Peer Review History
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PONE-D-22-22801Mechanism of LH release after peripheral administration of kisspeptin in cattlePLOS ONE Dear Dr. Singh, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 10 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The manuscript by Leonardi et al. investigates the effects of exogenous administration of kisspeptin on LH secretion and ovulatory dynamics in cattle during the follicular phase of the estrous cycle. Additionally, authors investigate the effects of KP-10 on cFOS staining on GnRH neurons as a marker for neuronal activation. Finally, authors used electron microscopy to investigate close appositions between kisspeptin terminals and GnRH projections within the median eminence. In vivo studies were performed to characterize LH secretion, ovulatory response, and subsequent progesterone secretion in response to kisspeptin. To determine the role of GnRH on the kisspeptin-induced secretion of LH, authors included a group of heifers that was previously treated with a GnRH receptor antagonist. This is an interesting work using the bovine female as an animal model. Neuroendocrine research in cattle is scarce and findings in this species nicely complement the current knowledge body generated in primates, rodents, and sheep. The manuscript is well-written and easy to follow. The rationale for these studies is straightforward and well-described in the manuscript. Overall, the experiments appear to be well performed and described in good detail in the manuscript. Controls for immunohistochemistry procedures have been properly performed. Findings presented in the manuscript are novel and of importance relevance to the field of reproductive neuroendocrinology. The following points should be addressed during the revision: Line 44 and throughout the manuscript: Since the ligand for the GPR54 has been identified, GPR54 has been renamed as Kiss1R. I suggest the authors could briefly mention here that GPR54 and Kiss1R are the same receptor and thereafter refer to the receptor as Kiss1R and not GPR54. Line 48: “Furthermore, GnRH and kisspeptin immunoreactive cells are located in close association in the preoptic area and arcuate nucleus of the hypothalamus in mice, primates, sheep [7-9] and cattle [10].”. This statement is not technically correct. Are the authors referring to cell bodies or neuronal projections? In rodents, GnRH neurons are limited to the POA. In ruminants and primates, GnRH neurons migrate caudally to the anterior portions of the hypothalamus. In rare occasions, GnRH neurons can be found in the ARC in cattle, but the large majority of GnRH neurons is located in the POA and in the anterior hypothalamic area (AHA). If authors are referring to GnRH neuronal projections, those are also not commonly present in the ARC. In all species mentioned above, the large majority of GnRH projections are in the zona externa of the median eminence. Obviously, a large amount of kisspeptin projections is also observed in the median eminence, particularly in the internal zone. Line 81: “…to stimulate GnRH neuronal cell bodies, acts on GnRH nerve terminals…” Remove “or” Line 125: Please explain how the Kp10 dose (15 mg) was determined? Extrapolation from other species? Previous studies in cattle? Line 219: While properly explained in the Methods, the design for Expt. 2 is somewhat hard to follow. A diagram figure with the experimental timeline would help readers to better understand the experimental design for study 2. Line 223: PGF2alpha: Dose? Manufacturer? Mode of administration? Line 322: Remove underline between “sections” and “from” Line 323: what do authors mean with “association between kisspeptin and GnRH nerve terminals”? I suggest the authors to replace “association” with “close-appositions” or another technical term. Line 392: remove “but” after “cows” Line 412: “Currently, this approach is not technically feasible in cattle but a similar mechanism of action of kisspeptin is plausible.” That is not necessarily correct since third ventricle cannulation can be used in cattle to collect CSF and characterize secretion of GnRH and other hypothalamic neuropeptides. Please see papers by G Williams et al. (Biology of Reproduction, 1998; 59(3), 676-683 among other papers by the same group). Line 434: replace “interesting” with “interestingly” Line 442: “Kisspeptin neurons are clustered in two locations in cows – a cranial population in the medial preoptic area and second aggregation in the caudal portion of arcuate nucleus [50]” This is not technically correct. In cattle, majority of kisspeptin neurons are located in the rostral and middle regions of the ARC (see Tanco et al., 2016 PeerJ and Alves et al., BOR 2015). Reviewer #2: The manuscript titled "Mechanism of LH release after peripheral administration of kisspeptin in cattle" investigates the mechanism whereby kisspeptin can act in cattle (lactating- Exp 1; pubertal heifers-Exp 2) to stimulate LH secretion, be it in the brain or at the pituitary. The authors are using dual immunohistochemistry in Exp 1 to pinpoint where iv kisspeptin acts to stimulate LH secretion (a dosing regimen of kisspeptin was used in a previous study which determined the dose needed to achieve adequate LH response). In addition the neuroanatomical analysis, the authors have also conducted an in vivo experiment to administer kisspeptin with and without a GnRH receptor antagonist, thereby determining if kisspeptin acts directly at the pituitary to stimulate LH secretion. The introduction and discussion are both logically sound. While there is considerable enthusiasm for this work, the concerns listed below should be addressed before full support of publication can be given by this reviewer. Major comments: 1) The sample size in Experiment 1 is very low. Together with the variability of cFos between animals and greater than 50% more GnRH neurons identified in the treatment group, could the authors accurately conclude there is no increased activity of GnRH neurons with kisspeptin administration? 2) Do the authors think the use of lactating cows with low LH response (2 of 3) may be a confounding factor in the cFos experiment? 3) Please include references to validated use of kisspeptin and cFos antibodies in bovine hypothalamic tissue or provide details of preabsorption experiments herein. Lack of primary is not sufficient to determine antibody specificity. Also include details on these important controls in either the methods section or results section. Minor comments: 1) italicize the use of in vivo, in vitro, ex vivo, etc throughout text of manuscript 2) Line 383- replace "neuron" with "cell bodies" given that you are arguing the neuron is activated at the terminal to release GnRH but not at the cell body 3) Make sure to include Cetrorelix + Kp10 in Table 3 and Figure 4 ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Rodolfo C. Cardoso Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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PONE-D-22-22801R1Mechanism of LH release after peripheral administration of kisspeptin in cattlePLOS ONE Dear Dr. Singh, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Two changes are in order:I don't see any reference to the supplemental figure in the revised paper. Make sure you describe how the experiment was done in the methods and describe the results and cite Figure S1 in the Methods or Results section of the paper. My recommendation would be to include the figure with the paper itself and not as a supplemental Figure. If you do choose to make it supplementary, submit the figure as 1 pdf file that contains the figure and figure legend. Send a copy of the manuscript that is not marked. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 30 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols. Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Peter J. Hansen Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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Mechanism of LH release after peripheral administration of kisspeptin in cattle PONE-D-22-22801R2 Dear Dr. Singh, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Peter J. Hansen Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-22-22801R2 Mechanism of LH release after peripheral administration of kisspeptin in cattle Dear Dr. Singh: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Peter J. Hansen Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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