Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJuly 9, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-19400Perioperative changes in left ventricular systolic function following surgical revascularizationPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Downey, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 06 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors examined changes in LVEF in 549 patients with left ventricular systolic dysfunction (LVEF <50%) who underwent CABG as part of the Surgical Treatment of Ischemic Heart Failure (STICH) trial. In conclusion, approximately 25% of patients with ischemic cardiomyopathy undergoing CABG experienced a perioperative improvement in LVEF of 10% or more; the likelihood of LVEF improvement was inversely proportional to preoperative LVEF; LVEF improvement was unaffected by the presence of myocardial viability; LVEF improvement was associated with improved long-term survival and improvement was associated with improved long-term survival. These results further our understanding of perioperative LVEF changes related to CABG by demonstrating an inverse relationship between LVEF improvement and preoperative LVEF. The presentation is difficult to read because of the inclusion of Tables and Figure legends in the Results, which is different from the usual presentation. Other than the above, the logic is consistent and the discussion is adequate. Reviewer #2: PONE-D-22-19400: statistical review SUMMARY. This is a retrospective study of the changes in left ventricular ejection fraction (LVEF) among patients with systolic dysfunction who underwent coronary artery bypass graft surgery (CABG). The core statistical analysis relies on logistic regression (to examine predictors of ejection fraction improvements) and survival analysis (to estimate the association between perioperative LVEF improvement and all-cause mortality). Methods are correct and results seem sound. However, the presentation of the material is a bit too synthetic and further details are required: see the issues below. MAJOR ISSUES 1. Table 2 display the results of a multivariable logistic regression model, obtained by a backward selection of the predictors. However, there is no information about (1) the initial battery of the predictors and (2) the final battery of the selected predictors. This information must be added. Specifically, Table 2 shouldn't only include the ORs of Preoperative LVEF and SVR but also the ORs of the remaining selected predictors included in the final model. 2. The analysis of perioperative change in LVEF and survival has been adjusted with respect to age and gender. What about all the other predictors displayed in Table 1? I'd welcome a Cox regression model where the predictors were selected by backward elimination, similarly to the approach pursued in the logistic regression analysis. A table with the results of the final Cox model should be then added and discussed. An additional specific point: Fig. 4 displays cumulative incidence curves. Why didn't the authors provide traditional survival curves? 3. The competing risks analysis doesn't seem to be adjusted for the available predictors. Why? I'd welcome an analysis that adjusts for the available predictors, consistently to what has been done in the rest of the paper. Reviewer #3: This very interesting study evaluates the impact of myocardial revascularization on left ventricular function. Even though, a few questions must be answered before acceptance. 1) This study is a post-hoc analysis of the STICH trial (2º hypothesis). Although it is implied in the manuscript that this research is a post-hoc analysis of a portion of the STICH trial, this is not clearly stated in the method section of the manuscript. 2) Inclusion criteria are not clearly stated in the manuscript. 3) Another question that must be answered is why the patients participating in the first hypothesis of were not included. 4) The study used different methods to evaluate LVEF before and after the procedure. The variations observed in LVEF were comparable among the different methods? 5) There is no mention in the manuscript how the authors defined the sample size or reason for not having it defined. 6) SVR did not promote improvement in the original stich trial. How come that it was an independent predictor for > 10 % increase in LVEF? Selection Bias? ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Perioperative changes in left ventricular systolic function following surgical revascularization PONE-D-22-19400R1 Dear Dr. Downey, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. 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Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors examined changes in LVEF in 549 patients with left ventricular systolic dysfunction (LVEF <50%) who underwent CABG as part of the Surgical Treatment of Ischemic Heart Failure (STICH) trial. In conclusion, approximately 25% of patients with ischemic cardiomyopathy undergoing CABG experienced perioperative LVEF improvement of 10% or more, the likelihood of LVEF improvement was inversely proportional to preoperative LVEF, LVEF improvement was not affected by the presence of myocardial viability, and LVEF improvement was associated with improved long-term survival. These results add to our understanding of perioperative LVEF changes related to CABG by demonstrating an inverse correlation between LVEF improvement and preoperative LVEF. The manuscript was improved as a result of peer review. No further comments. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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