Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJuly 4, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-18876Quality of nutrition services in primary health care facilities of Dhaka city: state of nutrition mainstreaming in urban BangladeshPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Rasheed, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 02 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please add a citation to support this phrase or upload the data that corresponds with these findings to a stable repository (such as Figshare or Dryad) and provide and URLs, DOIs, or accession numbers that may be used to access these data. Or, if the data are not a core part of the research being presented in your study, we ask that you remove the phrase that refers to these data. Additional comments from Academic Editor: Comments to the author(s) The "Quality of nutrition services in primary health care facilities of Dhaka City: state of nutrition mainstreaming in urban Bangladesh’ is an important and interesting manuscript that identified system-level gaps in nutrition service delivery. The study uses cutting-edge methods to analyse nutrition service quality in urban Bangladesh. Peer reviewers also found this paper interesting and suggested some modifications. I also have the following comments for better clarity of this paper: Title: Authors may remove "primary" from the title as the paper considered both primary and secondary healthcare facilities (I see in table 1 that 20 secondary healthcare facilities are included in the analysis). Abstract: Please define ANC in the abstract. Please add findings with the sub-heading "Structural readiness", as they have for "process" and "outcome". Or take out all. Introduction: The introduction section does not adequately explain the existing urban nutrition services in Bangladesh. Readers may benefit from this description, please describe urban nutrition services in Bangladesh in line with the current Operations Plan for NNS. Methods: Please explain how the WHO/UNICEF NetCode protocol works for assessing health care facilities and how far the authors have used this protocol in this study. Please add a functional definition of "quality nutrition services" as considered for this study. Report how many service providers and mothers did not consent to being interviewed (non-response rate?), and how they were considered in the analysis, any statistical implications. Table 2 does not clarify the indicators adequately. In particular, what are the process and outcome indicators considered for this assessment? Line 128: Please add a comma (,) after the guidelines. For supplements, please specify whether they are capsules or tablets, (e.g., Vitamin A capsule; Iron, Folic Acid (IFA) tablet, Calcium tablet)? Line 134-137: Please clarify what are the items of the 10 questions for calculating the knowledge score. How correct answers were assessed? Were they multiple choice questions or open-ended? I propose that the authors include a supplementary table to further clarify each of the knowledge items. I am also having trouble understanding how 10-questions’ knowledge scores ranged between 0-20, given that each correct question scored 1. Line 153-54: Please specify the independent variables (e.g., type of health facility?) that are considered for multivariable modelling. Discussion: In the limitation, please acknowledge that the study did not fully comply with the WHO/UNICEF NetCode protocol and explain whether it affected the integrity of the study, if not how? Conclusion: Line 331: Use the acronym (MoHFW) as already defined earlier. References: The references of the paper do not comply with the PLoS One recommended reference style. Please revise and format all references thoroughly. Figures: Resolutions for both the figures (1A and 1B) need to be improved further. Please check PLoS One figure submission guidelines. Overall, the paper needs careful proof editing for fixing some typos throughout the paper. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: In this manuscript, authors have attempted to explore the quality of nutrition service provision at public primary health care facilities in urban Dhaka which is very timely research for Bangladesh. The findings of this study will guide the policy makers and implementer to plan interventions to improve the health services in the urban context. This is a very well written manuscript with sound statistical analysis. Minor comments: Line 86: ‘From the list we identified health facilities that provided ANC and 87 postnatal care (PNC), delivery services, and pediatric care…’. It would be great asset for the readers if you add the list of health facilities as a supplementary file. Conclusion: I would suggest the author to provide specific, bold and focused 3-4 implications of the findings which could help the reader to have an idea about way forward and also to suggest some further research areas. Reviewer #2: This research article is an effort to fill gap in the knowledge base of quality of nutrition services provided by primary and secondary healthcare providers in Dhaka city and reveals the state of nutrition services in urban setting in Bangladesh. I would recommend to accept the article for publishing, with subject to the following minor revisions: 1. In the title and abstract, you described that this research is about scrutinizing the primary healthcare services, however, you have taken samples from the secondary healthcare providers also. This should be addressed throughout the manuscript consistently. 2. In methodology part, you said about multivariate analysis, but did not say particularly which sort of multivariate analysis was performed. For example, I guess there were two different models (possibly linear regression with factor variables, not mentioned explicitly) for two different type of respondents, as they have different set of independent variables. These need to be elaborated more precisely. 3. In describing the multivariate analyses, the authors mentioned about Table 8, which is non-existent. 4. Regarding the tools, you said that minor adjustment in the context of Bangladesh has been made. However, the source tools were not described explicitly, let alone mentioning about the adjustment in specific. 5. In the introduction of abstract (line 26) there is mention of only public facilities, whereas, in results section (line 42) there are mentions of public, NGO and private service providers. 6. In discussion section, while describing the structural readiness of the providers, you described the percentage of facilities or receivers (line 273-276) having the services or about receiving the services, respectively. I would suggest to mention the figures in reverse (mentioning the % of negative side), because only then the bigger gap with bigger number would be more visible to the reader or policy makers. 7. In discussion (line 306), you mentioned about Sustainable Development Goal 2, but did not mentioned about the goal in few words. I think, for general readers, it should be mentioned in text. Further, the goal in general is about ending hunger, achieving food security and improving nutrition. So, you should mention specifically which sub-goal you intended to mention. 8. One of the missed opportunity in the discussion section is that there are absence of illustrating the outcome in the light of multivariate models. Rather, bi-variate results were mainly explained. For example, the authors could mention about that the pregnant mothers are sensitive on their satisfaction level (significantly) if under age 19 or over age 25. Further, satisfactions are significantly reducing while the recipient are receiving them from the Government facilities (p<0.001). These results and their policy implication should be reflected in the discussion section. 9. Finally, I would prefer the graphs with data value labels for the bars/columns. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Kabir Ahmad ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Quality of nutrition services in health care facilities of Dhaka city: state of nutrition mainstreaming in urban Bangladesh PONE-D-22-18876R1 Dear Dr. Rasheed, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Haribondhu Sarma Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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