Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionDecember 7, 2021 |
|---|
|
PONE-D-21-38690A method based on 3D affine alignment for the quantification of palatal expansionPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Farronato, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. Firstly, we would like to apologize for the delay in processing your manuscript. It has been exceptionally difficult to secure reviewers to evaluate your study. We have now received two completed reviews, which are available below. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Especially Reviewer #1 raised several scientific concerns about the current manuscript. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 28 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Thomas Tischer Staff Editor PLOS ONE Journal requirements: When submitting your revision, we need you to address these additional requirements. 1. Please ensure that your manuscript meets PLOS ONE's style requirements, including those for file naming. The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and 2. Please provide additional details regarding participant consent. In the ethics statement in the Methods and online submission information, please ensure that you have specified what type you obtained (for instance, written or verbal, and if verbal, how it was documented and witnessed). If your study included minors, state whether you obtained consent from parents or guardians. If the need for consent was waived by the ethics committee, please include this information. 3. We note that you have stated that you will provide repository information for your data at acceptance. Should your manuscript be accepted for publication, we will hold it until you provide the relevant accession numbers or DOIs necessary to access your data. If you wish to make changes to your Data Availability statement, please describe these changes in your cover letter and we will update your Data Availability statement to reflect the information you provide. 4. Your ethics statement should only appear in the Methods section of your manuscript. If your ethics statement is written in any section besides the Methods, please delete it from any other section.
Additional Editor Comments:
[Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Dear editor, dear colleagues, I am grateful for the opportunity to read and comment on this paper. This paper describes an interesting new approach to measure maxillary changes after palatal expansion. We need more research about this topic, and I was glad to find researchers working on it. Furthermore, the authors use open-source software and intent to publish all their data. Therefore, open-source software should be supported since the method will be easily accessible for researchers and clinicians worldwide. However, I recommend publication with major changes that I would like to explain below. The authors used 20 pairs of plaster casts taken before and after treatment with two different RME appliances to evaluate a new approach to measuring changes and treatment effects in the palatal vault. First, the authors describe the problem with commonly used ICP-based procedures using rigid alignment procedures: these procedures do not consider that the palate's shape changes significantly during the orthodontic treatment. Therefore, the authors propose a non-rigid approach instead. However, even this non-rigid approach depends on the 3D models being placed somewhat correctly in the 3D grid. Therefore, the starting point is a coarse alignment according to manually chosen reference points close to the first pair of rugae and the palatal midline. Then an ICP algorithm is applied, further refining the positioning. Finally, in the third step, the change in shape is calculated. This approach reminds me somehow of the RFD superimposition method, but the third step is a different algorithm. First things first. This paper needs to be clear about what it is. Therefore, the authors must define the primary research question and the primary outcome measure. The aim and the primary research question are tightly connected, and they can typically be found in the last section of the introduction. The authors write: "The present research aims to propose a new method for non-rigid alignment of 3D digital reproductions of dental arches and related structures to precisely evaluate dimensions and shape changes between two meshes taken, for example, at different time frames." Maybe this is more what the authors want, to propose the new method. However, the aim of this paper would rather be to compare expansion measurements according to the new method with measurements retrieved with the rigid method. Here we also see what my main concern with this paper is. It is not a validation study for one reason: We do not learn anything about accuracy & precision. To evaluate precision, one would expect intra- and inter-examiner reliability results. To assess the accuracy, one would need to create a specimen in 3D software, e.g. to simulate palatal expansion. In that way, the 100% correct result would be known to the authors, and they could test the results of their method against the truth. In the current version of this paper, we only learn that the average alignment error of the non-rigid approach is minor compared to the rigid method. But what does this tell us? Maybe the difference between the two models should be according to the rigid method. However, since we do not know the actual value (see above, no specimen), we cannot be sure that a lower average alignment error equals a better matching result. I assume that the average alignment error is the same as the root-mean-square (RMS) frequently used in trials. However, I'm afraid I disagree that RMS is suitable for this evaluation. The RMS is calculated on a number of randomly distributed reference points. Thus, the RMS does not take the whole geometry into account. If the actual value was known, one could conduct the superimposition according to both methods and then calculate a distance analysis. Distance analysis usually calculates differences on all points or triangles of the mesh. I understand that this work is finished and that my suggestions imply that this project needs to go back to the workbench. Simulating the expansion with a 3D software and creating a specimen is possibly too much. However, the authors could at least conduct further measurements with the same operator and some other operators. Then, we would learn more about intra- and inter-examiner reliability. Accordingly, the results section would have a bit more material. Unfortunately, the results are way too short. Yet some other important aspects: The authors describe that the reference points for the coarse alignment are around the first pair of rugae. In the literature, we read that the median point of the third pair of rugae is regarded as most but not 100% stable. The authors are right in choosing the first pair of rugae since these cases are treated with palatal expanders, and the third pair of rugae might be affected in the vertical dimension when the palate "flattens" during expansion. However, for extraction cases, the first pair of rugae is heavily influenced by orthodontic treatment. The authors need to mention this more clearly in the discussion: the more we know about the conducted treatment, the better the superimposition gets because we can choose the suitable reference structures. Unfortunately, we are still far from a one-click solution that fits all situations. Only this is an exciting finding worth being published. What is the clinical relevance, and how does your finding correspond to the traditional measures. For example, the author could add traditional measures to their data such as intermolar distance, inter canine distance, arch length, and maxilla depth. In that way, your readers can easily relate your results to what they are used to seeing when discussing palatal expansion. Since this topic is not easy to understand, I would appreciate more images. When you use figures containing multiple images, you need to name the images with letters A, B and C to refer to single images in the text. Talking about images, Figure 1 needs more explanation. I assume that all three images are from the same case. From the image to the right to judge, the 3D model literally is stretched with the affine method. Is this stretched version only used for superimposition purposes to calculate the correct position of the original untreated maxilla? I hope so. A bit more explanation would be great. Some minor comments Keeping in mind that I am not an English native speaker, I do not feel familiar with the word "mold" or "3D cast". Cast derives from the production process of casting. Thus, I would rather use "plaster casts" instead of mold and "3D models" instead of 3D cast. Reviewer #2: The quality of the English is not at an appropriate level for the journal. There are several typos. Some sentences are very long and make it difficult to understand. The article is not flowing. Although the topic is of great interest, there are bias in the research methodology. No account was taken of errors due to impression taking or the systematic error of the scanners used. Furthermore, the study is not carried out on patients but on models. For this reason, the clinical application of the study is limited. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Niels Ganzer Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
| Revision 1 |
|
A method based on 3D affine alignment for the quantification of palatal expansion PONE-D-21-38690R1 Dear Dr. Farronato, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Martina Ferrillo Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
| Formally Accepted |
|
PONE-D-21-38690R1 A method based on 3D affine alignment for the quantification of palatal expansion Dear Dr. Farronato: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Martina Ferrillo Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
Open letter on the publication of peer review reports
PLOS recognizes the benefits of transparency in the peer review process. Therefore, we enable the publication of all of the content of peer review and author responses alongside final, published articles. Reviewers remain anonymous, unless they choose to reveal their names.
We encourage other journals to join us in this initiative. We hope that our action inspires the community, including researchers, research funders, and research institutions, to recognize the benefits of published peer review reports for all parts of the research system.
Learn more at ASAPbio .