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PONE-D-21-39776Men's late presentation for HIV care in Eastern Uganda: The role of masculinity normsPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Nabikande, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please see the comments from two reviewers below. The reviewers have asked for additional clarifications in the methodology employed. In particular, I note that both reviewers have queried the definitions used for masculinity and related concepts. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 24 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: N/A ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you, for inviting me to review this manuscript. Sherifah Nabikande1 et al thought to understanding why adult men present late for HIV care is important in improving early linkage to care and explored how masculinity norms influence men’s late presentation for HIV care. This is a very important study, I have few clarification comments Abstract: 1. The engine of any study is the results: I think the results should be presented more. It is super summarized. Can it be expanded by including some demographic variables of the participants and other emerging themes, than only the three themes. Is it possible to relate the results to the theoretical framework used 2. Please, confirm that the three themes “fear of loss of respect, preservation of reputation, and maintaining a sense of normality means masculinity or equal to masculinity. I think the conclusion does not relate to the results improving linkage to care. Google define, masculinity as qualities or attributes regarded as characteristic of men. I am not sure the three norms really define, men’s masculinity 3. How do you define, masculinity? I think it would be good to define somewhere in the abstract 4. Under conclusion, please, add implication of the results and a recommendation (s) Introduction 1. Line 70: respectively, statement “highlighted the influence of masculinity norms on men’s engagement in HIV care [11-13]” can you describe what masculinity norms of men in cite studies 11-13. Please, confirm to me that masculinity varies among men, because the study justification is that these studies were conducted among specific sub-populations whose social context did not necessarily reflect that of men in the general population irrespective of type of occupation Methods Under ethics, please, cite the study approval number, not the IRB USA FWA00011353. Did you register the study with UNCST? if yes, please, cite the UNCST number as well. Discussion Please, add strengthen and limitation of the study before conclusions. Reviewer #2: This paper is interesting, and addresses an important topic. However the paper could be strengthened by a more in-depth discussion of the contextual aspects of masculinity in Uganda. Additionally, it would be helpful if the authors can discuss the implications of these findings, and make suggestions for how these barriers to men’s health seeking behaviour could be addressed. - The introduction could benefit from more background on why early presentation of care is important - First two sentences of introduction are a bit repetitive - Line 63: comma unnecessary - How is the theoretical framework relevant to the sociocultural context of Uganda? Wilson’s work is based on ethnographic work in the Caribbean in the 1960s. Discussions on masculinity should be situated and contextualised, geographically, socioculturally and temporally. - What are the intersections between norms and expectations around masculinity and heteronormativity? There could be more reflection on this. - What about the gender of research assistants who conducted the data collection? How would this have impacted on discussions around masculinity with participants? - What kinds of questions were asked in IDIs and FGDs? How was masculinity probed? - Line 161: were transcripts/translations reviewed and quality checked by someone other than the transcriber/translator to ensure correct interpretations? - How did the analysis team collaborate? What kinds of discussions were there to ensure that there was consensus on coding and interpretation? - The authors could strengthen discussion of stigma and shame. It is important to differentiate between the multiple dimensions of stigma that may serve as barriers towards seeking care, specifically for this study, highlight internalised stigma versus public stigma. - Line 319: what is meant by the assertion that “society expects men to be wiser”? - Similarly, what is meant by the statement that men are expected to “exercise self-control in sexual decision making”? How does this link to sexual scripts and norms around masculinity and heterosexuality in Uganda? What are the expectations around men’s sexual urges – could there be a link to masculinity expectations and an unbridled, untameable male sexual urge? - Is there any link between masculinity and expectations of strength and vitality – which therefore links being HIV positive to associations of weakness? - How can the framing of and messaging around ART help to address some of men’s concerns? Can the authors make any recommendations for this? - Additionally, could there be any efforts to reframe health seeking behaviour as a sign of strength, looking after one’s health, that might help to shift men’s willingness to seek care? ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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PONE-D-21-39776R1Men's late presentation for HIV care in Eastern Uganda: The role of masculinity normsPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Nabikande, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 13 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments: Dear Authors, Thanks for submitting the revised version of the manuscript. You have addressed the all the comments from the reviewers and improved the manuscript. I have a few minor comments for you to address and suggestions to support some of your statements with some resources that I provided. Please quickly address these and your manuscript will be finally accepted. Overall comments to authors: The use terms “HIV positive men” is stigmatising by WHO, please change and use terms like “men living with HIV” or “people living with HIV” or “patients living with HIV” throughout the manuscript. Lines 75-76: “Although women in most parts of Sub-Saharan Africa (SSA), and Uganda in particular, have a higher prevalence of HIV than men” Please use this source to support it: • B Sartorius, JD VanderHeide, M Yang, EA Goosmann, et al. Subnational mapping of HIV incidence and mortality among individuals aged 15–49 years in sub-Saharan Africa, 2000–18: a modelling study. The Lancet HIV 8 (6), e363-e375. https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S2352301821000515 Lines 80-81: “Fewer men seek testing and counselling services on a routine basis leading to late diagnosis in late-stage disease progression” Please use the following sources to support it: • The intention of men who have sex with men to participate in voluntary counseling and HIV testing and access free condoms in Indonesia. American Journal of Men's Health 12 (5), 1175-1184. https://journals.sagepub.com/doi/full/10.1177/1557988318779737 • Perceptions among transgender women of factors associated with the access to HIV/AIDS-related health services in Yogyakarta, Indonesia. PloS one 14 (8), e0221013. https://journals.plos.org/plosone/article?id=10.1371/journal.pone.0221013 • Risk Factors and the Impact of HIV among Women Living with HIV and Their Families in Yogyakarta and Belu District, Indonesia. ( see Pages 35-54: scoping review on barriers and facilitators of the access of men living with HIV to HIV services; pages 224-247: findings on barriers and facilitators of the access of men living with HIV to HIV services). https://flex.flinders.edu.au/file/eac1a04e-a24b-4888-ace8-50f06805069e/1/Fauk%20Thesis2022.pdf Lines 82-83: Due to late presentation, men develop opportunistic infections with poor treatment outcomes [7] and high healthcare costs [REF]. Please use the following source to support ‘high healthcare costs: • Risk Factors and the Impact of HIV among Women Living with HIV and Their Families in Yogyakarta and Belu District, Indonesia. ( see Pages 35-54: scoping review on barriers and facilitators of the access of men living with HIV to HIV services; pages 224-247: findings on barriers and facilitators of the access of men living with HIV to HIV services). https://flex.flinders.edu.au/file/eac1a04e-a24b-4888-ace8-50f06805069e/1/Fauk%20Thesis2022.pdf Data management and analysis Are the field researchers (research assistants) the authors in the paper? If yes, please put their initials to make clear who did what. Who are the three people in the analysis team? Please provide their initials in bracket. I suggest the authors use the following resources to support their description of data analysis: • Cultural and religious determinants of HIV transmission: A qualitative study with people living with HIV in Belu and Yogyakarta, Indonesia. PLoS ONE 16(11): e0257906. https://journals.plos.org/plosone/article?id=10.1371/journal.pone.0257906 • Qualitative Data Analysis for Applied Policy Research. In: Bryman A, Burgess RG, editors. London: Routledge; 1994. p. 173–94. Discussion Lines 389-390: “Internalised stigma has been found to impact certain decisions like avoiding to seek care when needed.” Please use the following resources to support it: • HIV Stigma and Moral Judgement: Qualitative Exploration of the Experiences of HIV Stigma and Discrimination among Married Men Living with HIV in Yogyakarta. Int. J. Environ. Res. Public Health 2020, 17, 636. https://doi.org/10.3390/ijerph17020636. • HIV stigma and discrimination: perspectives and personal experiences of healthcare providers in Yogyakarta and Belu, Indonesia. Frontiers in medicine 8, 625787. https://www.frontiersin.org/articles/10.3389/fmed.2021.625787/full Lines 394-396: “On the other hand, “enacted stigma,” which is the lived experience of discrimination against an HIV positive person through others’ actions or words, is also known to have a negative impact on health outcomes.” Please use the following resources to support it: • HIV Stigma and Moral Judgement: Qualitative Exploration of the Experiences of HIV Stigma and Discrimination among Married Men Living with HIV in Yogyakarta. Int. J. Environ. Res. Public Health 2020, 17, 636. https://doi.org/10.3390/ijerph17020636. • Stigma and Discrimination towards People Living with HIV in the Context of Families, Communities, and Healthcare Settings: A Qualitative Study in Indonesia. Int. J. Environ. Res. Public Health 2021, 18, 5424. https://doi.org/10.3390/ijerph18105424 Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. 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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: The authors have done a good job at addressing reviewer comments. The paper is much improved. My only comment is that some of the author responses to reviewer comments could have been added into the paper too - for example: Reviewer 2: comments 6, 7, 8, 13, 14, 15, and 16. The authors' responses to reviewer comments would also strengthen the paper and demonstrate the authors' engagement with these questions and concepts. ********** 7. 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