Peer Review History
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PONE-D-22-20555Hamstring muscle architecture assessed sonographically using wide field of view: a reliability studyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Cronin, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Both reviewers found merit in your manuscript, however, each provided suggestions that can improve the manuscript. There are places throughout the manuscript that reviewers felt could be made clearer. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 10 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: COMMENTS FOR THE AUTHOR(S) Thank you for the opportunity to review the paper “Hamstring muscle architecture assessed sonographically using wide field of view: a reliability study”. The purpose of this study was to assess the reliability of static wide field of view ultrasound to quantify the muscle architecture of the hamstring muscles: Bicep Femoris long head, Bicep Femoris short head, Semitendinosus and Semimembranosus. The authors recruited 20 male amateur athletes and performed ultrasound measurements on two separate occasions. They concluded that static wide field of view is a reliable ultrasound technique to quantify the architectural characteristics of the hamstring muscles. Although the manuscript is very interesting and well written, some concerns about the sample size need to be point out and additional information are necessary. General comment • Why only 10 participants were recruited? Do the authors have any information to support that this sample size has sufficient statistical power for this reliability study? I believe this information is very relevant, and it is the main point to increase (or decrease) the support for the conclusions reported by the authors. Specific comments Abstract Lines 51 and 52: I suggest being specific for the population investigated in the present study (male amateur athletes). Introduction •No comment. Materials and Methods •Line 141 – Why only 20 participants? Do the authors have any information to support that this sample size has sufficient statistical power for this reliability study? •Line 141 – Why only men? Is there some rationale for not include women? Statistical Analysis •Line 212 – Is “3,1” a typo? Or it is supposed to be the reference number 31? Discussion •There is a mix of references styles over this section. For example, “(18, 19, 22, 33, 34)”, “(13) (17)”, “Chleboun et al. (2001)”, “Timmins and colleagues (2015)”. I suggest using only one reference style accordingly PlosONE authors guidelines. Conclusion •I suggest being specific for the population investigated in the present study (male amateur athletes). Reviewer #2: General Comments The authors stated the purpose of this article was to assess the reliability of wide field of view ultrasound in architecture of the four hamstring muscles. In general, the paper is methodologically sound however, improvements on clarity and some section-specific adjustments are warranted. Yet, the manuscript could be both useful for researchers and clinicians with the following adjustments taken into consideration. Specific Comments Introduction 1. The first paragraph is choppy (Lines 72-76), could use better transition words between sentences Example: (Line 73) “…sports; the biceps femoris long head (BFlh) is the most…” May sound better as: “…sports with the biceps femoris long head (BFlh) being the most…” 2. Lines 79-81: Citation warrented. 3. Lines 83-84: All pennation angles are acute by design and therefore “acute pennation angles” should be changed to a relative term. Further, the sentence starting with “In contrast...” is incorrect. Unsure if this is a typing error or a misunderstanding. Larger pennation angles = greater physiological cross-sectional area (PSCA) and maximal force output. It currently reads as smaller angles have greater PCSA and maximal force output. 4. Lines 100-102: Remove “to image” mid-sentence. 5. Line 122: Elaborate why semi-automated tracing is good (e.g. level of control, etc). The reader must imply when it should be explicitly stated by authors. 6. Line 124: insert change “tracing software precisely measured BFlh” to “tracing software has precisely measured BFlh” – also %CV values are provided here. Please cite or state whether these are within lab values. Methods 1. Figure 1: Please label Zones A and B on panel A (not just in legend). 2. Line 143: Justify three-week session gap. 3. Lines 150-151: Provide a citation to support why sonography experience is important. (e.g., Carr et al. 2021 J Funct Morphol Kinesiol) Hamstring US Acquisition 4. The imaged limb is never mentioned outside of the abstract. State that the left limb was imaged for all participants and justify. Unclear if the left limb was non-dominant for everyone. Protocol 1. Figure 1: Does the blue line include the skin? Color intensity should be higher and lines could be thicker. Additionally, the image quality of the entire figure is poor. Quality Control 1. Line 204: Clarify the where the focus was set. After 40mm deep, include (depth 80mm) and place comma after. Unclear is trapezoidal should be next listed item without comma. 2. Line 206: Clarify that the sonographer was in the seated position not the participant. Statistical analysis 1. Lines 210-211: Would be helpful to see paratheses of muscles after each variable. Example: “…calculated for: muscle length (BFlh, SM, BFsh, ST), muscle fascicle length (BFlh, SM)…” Results 1. Line 226: Authors mention “intra-session reliability” in Table 1. Where are the intra-session reliability results? All tables are inter-session… Please clarify. Include both if you have intra- and inter-session. Discussion 1. Overall discussion could be clearer/better structured. Perhaps subheadings for each variable (thickness, fascicle length, etc.) would be helpful for reader. 2. Line 282: Clarify where the “great variation” around location exists. Is it the individual’s muscle or sonographer? May warrant citation. 3. Lines 301-302 and 346-347: These statements should be in the methods. 4. Are there previous studies that have used the same sites as your study? Unclear. However, the lack of standardization across the literature is certainly an area for growth/improvement as authors have stated. 5. Lines 309-312: Clarify this sentence. The fascicle is longer than the FOV, 81.7-107mm vs 47mm. Was an extended FOW used? 6. Lines 315-319: The pitfalls of trigonometric extrapolation should be stated in methods. 7. Line 319: “..greater..”. Do the authors mean “better” or “larger”? The authors may be trying to explain that static images are overestimating fascicle lengths because they use extrapolation compared to EFOV which depicts entire fascicle and does not need extrapolation…but later (line 363) mentions underestimation. Please rework sentence. Are “static images” regular FOV? 8. Line 321: replace “large” with “larger” 9. Line 322: insert comma after “Furthermore” 10. Line 342: State the pennation angle measurement site in the methods. 11. Line 356: “Lf”, first abbreviation state full term. 12. Line 366: Do authors mean “trace” instead of “trend”? 13. Line 375: Citation uses brackets instead of paratheses. 14. Important to note that FOV is an ultrasound/probe limitation. Not everyone uses the same equipment and therefore there is a variety of ways in which researchers measure architecture. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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