tanskanen, J., Mäkelä, L. & Viitala, R. Linking Managerial Coaching and Leader–Member Exchange on Work Engagement and Performance. J Happiness Stud 20, 1217–1240 (2019). https://doi.org/10.1007/s10902-018-9996-9 Gutermann, D., Lehmann-Willenbrock, N., Boer, D., Born, M. and Voelpel, S.C. (2017), How Leaders Affect Followers’ Work Engagement and Performance: Integrating Leader−Member Exchange and Crossover Theory. Brit J Manage, 28: 299-314. https://doi.org/10.1111/1467-8551.12214 Methodology Add a sampling section and explain further how respondents have been selected. In addition, add each constructs item used in the study. Results Divide the results section into the measurement model and structural model. In particular, in the measurement model, use EFA to better look into the multicollinearity issues; the current results are insufficient to comment further. Discussion This section needs substantial changes. Initially, divide this section into three sub-parts: theoretical and practical implications, limitations, and future research. Secondly, discuss your result in the context of prior studies which is missing. Theoretical and practical implications require to be supported by citations. Reviewer #2: Changes which must be made before publication: I found the paper very interesting. But I have some comments which might help you improve your work: 1. I found sentence structure problems in your text that must be corrected. In introduction part: 2. the arguments of your introduction do not arrive at your research questions. 3. There are various studies on leader characteristics and team performance how your study is different from them? 4. Proper attention must be given to gap identification, problem, and research questions in your study 5. Research gap for mediation and moderation role must also be discussed. 6. Conceptual model of the study must be discussed in terms of research gap in existing studies and why it is important. In materials and methods Part: 7. Please provide the justification for using this measure of dependent variable - self-report. What are other available ways and why this one is better measure? 8. In discussion part, the discussion of findings is poorly written. It would be better if you discuss the novelty of the findings and its relevant insights with divergent views that may differ from other studies but helpful to your readers. 9. Also update the discussion part with recommendations and insights from recent literature. 10. The conclusion of the study is very shallow and merely repeating results. What are the insights of this study and what are its practical implications to real world. 11. How can you enhance the generalizability of your study? Kindly work on this. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Sikandar Ali Qalati Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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Leader Extraversion and Team Performance: A Moderated Mediation Model PONE-D-22-19951R1 Dear Dr. Zhang, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. We also sugget you to proofread your manuscript. One of our reviewers are not satisfied with this. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Mingyue Fan, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Congratulations to all the authors for defending all the comments. However, I would suggest Language Editing. Reviewer #2: My Decision is Accept the article "Leader Extraversion and Team Performance: A Moderated Mediation Model" ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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PONE-D-22-19951R1 Leader Extraversion and Team Performance: A Moderated Mediation Model Dear Dr. Zhang: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Mingyue Fan Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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