Peer Review History
Original SubmissionAugust 24, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-23618 Fatigue Following Type 2 Diabetes: Psychometric Testing of the Indonesian Version of the Multidimensional Fatigue Inventory-20 and Unmet Needs in Fatigue PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Chiu, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Based on the reviewers' suggestions, the paper needs major revision. The reviewers' comments can be found below. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 10 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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[Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Partly 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: I Don't Know 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This study examined the psychometric properties of IMFI-20 in Indonesian-speaking patients with T2DM. It showed IMFI-20 is a reliable and valid instrument assessing specific aspects of fatigue in this type of patients. The analysis seems valid; however there were multiple places with ambiguous or even incorrect statements— 1) The last sentence of abstract “We suggest that half of patients with T2DM experience fatigue, a condition is often overlooked by health-care providers, and demonstrated its excellent psychometric properties that can be adopted in studies that use fatigue as an endpoint in the Indonesian-speaking population”— what does “its” refer to? it seems to be IMFI-20; however, in this sentence literally it is not that. 2) The second paragraph of Introduction “… for fatigue in individuals with diabetes, such as …”— I am afraid you mean cancer instead of diabetes. 3) Section 2.5.1 “We applied the independent t test for categorical variables and the chi-squared test for continuous variables to compare demographic characteristics and the fatigue score”— I am afraid it’s switched. 4) Section 3.2.2 “… testing our hypothesis that patients with type 2 diabetes and a score of more than 5 in the Indonesian version of the PSQI or a HbA1C level of 6.5% or more would have a low score in the IMFI-20”— is it really your hypothesis? According to Table 4 it’s the opposite. Reviewer #2: Comments and Suggestions for Authors I had the pleasure of reviewing the manuscript " Fatigue Following Type 2 Diabetes: Psychometric Testing of the Indonesian Version of the Multidimensional Fatigue Inventory-20 and Unmet Needs in Fatigue" for PLOS ONE. Author revealed that half of patients with type 2 diabetes experience fatigue, and that the symptom of fatigue is severely neglected by health-care providers. The study, in my opinion, is interesting, and certainly falls within the scope of the journal. Overall the paper is well written and easy to follow. To my knowledge the topic of this manuscript presents new valuable information on the subject. It is clear that the fatigue is a very important issue that deserves to be studied, especially in in patients with type 2 diabetes, but there are some points in the paper which could deserve further explanations. Most of the manuscript is correct, but there is a need for improvement for the aspects below: 1. The abbreviations throughout the paper requires some attention, for example of T2DM in the Abstract section. 2. Methods are adequate, but it is not clear how the level or cut-off of fatigue was found. Please provide more information of the FACIT-Fatigue scale. 3. I suggest to include the possibility for the floor and ceiling effects in all the MFI-20 subscales as well as for total fatigue score and to expand summary of results and their interpretation. 4. I would suggest including Cronbach's Alpha of all used scales in your study population. 5. Table 4 summarizes the results of IMFI-20 for different level of the PSQI and HbA1C level. State why you used only total IMFI-20 score. I would suggest to include all the MFI-20 subscales as well. Reviewer #3: The purpose of this paper is to test reliability and validity of the Indonesian version of the MFI-20 in people with type 2 diabetes, and explore its use for fatigue assessment. In general the paper is well-written and meets this objective. However, one significant omission and concern is the lack of information/data provided on the MFI-20 results itself. The multidimensional fatigue inventory MFI-20 is designed to evaluate 5 dimensions of fatigue, which gives a robust picture of the severity and type of fatigue, but these results are curiously not presented at all in this paper. The individual questions are included in table 3 with factor analysis, it would be easy enough to also include the descriptive statistics for the responses to each question. The authors report that they used the MFI-20 scores to test reliability and validity, including correlations with total and subscale scores between other measures of fatigue which seems appropriate. However, for other analyses it appears that the researchers operationally defined fatigue/no fatigue based on 5 questions that they designed, including a yes/no item "do you feel fatigue". The analysis comparing demographics, measures of diabetes severity, and healthcare utilization uses the yes/no fatigue question rather than the more robust MFI-20 results. The only other major concern is that there was a hypothesis embedded within the methods that should be presented in the introduction, page 10 "we hypothesized that patients with type 2 diabetes who had a score of more than 5 ... would have a low IMFI-20 score". The results of this hypothesis are not clearly presented later in the paper. 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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Fatigue Following Type 2 Diabetes: Psychometric Testing of the Indonesian Version of the Multidimensional Fatigue Inventory-20 and Unmet Fatigue-Related Needs PONE-D-22-23618R1 Dear Dr. Chiu, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. 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Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: My comments were addressed, there is no further critique. My comments were addressed, there is no further critique. Reviewer #2: The authors report an interesting study about the Psychometric Properties of the Indonesian Version of the Multidimensional Fatigue Inventory-20 in patients with Type 2 Diabetes. To my knowledge the topic of this manuscript presents new valuable information on the subject. The paper has been carefully revised by the authors and they made major revisions improving the quality of the manuscript. I am kindly glad for the sufficiently addressed all the comments. I am in favor of publishing this paper. Reviewer #3: All questions raised previously have been addressed. Thank you for your efforts on the revision. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Formally Accepted |
PONE-D-22-23618R1 Fatigue Following Type 2 Diabetes: Psychometric Testing of the Indonesian Version of the Multidimensional Fatigue Inventory-20 and Unmet Fatigue-Related Needs Dear Dr. Chiu: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Prof. dr. Tanja Grubić Kezele Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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