Peer Review History
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PONE-D-22-18775Microbial effects of supplemented prebiotics, probiotics and synbiotics after Caesarean section or exposure to antibiotics in the first week of life: a systematic reviewPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Carpay, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 18 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Additional Editor Comments: Reviewer#1: In the current manuscript, the authors summarize the evidence regarding the effects of prebiotics, probiotics, and symbiotics on the intestinal microbiota composition of term infants born by Caesarean section or exposed to antibiotics in the first week of life. The authors have focused on an important and interesting clinical question and covered elements that are necessary for a systematic review; the patient, group of patients, or problem being evaluated; the intervention; comparison interventions; and specific outcomes. The discussion section provides appropriate clarification from the authors whenever it is suspected. Authors have commented on the limitations of the review itself, including those of the included studies. Authors have considered fatal flaw(s) and performed risk of bias assessments. I think the current manuscript is acceptable. Reviewer#2: The topic of the systematic review is very interesting and useful for the scientific community. However, authors present a review that in my opinion needs to be worked in depth. I am concern specifically on important errors in methodology and discussion. Some of the most important issues I consider should be corrected for future applications are: 1. Authors included studies until August 2021, which is almost one year ago. I would recommend to the authors to check for the new articles that fill their selection criteria published during the last year. 2. The searching strings are not clear. Authors don´t indicate which are their keywords for their searching. Neither do they present the combinations of this keywords. A first consequence of this lack of accuracy in the searching strategy is the vast number of articles obtained (11248), leading to an unnecessary amount of screening work (title and abstract). The use of filters would have also helped them. 3. Besides the high amount of information give in the 2 tables, these results have been very poorly discussed in the discussion section. The results obtained must be always discussed in the discussion section. If those are not discussed, it does not make any sense to present them. Other observations are: Abstract: Selection criteria should be presented in the abstract. It is important to state the design of the studies selected for the review. Bifidobacterium and Lactobacillus are not species. Please define them or re-write the sentence. When reporting variations in gut microbial populations, please indicate the group of comparison. Introduction: Why are authors naming “microbiome” to the “collection of microorganisms”? I am aware that many researchers use the term “gut microbiota” and “gut microbiome” indistinctly, but in essence, these terms don´t mean the same. Please explain. The lack of vertical mother-to-infant transmission is not only the possible cause of microbial dysbiosis in the newborn. Please complete. When authors write about antibiotic exposure, they seem to present this as an issue independent of caesarean section. However, they should bear in mind that antibiotic administration to the mother also occurs during caesarian section. The definitions of pre, pro and synbiotics should be presented. Results Authors should indicate the reasons of the elimination of the articles in the first step of the screening (11193). Table 1: The interventions must be given in detail regarding the CFU of the probiotics (alone or in combination with prebiotics in symbiotic preparations) the bacterial strains used in the probiotics and in the synbiotic formulations, the prebiotic amount provided per dose, the dairy dose, and the administration route. Footnote of table one present two times “I”, for “Intervention” and for OUT. Critical appraisal: authors should indicate what each color means. Please check for mistakes in the bacterial nomenclature of bacteria (specially the use of italics) throughout the manuscript, including the tables. Authors state that “this is the first systematic review evaluating the effects of pre-, pro- and synbiotics specifically in both Caesarean born and antibiotic-exposed infants”. However only 1 out of the 12 studies are actually dealing with antibiotics. Reviewr#3: Dear Authors, The manuscript is in interesting filed. However, there are some major concerns. Overall, whole manuscript is required to English language editing. Then, please consider following comments. Title: -It is better to brief. Abstract: -Methods section: Please insert inclusion/exclusion criteria, main keywords, update the search, and insert grey literature Introduction: -Nearly, more than half of Ref. are addressed in this section, please reduce Ref. -Please address past systematic reviews and then the novelty of the current study. Methods: -It is better to update search, insert grey literature, and confirm the method is based on PRISMA. -Did you search ref. lists? It is essential to hand search Ref. list of the included studies when conducting a systematic review. -In eligibility criteria, clarify characteristics of control group, they should receive which one? prebiotics, placebo, or none of them? -The second inclusion criteria “six weeks after birth” is ambiguous. In table 1 is observed using intervention more than 6w. What is your reason? -In critical appraisal; the last sentence “Several studies included…..”should move to discussion. -Please delete “the review and protocol were not registrated”. Results: -First line: correct dictation “deduplication”. -“ Lay et al.[33] published results of a subgroup analysis based on the RCT by Chua et al.[34]” Why included this study? It is a duplication publication. Please describe. -Zhong et al study is included vaginal/cesarean delivery. Please recheck the data with original paper and correct them in your tables. Discussion: -This section needs to revise by adding more details and discussion about your results. Best Regards, Eic#: Dear Authors, Please consider following important points: -Prepare a response letter point by point to each comment and highlight all corrections and changes by yellow color in whole manuscript. -Consider Language Editing. Best Regards, [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: N/A Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: In the current manuscript, the authors summarize the evidence regarding the effects of prebiotics, probiotics, and symbiotics on the intestinal microbiota composition of term infants born by Caesarean section or exposed to antibiotics in the first week of life. The authors have focused on an important and interesting clinical question and covered elements that are necessary for a systematic review; the patient, group of patients, or problem being evaluated; the intervention; comparison interventions; and specific outcomes. The discussion section provides appropriate clarification from the authors whenever it is suspected. Authors have commented on the limitations of the review itself, including those of the included studies. Authors have considered fatal flaw(s) and performed risk of bias assessments. I think the current manuscript is acceptable. Reviewer #2: The topic of the systematic review is very interesting and useful for the scientific community. However, authors present a review that in my opinion needs to be worked in depth. I am concern specifically on important errors in methodology and discussion. Some of the most important issues I consider should be corrected for future applications are: 1. Authors included studies until August 2021, which is almost one year ago. I would recommend to the authors to check for the new articles that fill their selection criteria published during the last year. 2. The searching strings are not clear. Authors don´t indicate which are their keywords for their searching. Neither do they present the combinations of this keywords. A first consequence of this lack of accuracy in the searching strategy is the vast number of articles obtained (11248), leading to an unnecessary amount of screening work (title and abstract). The use of filters would have also helped them. 3. Besides the high amount of information give in the 2 tables, these results have been very poorly discussed in the discussion section. The results obtained must be always discussed in the discussion section. If those are not discussed, it does not make any sense to present them. Other observations are: Abstract: Selection criteria should be presented in the abstract. It is important to state the design of the studies selected for the review. Bifidobacterium and Lactobacillus are not species. Please define them or re-write the sentence. When reporting variations in gut microbial populations, please indicate the group of comparison. Introduction: Why are authors naming “microbiome” to the “collection of microorganisms”? I am aware that many researchers use the term “gut microbiota” and “gut microbiome” indistinctly, but in essence, these terms don´t mean the same. Please explain. The lack of vertical mother-to-infant transmission is not only the possible cause of microbial dysbiosis in the newborn. Please complete. When authors write about antibiotic exposure, they seem to present this as an issue independent of caesarean section. However, they should bear in mind that antibiotic administration to the mother also occurs during caesarian section. The definitions of pre, pro and synbiotics should be presented. Results Authors should indicate the reasons of the elimination of the articles in the first step of the screening (11193). Table 1: The interventions must be given in detail regarding the CFU of the probiotics (alone or in combination with prebiotics in symbiotic preparations) the bacterial strains used in the probiotics and in the synbiotic formulations, the prebiotic amount provided per dose, the dairy dose, and the administration route. Footnote of table one present two times “I”, for “Intervention” and for OUT. Critical appraisal: authors should indicate what each color means. Please check for mistakes in the bacterial nomenclature of bacteria (specially the use of italics) throughout the manuscript, including the tables. Authors state that “this is the first systematic review evaluating the effects of pre-, pro- and synbiotics specifically in both Caesarean born and antibiotic-exposed infants”. However only 1 out of the 12 studies are actually dealing with antibiotics. Reviewer #3: Dear Authors, The manuscript is in interesting filed. However, there are some major concerns. Overall, whole manuscript is required to English language editing. Then, please consider following comments. Title: -It is better to brief. Abstract: -Methods section: Please insert inclusion/exclusion criteria, main keywords, update the search, and insert grey literature Introduction: -Nearly, more than half of Ref. are addressed in this section, please reduce Ref. -Please address past systematic reviews and then the novelty of the current study. Methods: -It is better to update search, insert grey literature, and confirm the method is based on PRISMA. -Did you search ref. lists? It is essential to hand search Ref. list of the included studies when conducting a systematic review. -In eligibility criteria, clarify characteristics of control group, they should receive which one? prebiotics, placebo, or none of them? -The second inclusion criteria “six weeks after birth” is ambiguous. In table 1 is observed using intervention more than 6w. What is your reason? -In critical appraisal; the last sentence “Several studies included…..”should move to discussion. -Please delete “the review and protocol were not registrated”. Results: -First line: correct dictation “deduplication”. -“ Lay et al.[33] published results of a subgroup analysis based on the RCT by Chua et al.[34]” Why included this study? It is a duplication publication. Please describe. -Zhong et al study is included vaginal/cesarean delivery. Please recheck the data with original paper and correct them in your tables. Discussion: -This section needs to revise by adding more details and discussion about your results. Best Regards, ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Solaleh Emamgholipour Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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PONE-D-22-18775R1Microbial effects of prebiotics, probiotics and synbiotics after Caesarean section or exposure to antibiotics in the first week of life: a systematic reviewPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Carpay, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 18 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols. Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Ozra Tabatabaei-Malazy Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #3: (No Response) Reviewer #4: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #3: Partly Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: N/A ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #3: Dear Authors, The quality of the manuscript is improved. However, it should be considered following comments. -Considering clinical trials as one of the inclusion criteria, why is not limited the search strategy to it? It could reduce the initial records, and time of assessment. -Please insert type of trials in table-1. -According to following evidence, mode of delivery has influenced on gut microbiota of the infants. I suggest to exclude Zhong study and also revised the title and inclusion criteria. The mode of delivery affects the diversity and colonization pattern of the gut microbiota during the first year of infants' life: a systematic review. BMC Gastroenterol. 2016 Jul 30;16(1):86. doi: 10.1186/s12876-016-0498-0. Best Regards, Reviewer #4: Carpay and colleagues provided a summary of the research on the impact of prebiotics, probiotics, and symbiotics on the makeup of the intestinal microbiota in term infants who were delivered by Caesarean section or who had received antibiotics during the first week of life. The patient, group of patients, or issue being examined; the intervention; comparator interventions; and particular outcomes are the aspects that the authors have addressed that are essential for a systematic review. The rational of the systematic review appears reasonable for me and the authors synthesized the results in a very informative and efficient way. The purpose and backgrounds are appropriately addressed in the introduction and discussion section. Methods section was written at its best. Tables and figures were adequate and inform the readers all the necessary information. Whenever it is questioned, the authors offer the necessary clarification in the discussion area. The review's limitations as well as the ones of the included research have been discussed by the authors. The authors have assessed the potential for bias and taken into account probable RoBs. The manuscript as it is now acceptable for publication in my opinion. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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Microbial effects of prebiotics, probiotics and synbiotics after Caesarean section or exposure to antibiotics in the first week of life: a systematic review PONE-D-22-18775R2 Dear Dr. Carpay, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Ozra Tabatabaei-Malazy Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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