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Original SubmissionJuly 14, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-19890Occurrence and antimicrobial susceptibility of Staphylococcus aureus in dairy farms and personnel in selected towns of West Shewa Zone, Oromia, EthiopiaPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Zewdu, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please ensure that you attend to all concerns raised in the reviewers' comments before your manuscript can be processed further. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 23 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The manuscript presents the results of a study on the assessment of the presence of Staphylococcus aureus in dairy farms including milk and environmental samples. The results are accompanied with a detailed survey on the hygiene conditions of the farms and training/knowledge of the management providing a good picture of the environment and sector considered in the study and offers consideration for the mitigating of risk factors in the environment that affect human health and disease. The experimental design and results are well presented, however, redundancies on some sections must be addressed along with including in the discussion a few points to support the reasons why were not presented other detailed data: - method used for the identification. An ISO method is available for the horizontal method for the enumeration of coagulase-positive staphylococci by counting the colonies obtained on a solid medium (Baird-Parker agar medium). Blood agar medium is not the ideal choice for the detection of S.aureus and other coagulase positive staphylococci. - Detection of staphylococcal enterotoxins (SEs). Even though SEs are mentioned on the main text, there is no detection either in the milk or as gene presence in the considered strains. This could be addressed through PCR tests for the detection of at least the most known SEs. -material and methods section - L115-128 please reduce the wording and the information, if necessary to support discussion, could be presented in a table instead (coordinates, msl, rainfall and so on). -Geographical and meteorological data. The information provided in the m&m section is interesting, however, there is no contextually consideration in the discussion/ conclusion. If not relevant these informations can be removed. Reviewer #2: I am quite concern with the antibiotic susceptibility testing in this manuscript, I did not see the author performed any testing that can indicate whether the S. aureus strains isolated are MRSA or MSSA ? when we work with S. aureus strain, this testing should be performed because its really related with pathogenesis of this bacteria and off course with its antimicrobial susceptibility profile. Author(s) can easily identify this by testing cefoxitin or oxacillin disc. I do not think ampicillin is necessary to test in the case of S. aureus. Please clarify which standard reference the author(s) used on their antibiotic susceptibility testing? is it CLSI or EUCAST? The number of table in the main manuscript a bit too much. I suggest the author put some of these table in the supplementary data so the manuscript will not be too crowded Reviewer #3: This cross-sectional study by Endrias, Z.G., and Milsan, G.B., 2022 was conducted in selected towns of the West Shewa Zone, Oromia, Ethiopia from December 2020 to April 2021 with the aim of: 1.estimating the occurrence and load of S. aureus in raw cows’ milk, 2.determining the antimicrobial susceptibility patterns of the S. aureus isolates, and 3.assessing knowledge, attitude, and practice of the farmers on factors of antimicrobial resistance. Dependent (outcome) variables: occurrence and load of S. aureus in raw cows’ milk, antimicrobial susceptibility patters of S. aureus isolates, and KAP of farmers on factors of AMR. Independent (predictors) variables: predictors of S. aureus isolation include age of the cow, lactation stage and dairy house cleaning intervals. Predictors of KAP of the farmers include their age, sex, educational level, marital status, education, and religion. Predictors of AMR to S. aureus isolates include over or under dose use of antimicrobials, frequent use of the same antibiotic, farmers attitude towards antibiotic use and AMR, missing the doses of the antimicrobial agent, and awareness creation variation among the communities. A total of 311 samples from raw cows’ milk (212), milkers’ hand (44), and milking bucket (55) swabs were collected and tested. The disc diffusion method was used to test antimicrobial susceptibility of the 38 isolates. Questionnaire survey was conducted to assess the factors of milk contamination with S. aureus and antimicrobial resistance. The Chi-square test, one-way analysis of variance, and logistic regression analysis were used for data analyses. This work was reviewed and approved by the Ambo University Research and Ethical Committee. The result indicated that 16.72% (52/311) (95% CI: 12.75-21.34%) of the samples were positive for S. aureus. The occurrence of S. aureus was 22.73%, 16.51%, and 12.73% in milkers’ hand swabs, cow milk, and milking bucket swabs, respectively. The mean count of S. aureus from raw cows’ milk was 4.3± 1.45 log10 CFU/ml. On AMR, about 88% of S aureus isolates were resistant to ampicillin while 82.9% and 70.7% of the isolates were susceptible to ciprofloxacin and cefotaxime respectively. Majority of the S. aureus isolates (61%) showed multi-drug resistance. The odds of S. aureus isolation from the milk of cows were significantly high in older cows (Adjusted Odds Ratio [AOR]: 5.54; p= 0.001), in late lactation stages (AOR: 3.6; p = 0.012), and in farms where house cleaning was done twice per week (AOR: 49 8.7; p = 0.001). Lastly, high percentage of farmers had insufficient knowledge, attitude, and practice (KAP) about the factors contributing for antimicrobial resistance. The authors made all data underlying the findings fully available. The data was tested for representativeness, analyzed using descriptive and inferential statistics which were rigorous and appropriate. Discussions of the results were robust, citing similar studies conducted both within and outside Ethiopia. Conclusions are in line with the findings Writing quality and clarity: Satisfactory Other observations: 1.Limitations of the study: The authors did well to mention the limitations of the study 2.Inclusion/exclusion criteria clearly explained as a separate subtopic. However, I am not sure if the authors explained why the study excluded the local lactating cows (Zebu) and opted for healthy cross breed (Zebu with Jersey and Holstein-Friesians) lactating cows. In my view, this could constitute a source of bias for the study. As a way forward, the authors can consider conducting similar study with the local lactating cows and compare the outcomes with this one. In this way the sample size will increase, and generalizability of the results can be enhanced. Reviewer #4: PONE-D-22-19890 Comments Zwedu Zwedu et al., investigated the occurrence and antimicrobial susceptibility of Staphylococcus aureus in dairy farms and personnel in selected towns of West Shewa Zone, Oromia, Ethiopia. The manuscript is well-written, and results are presented clearly and precisely. While the study and the findings are interesting, there are a few ways in which the manuscript can be improved. Abstract: Line 1: Staphylococcus aureus is one of the foodborne causing bacterial…..? Please complete the sentence with either bacterial pathogen or bacteria. There are some incomplete sentences throughout the manuscript, please make the necessary changes (e.g., lines 59-61; 65; etc.) Introduction: Line 59-61: Staphylococcus aureus is an opportunistic bacterial pathogen with the capability to persist and multiply in a variety of environments; predominantly incriminated as one of the major causes of foodborne diseases Line 65: and public health what? Please complete the sentence. Methods: What is the rationale for choosing the towns used in the study? Why? Are those the highest milk-producing/marketing towns? Why three towns? Sample collection from milkers’ hands: What period? Before or immediately/several hours after milking? Before or after washing hands? Why? Was the method consistent throughout all sampling? Would that add variability to the results? Sample collection from milking buckets: When? How? Same procedure/spot for all samples? Cows: samples were consistently collected at the same time/period and from similar lactation stages in all cows in all the sample towns? Discussion: Majority of the discussion centered around comparison of numbers/statistics between regions in and out of Ethiopia…it’s pretty difficult to keep up with all these numbers. All these may be part of the discussion, but the discussion section should mainly discuss the significance of the findings and what the results mean for the regions where the study was conducted…not just observational and reporting statistics but discussion of the relevance and significance of the findings and the study as a whole. Line 499-506: There’s too many speculations as to why S. aureus is more prevalent in older cows than others…speculations should be limited unless there’s a direct association or probable explanation from the findings of the current study. Also, comparison of findings from this study with data from regions with entirely socioeconomic, cultural, and political differences seems far off, and makes the discussion bounce back and forth as to why these comparisons were made. Why? What’s the rationale of comparing data between regions? ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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PONE-D-22-19890R1Occurrence and antimicrobial susceptibility of Staphylococcus aureus in dairy farms and personnel in selected towns of West Shewa Zone, Oromia, EthiopiaPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Zewdu, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 11 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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