Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionAugust 9, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-22364Validation of prognostic scores predicting mortality in acute liver decompensation or acute-on-chronic liver failure: a Thailand multicenter studyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Treeprasertsuk, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. As you can see, both reviewers appreciated that this is a large, relatively well study, but also requested important changes that need to be done before the manuscript can be considered further. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 21 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors of a manuscript “PONE-D-22-22364: Validation of prognostic scores predicting mortality in acute liver decompensation or acute-on-chronic liver failure: a Thailand multicenter study” present a retrospective observational study on cirrhotic patients with acute decompensation of cirrhosis and acute-on-chronic liver failure (ACLF) in Thailand. The authors aimed to describe prognostic factors for mortality in Asian population. The authors conclude that for ACLF patients the best predictor of 30-day and 90-day mortality is CLIF-C OF score, while for acute decompensation of cirrhosis the best predictor for 90-day mortality are bacterial infection, Child-Pugh score and CLIF-AD score (but without the sufficient significance). Comments: 1. Though the paper is written in good English, some sentences are not clear (for example the first sentence in the Background in Abstract). 2. In the Abstract the authors write that the study was retrospective. In “Study design” the description of prospective data collection is mentioned. How many patients were evaluated prospectively? 3. In Statistical analysis the authors write that total of 374 participants were required. For what correlation or analysis was that number of patients required?? 4. Six patients in ACLF group were transplanted. Were also patients with decompensation of cirrhosis indicated for liver transplantation? Was the artificial liver support available for ACLF patients? 5. MELD score was not related to the mortality in patients with cirrhosis decompensation. Do the authors have an explanation? 6. Do the authors have an information about the cause of death in patients in the group with liver decompensation? Could some patients develop ACLD during the period of observation? This is an interesting study describing the usefulness of CLIF prognostic scores both in patients with ACLF and in patients with acute decompensation of cirrhosis without organ failure in Asian population. Reviewer #2: I have read the article of Teerasarntipan et al “Validation of prognostic scores predicting mortality in acute liver decompensation or acute-on-chronic liver failure: a Thailand multicenter study. It is a validation study of the CLIF-AD and CLIF-C OF score in a large Thai population of ACLF patients, and also identifies independent predictors of short-term mortality. It is a large study with adequate rationale and conclusions, but it is not the first validation study of these prognostic scores in an Asian population as the authors also mention. I have some questions regarding the design of the study: The authors have 2 separate research questions in this manuscript: 1. The validation of the CLIF-C OF/ClLIF-C ACLF and CLIF-AD score in a Thai AD/ACLF population and 2. The identification of prognostic factors for 30-day and 90-day mortality in AD +/- ACLF patients. They combined these research questions by performing multivariate analyses including separate variables and (some) of the scores. However, the CLIF-C OF score and CLIF-C ACLF score highly overlap and also include variables that are also separately included (age, WBC, bilirubin, INR). It is better to exclude the prognostic scores from the multivariate analyses and just evaluate their performance in the current population by AUROC. The identification of prognostic factors by multivariate analysis should be a separate analysis and could give some insight why standard prognostic scores underperform in this Thai population. The authors should also elaborate why the standard prognostic scores underperform in their study, and whether there is a need for other prognostic scores in Thai populations. The authors mention the high 30- and 90-day mortality rate observed in AD patients. They mention in the methods that all admitted AD patient were scores as ACLF patients in case they developed organ failure and classified for ACLF during the admission. Did these patients die without developing ACLF, or after the admission? How were patient classified when they were readmitted due to ACLF after an admission due to AD? This is one of the many validation studies of the CLIF-C ACLF and CLIF-AD score. What is th It is not clear to me why there were exactly 301 patients in each group (AD and ACLF). This suggest that sort of matching was performed, but this is not clear from the statistics section. How were bacterial infections defined? ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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Validation of prognostic scores predicting mortality in acute liver decompensation or acute-on-chronic liver failure: a Thailand multicenter study PONE-D-22-22364R1 Dear Dr. Treeprasertsuk, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Pavel Strnad Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Congratulations to the nice work! Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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PONE-D-22-22364R1 Validation of prognostic scores predicting mortality in acute liver decompensation or acute-on-chronic liver failure: a Thailand multicenter study Dear Dr. Treeprasertsuk: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Pavel Strnad Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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