Peer Review History
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PONE-D-22-17046Can resting heart rate patterns explain the heart rate and parasympathetic responses during rest, exercise, and recovery?PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Garcia, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Specifically, rewriting to render cleared the rational, aim and discussion of the study is mandatory, as well as some methodological clarifications as emphasised by the reviewers. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 03 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: In the present investigation the authors sought to investigate the relationship between resting, exercise and recovery HR and HRV (only the time-domain HRV index RMSSD). They divided the participants into two groups according to their resting HR (Bradycardic vs Normocardic Group). The manuscript needs extensive revision before being considered for publication as some statements and considerations are not totally convincing. The manuscript also needs revision for language and grammar. Please consider the following suggestions. Abstract: L14: you may prefer using dynamics instead of dynamic L14: please change into “remains to be clarified” L17: what do you mean with patterns? That sounds like just the average value of HR at rest in the supine position..am I correct? L23: please mention that this “manoeuvre” (i.e. the change in posture) is part of your evaluation protocol. Indeed, it seems that you wonder whether individuals with a low resting HR in the supine position have lower values of HR in the orthostatic position and/or different responses to the change in posture than individuals with a higher resting HR Introduction: L40: please clarify “chronotropic reserve”, that is usually defined considering both resting HR and HRmax L43: and what happens to HR? this seems a good spot to introduce HRR L44: what do you mean? A higher parasympathetic activity at rest would reflect into a faster parasympathetic recovery after exercise and/or to a faster para response to an active manoeuvres, such as an orthostatic challenge? I would delete this sentence..at this point of the introduction is still not clear how this two phenomena would be related L47: consider diving this long sentence into shorter sentences L54: you probably forgot “activity”; in my opinion HRV could be introduced earlier in the manuscript as the assessment of parasympathetic activity in the study you mention mainly relies on that L58: and what did they found? what kind of HR (sub-max or max)? It is not clear how resting HR is related to exercising HR. Is it that individuals with a low HR tend to have low values of HR during exercise for a given sub-max exercise intensity? L63: please provide some references to your statements L74: what are these RHR profiles? You are using RHR as an abbreviation for resting heart rate, but here you are probably intending that is possible to characterize/classify an individual’s cardiac autonomic profile via measurements of HR and HRV indices. If I am not wrong, you want to test the hypothesis that resting, exercise and recovery HR and HRV responses can be somewhat related and that information obtained from HR and HRV evaluations at rest can inform about an individual’s ability to responds to stressful tasks such as exercise. Please consider rephrasing these last sentences. L81: what is your hypothesis? L83: please consider not using patterns if RHR is just the average value of HR (bpm) without any other information about its variability Methods L103: you might not need “RHR” here L128: which threshold did you use? L137: what is the physiological relevance of HR initial? L137: maximum “predicted” HR. L151: over a 5-min time window? L155: over a 1-min time window? From end EX– 1 min to end EX ? L158: please move this paragraph before the description of the analysis you conducted on HR/HRV indices, otherwise it is hard to follow L158: this is a very important part for the study outcomes being HRR/HRV recovery influenced by the exercise intensity domain. Please clarify that 85% is the target to be reached in terms of predicted HRmax. Is there any other measurement that can inform about exercise intensity from a metabolic point of view? VO2? L164: were participants allowed to run? The average duration of the test is 7.5 min, according to the protocol at 7.5 min the exercise intensity is 9 km/h. Was the 2 initial min enough to reach a steady value of HR before further increasing the treadmill velocity? L195: trivial effect instead of no effect Results Please state in the tables whether the values refer to mean or median values Discussion L253: still not clear what RHR profiles means L257: how? The two groups have the same average age..so the predicted HRmax is on average the same, the difference in resting HR directly reflects into a different “estimated” chronotropic reserve What are the potential issues you may face targeting 85% of the predicted HR max in two groups that differ in their resting HR? are there any? Consider discussing this in the limitations section L257: how did you measure para withdrawal during exercise? That is not clear at all. Is there a difference in HR kinetics? Is there a faster HR response in BG? The difference in reactivity refers to the orthostatic task. L258: HRR 1st min should reflect parasympathetic reactivation but this is not different in the two groups. Please elaborate on this. HRR 5th min should reflect para reactivation + sympathetic withdrawal occurring during the post-exercise period, but you are not properly discussing this in the manuscript. HRR30s is also often used as a marker of parasympathetic reactivation. Why did you choose not to present those data? L265: this part is really similar to the first part of the introduction. Please consider rephrasing L271-L283: this part is not very comprehensible. Please try to make your point more clear rearranging these three sentences and avoiding repetitions L288: for a similar resting HR can HRV analysis add some meaningful information to interpret subject’s cardiac autonomic profile and responses to stressful tasks? L351: so why have you found the differences 3 and 5 min post exercise? How does resting HR can influence your calculations? If you try to consider resting HR do these differences disappear? BG starts from 82 bpm and NG from 88 bpm, they both go up to 164 then down to 97 bpm and 104 bpm 5 min post-exercise. So after 5 min both groups are around + 15 bpm over their initial HR, and the difference seems to be similar to the difference at rest. If you consider the higher starting point for NG group the difference becomes further smaller. So, are they different? Or not? This part is really important for the general purpose of the manuscript. It needs to be better presented and discussed. What about adding some graphs? How much of the variance in post-exercise HRR (1st, 3rd, 5th min of rec) or in reactivity to an orthostatic test can be explained by the differences in term of resting HR? what percentage of explained variance is enough to safely say that measuring HR/HRV at rest is helpful instead of including other type of measurements? Please clarify. Reviewer #2: Dear Author, Thank you for submitting your work. I have a few concerns regarding your work here: 1. The second objective of this study is not clear here; to determine whether RHR could explain the outcome of HR responses during 3 tested conditions. Please rewrite this objective so that it can be explained by your tabulated results. 2. What is your primary and secondary outcomes for this study? It seems that you are putting/testing everything together in this one study with only a small sample size. Make sure that you only focus on your main outcome measures. 3. What is the reason for choosing male subjects only? Why do you exclude female subjects? 4. How do you calculate your sample size? 5.Your tabulated results are not clear to the readers (see tables 2 and 3). The information in the table should be divided into the 3 conditions; at rest, during, and after. 6. For you regression analysis, how do you decide on the variables selection for analysis during this 3 conditions? Why did you have a mixture of absolute variable and relative variable (%) in your analysis? 7. You should be cautious in drawing conclusions because this study only includes young active males. Do not generalise your conclusion with your statement about using the autonomic flexibility index to assess individual CVS health. ********** 6. 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PONE-D-22-17046R1Can resting heart rate explain the heart rate and parasympathetic responses during rest, exercise, and recovery?PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Garcia, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 29 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Abstract L28: please delete “average”, that is implicit (throughout the manuscript as well) L31: delete “and HR” that is implicit too as you measured the RR intervals Introduction L85: please re-examine this sentence: first delete “average”, then it is not clear how the HR can be both the independent and the dependent variable at the same time. You stated that it is important to know the effect of resting HR on HR at rest, which does not make any sense. You may want to test the hypothesis that different values of HR at rest are associated with different values of HRV, and different exercise and post-exercise responses etc. L94: please consider making your hypothesis clearer. In which direction do you expect these relationships to go? e.g. A lower RHR = a faster recovery or a slower recovery? Obviously based on the literature you have already mentioned Methods: How did you perform the regression analysis? Was the predictor variable RHR considered as a continuous variable? Or you coded the two groups (e.g. BG = 0, NG=1)? please consider the first option as the best way to perform a linear regression analysis. What are the advantages of using the mean HR difference between the two groups instead of the raw values of RHR? Please clarify. Results You may want to add the ES descriptor (e.g. small/trivial etc..) in the tables, that will help the reader interpret your results. I also suggest mentioning (and discussing) the size of the effects in the following paragraphs to help the reader throughout the long discussion. Discussion I appreciate the effort done by the authors in clearly presenting their results, statistical power, etc. but how these trivial-to-small differences between the two groups in terms of exercise/post-exercise recovery responses and such small portions of the variance explained by the regression model can be translated into something helpful? How does this help clinical practice? I also wonder whether correlation analysis, rather than group analysis, could somehow help explain how resting, exercise and post-exercise responses are related. Why did you choose this kind of approach? These two points need to be presented and discussed in the manuscript. Reviewer #2: Thank you for addressing all the comments raised by us. The manuscript now has scientific merit for publication. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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