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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Comments to the authors Dear Authors, thank you for the opportunity to review this manuscript. Overall, I commended the author for the well-written manuscript and the interesting research topic in young soccer players. However, I have some concerns about the data interpretation and made some comments that need to be addressed before further consideration. I hope that my comments can help to improve the quality of the manuscript. My comments and suggestions can be found below. Introduction Page 2. Line 49-51. I understand the author's point of view, but it would be relevant to made this assumption with more caution since to date there is no direct link between computer tasks relying on executive function on specific-sport performance. Page 4. Line 92-96. This sentence is quite confusing. Please be more concise in this statement. For example, “We decided to examine the effects of SAQ compared to sport-specific training (SSG) on [….]”. Page 5. Line 102-104. Please provide a citation to support the hypothesis of the study. Also, there is insufficient data in the literature to date to show the superiority of the SAQ protocol compared to the SSG. Based on the data presented by the authors, I am not sure about that. Furthermore, the results reported in the current study do not seem to clearly support this hypothesis (see my comments below). Please review it. Methods Page 6. Line 107. Please be more specific about the participant’s characteristics (i.e., range of age along with the mean and SD reported). There is any attempt made by the authors to consider the maturation status? Page 6. Line 109. Please standardize the term throughout the manuscript to refer to young players. Sometimes appears “children”, “preadolescent” or “young players”. Page 6. Line 112. It is important to provide more details about the randomization process. Who did the randomization (blinded or not)? How were they assigned (1x1, counterbalanced)? Where was the random number estimated? Were all players recruited at the same time? Page 6. Line 112. Please separate the symbols from the number. Check them throughout the manuscript. Page 6. Line 126. Was the post-test performed immediately after the end of the training intervention, or was there a rest period in between? Page 7. Dependent variables. Why did the authors not examine the test-retest reliability of the measures? It is important to better understand whether the differences are related to the training protocol or natural biological error in repeated measures. This must be considering a limitation of the study. Page 8. Line 165. On what type of surface were the protocols performed? Page 8. Line 167. Please consider change S90 to COD90. IMHO, it is unnecessary to add this unusual abbreviation. Page 8. Line 167. How much time is between the warm-up protocol and the sprint test? Did participants begin the test immediately behind the pair of photocells or at a distance of 0.50-1.0 m to break inertia? Page 9. Line 177. Why was this protocol chosen? Because of the speed component in the task, it is difficult to isolate the COD ability? Also, since the authors wanted to examine cognitive performance, it is hard for me to understand why the agility component was not assessed. Reading the introduction, this is the first protocol I expected to see in the study. It is a more ecological test that includes a cognitive component in addition to the motor tasks, rather than just using computer task. This needs to be addressed in the manuscript. Page 9. Line 188. It is critical to better describe the training intervention to allow replication of the study, especially for soccer coaches working with young players. There are several variables that need to be added to this section to make it work. 1. How intensity was defined and increased, since sprints are expected to be performed at maximum effort. If the overload was applied based on the complexity of the exercise, this needs to made clearer. 2. The description of SSG drills has to be considerably improved. There are several constraints that can be manipulated during SSG tasks to increase physical and cognitive loads (pitch size, area relative per player, rules, etc…). Based on the design of the SSG reported, it is not surprise the lack of improvement in sprints performance. Please provide more details why this SSG configuration were selected to justify why it would be expected an increase in both physical and cognitive performance. As it stands, it is very difficult to have any information about the task. 3. Verbal encouragement and feedback were used in both training interventions to encourage and motivate the participants throughout the activities. This is an important consideration to take into account, particularly to reduce between-subjects variability due to lack of engagement during SSG and sprints drills. Page 12. Line 232. It is important to provide further information about the effect size calculation. If the intra-groups pre-to-post effects were calculated, the authors must refer to the equation provided in Dankel and Loenneke (2021) to take into account within-subjects variability. Please see: Dankel, S. J., & Loenneke, J. P. (2021). Effect sizes for paired data should use the change score variability rather than the pre-test variability. The Journal of Strength & Conditioning Research, 35(6), 1773-1778. Results Figure 5 is missing from my reviewer's version. This section is one of the primary concerns I have with this manuscript. As a result, the data interpretation will have an impact on the study's discussion and conclusion. Therefore, it is critical to carefully evaluate it in order to be more conservative about the findings. Cognitive performance: As mentioned by the authors, there were no interaction effects in any of the cognitive tasks evaluated. However, in the discussion section, they mentioned that “SSG. The main finding was that 4 weeks of SAQ training programme showed higher improvements in inhibitory control and perceptual speed with respect to SSG training programme” (Page 15, line 311-313). This statement is invalid due to the lack of interaction effects. Furthermore, while there was a significant time effect for SAQ but not for SSG group in some cases, when we analyzed the pre-to-post effect size, the results were relatively similar in practically all variables evaluated. It is important to read my earlier comment about calculating the effect size. Overall, this raises serious doubts about the SAQ's superiority over the SSG, as claimed by the authors. A more conservative interpretation, in my opinion, should be explored, and the writers should be warned about it in the discussion section. Physical performance: There were no significant time x group interactions for any of the sprint performances studied, but the authors stated that SAQ induced greater adaptations than SSG in the 5-m sprint performance. Please note that the pre-to-post effect size is comparable across groups (SAQ = 0.64, medium; SSG = 0.70, medium). Furthermore, the test's p-value approached the significance level (p = 0.09). So, in my opinion, the lack of statistical significance may be attributed to type II error due to the smaller sample size and lack of power. This reinforces my statement that a more conservative interpretation of the data is necessary. Discussion Page 15. Line 311-315. As mentioned in my previous comment, this sentence needs to be carefully reviewed. In addition, the lack of a control groups must be addressed as a limitation of the study, especially in studies including young soccer players due to the natural biological development. Therefore, in a group level it is difficult to confirm that one group is superior to other due to the lack of interaction neither that both training strategies are effective because of the lack of a control group. These questions needs to considered by the authors throughout the discussion section. The authors can explore the differences expected after the SSG designed. It would be expected meaningful differences in sprint performance after the SSG configuration proposed. There were sufficient stimuli to increase physical and cognitive loads based on the SSG constraints? Given my previous comments on the data interpretation, I recommend the authors to review it. As a result, considerable revisions in this section as well as the conclusion section must be addressed. Therefore, I did not provide any additional remarks in this section because I believe that significant adjustments are required. Limitations of the study The lack of test-retest and a control group must be considered as limitations of the study. Conclusion The conclusion needs to be more specific. Again, the authors stated that SAQ is superior in both cognitive and physical performance than SSG (in all parameters – this is not aligned with the results). References The capital letters of the titles need to be reviewed. Reviewer #2: The aim of the present study was to investigate the effect of a short-term (4 weeks) non-soccer-specific training program based on speed, agility and quickness (SAQ) and a soccer-specific training program based on small-sided games (SSG) on cognitive and physical performance in soccer players. The authors conclude that SAQ improves both cognition and physical abilities more than SSG. General comments The article is well written and easy to follow. While intro and methods are easy to understand and I have minor suggestion, I have some major comments in the results and discussion sections, which are presented below. The authors contextualize and highlight the importance of agility in team sports, and also the importance of cognition in team sports as it is incorporated in the concept of agility. However, I wondered if agility is important, why have the authors analyzed COD when there is no need to respond to a stimulus? Does COD is influenced by the improvement in cognition? In addition, the presentation of the results and the interpretation in the discussion section is misleading. The authors first report there is no interaction, but then base part of the discussion on the superiority of the SAQ group over SSG, which is not supported by the statistical results. Abstract The abstract is well written and easy to follow. However, the results and conclusions are not supported by the authors’ findings, as in the manuscript, they report that there were no interactions in none of the variables. In L29-33 – the authors state that SAQ improved in some variables compared to SSG, which is not true based on their statistical results. Introduction. I have minor suggestions in this section. 1) Shorten the introduction 2) Reduce the explanation of physiological mechanisms. I was expecting that the manuscript would investigate mechanisms. It is possible that if I had this expectation, others may have it too. Methods L172- Why did you choose to place the timing gates at 0.6m, which is knee height, not hip height as usually it is placed? L174 - 5-m and 20-m test . Also, describe the test better. L177 – 90° L228-229 – The lack of difference does not indicate that athletes were split into two groups, but rather that there were no differences between groups. Results If there was not interaction, but there were main effects, authors should report it. I am not convinced that the simple effect is relevant. I understand when authors report simple effects, but the interpretation requires caution, as these effects do not mean that groups were different or the one group improved more than the other. It is my understanding from reading the manuscript that authors discuss their results based on the superiority of SAQ over SSG, which is not supported by their findings. Although the authors reported no difference at the beginning of the study. Have the authors considered using ANCOVA having the pre values as covariates instead of ANOVA? There is body of evidence suggesting that ANCOVA may be an alternative (https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/16895814/). Discussion L332 – sprint As I mentioned in the results section, the interpretation of the findings is problematic, as it was made on the bases of superiority of SAQ, which is not supported by statistical results. Also, I suggest incorporating some discussion on why SAQ improved and SSG did not, based on the characteristics of training. I understand that athletes respond to a stimulus during SAQ training, but aren’t players supposed to respond to different stimuli during SSG? For example, in L362-363, authors stat that complex motor activities are related to cognitive performance. What is more complex, semi-pre-determined exercises such as those used in SAQ, or a soccer game? From this information, I would expect that players in SSG would improve more than in SSG. Can authors provide evidence that engagement is higher during SAQ, or similar tasks, than in SSG? During the discussion on physical tasks, I suggest that authors include some characteristics of the training. For instance, do players perform sprint and change of directions during SSG? How many repetitions on average? Do these change-of-direction tasks and sprint are performed at maximal effort during SSG? Maybe SSG did not improve as much as SAQ due to lower number of repetitions. https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/34079163/ https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/34079175/ ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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