Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMay 31, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-15743COVID-19 Vaccine Acceptability Among People Living with HIV in UgandaPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Muhindo, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Your submission has been evaluated by three reviewers, their comments are included below. They raised a number of reporting issues, including requests for additional information about the questionnaire, sample size calculation, and results. Please address all of the reviewers' comments in revisions to your manuscript. To elaborate on a point raised by multiple reviewers, the manuscript needs to report additional information about the development and validation of the questionnaire. The Methods section discussing this should include primary references that informed the questionnaire: currently you cite reference 24, a WHO website, but no specific research studies, scales or survey tools, or other resources that were used in developing questionnaire items. Additionally, please report in detail steps taken to translate the survey, to evaluate the validity and reliability of each version (language) of the questionnaire used in the study, and to evaluate/compare the consistency of the different translations used. Unless the questionnaire includes copyright-protected questions, a blank copy of the questionnaire should be provided as a Supporting Information file. Please also ensure that your Methods section provides a comprehensive description of inclusion and exclusion criteria that applied when selecting participants for the study. As a minor point, please use the same abbreviation for people living with HIV (either PLWHIV or PLWH) throughout the manuscript. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 15 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please ensure that your ethics statement is included in your manuscript, as the ethics statement entered into the online submission form will not be published alongside your manuscript. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The manuscript is relevant, provides interesting findings and presented in a scientifically plausible manner. However you can consider providing the following information to make it stronger; In this study COVID-19 vaccine uptake seems to be a major primary outcome that shouldn’t remain silent in the title statement. You could consider modifying the title to include uptake. Provide more information on the reliability of the questionnaire after pretesting among the 15 respondents. The manuscript would benefit from provision of the Cronbach’s alpha. You mention that the questionnaire was administered in the local language for some participants. Was it translated prior to administration or translation was left to the discretion of the research assistant. Provide more information on this in the methods as it can affect consistency of results obtained. Further elaborate how the sample size was portioned among the participating study sites to avoid bias of distribution. If it wasn’t considered then it should be mentioned among the limitations. Reviewer #2: Dear authors, thank you for submitting this interesting paper in the field of COVID -19. Please kindly refer to my suggestions and comments for your consideration. Abstract The conclusion addressed only the recommendation. Please update to include the conclusion. Background This section was well written. However, you may want to consider some of the grammatical errors I corrected within the body of the manuscript. Line 86-87, Low intentions…. as only 57.2% of PLWH were willing to receive a COVID-19 vaccine. You may consider the above edited lines compared to what you have in the manuscript. Lines 88, 92 consider replacing “vaccination hesitancy” with “vaccine hesitancy” Methods How did you arrive at the sample size of 767 participants? It’s important the readers understand how the sample size was computed. The authors need to tell us more about the questionnaire? How many sections? What was the content of each section? Cronbach’s alpha of the questionnaire? Separate the measurement of variables from the statistical analysis sub-section. The new sub-section on measurement of variables should come before statistical analysis Results What was the response rate? Line 174 ‘A third (255)’ Please rewrite and maintain consistency with other sentences. Add the 95% CI for the prevalence of vaccine acceptability. Discussion Well written and comprehensive. You need to address the generalizability of this study’s findings. Tables Be consistent with the number of decimal places (dps) across all tables. I advise you maintain 1dp. Also include the full meaning of HC, PLHW and MOH as footnotes in tables where they occurred. Reviewer #3: A very good manuscript and right on time. The title is appropriate and adequate. The objectives, questions, contexts and claims makes sense to the topic. The figures and tables are clearly presented. The conclusion is supportive of the result and data. However, o There are some grammatical errors in lines 126,39,40,98 & 99. o There is need to justify the sampling technique used for the study. o It was not included in your recruitment and data collection procedure if the researcher had access to the sampling frame which could have been a potential source of bias and as well a limitation to the study. o The first sentence in the background needs to be referenced. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Andrew Marvin Kanyike Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes: Olu-Abiodun Oluwatosin.O ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. 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COVID-19 Vaccine Acceptability, and Uptake Among People Living with HIV in Uganda PONE-D-22-15743R1 Dear Dr. Muhindo, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. The authors have reflected the updates of the three reviewers and have responded to the comments from the editor. The revisions are well elaborated within the body of the manuscript. I also wish to disclose that I participated as a reviewer for the initial evaluation of this manuscript. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Chidinma Ihuoma Amuzie, MBBS, MPHFEP, FWACP Guest Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-22-15743R1 COVID-19 Vaccine Acceptability, and Uptake Among People Living with HIV in Uganda Dear Dr. Muhindo: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Chidinma Ihuoma Ihuoma Amuzie Guest Editor PLOS ONE |
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