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PONE-D-21-22466The effectiveness of problem-based learning in the education of first-year medical students in multidisciplinary aspects: a meta-AnalysisPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Wu, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 06 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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We will update your Data Availability statement to reflect the information you provide in your cover letter. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The study titles as ‘The effectiveness of problem-based learning in the education of first-year medical students in multidisciplinary aspects: a meta-Analysis. However, the objective is to synthesize the effectiveness of PBL in improving knowledge/critical thinking, problem-solving and self-directed learning in first-year medical students. The title didn’t reflect the study exactly. Hence, a revision is suggested. Also the term multidisciplinary approach may lead mislead the readers. Abstract.At this point of time, Problem based learning (PBL) is not an innovative method as it is used widely used as a constructivist pedagogic philosophy and an instructional format for promoting contextual, co-operative and self-directed learning. Moreover, PBL is used not only for medical education. Please revise the statement. The authors are encouraged to discuss the challenges faced by the first year medical students in adapting PBL to justify the study objective. The reasons such as current studies focused on students in advanced years and lack of such studies in the first-year students should not be the only reason for this study. Introduction: The authors’ statement on the effectiveness of PBL “Although PBL-used widely, still there is no substantial evidence to support the claim that PBL is proven to be more effective than conventional lecture methods” merely highlighting the comparativeness between PBL and Lecture. In fact, there are reports on the effectiveness of PBL, which improves student engagement by enabling knowledge and information sharing and discussion. The delivery of curriculum in medical education has a variety of methods to teach. It would be appropriate if authors focus more on how PBL is compared with other forms of teaching as well. The last paragraph of introduction, explained the results of 2 studies [5,6] and mentioned that there has been no meta-analysis that discusses the effectiveness of PBL in first-year health students in multidisciplinary aspects. What does it mean by ‘health students’. This paragraph need revision. Highlighting the connection between the research gap and the study objective clearly. The purpose of this meta-analysis is to synthesize the evidence on the effectiveness of PBL. A revision is required in that statement mentioned about the purpose as the meta-analysis is to examine an effect within a collection of studies. Methodology: Eligibility criteria and data extraction is not clear. Under quality assessment, it is mentioned If the conflict has not been settled, a Senior Researcher consultation has been carried out. Please provide the detail of the reviewer. Reference 10 is not a RCT- it is a Quasi-experimental research, which specifically lacks the element of random assignment to treatment or control. Reference 11 also a randomised cross-matched study. Please review accordingly. Discussion: The Discussion section is an important scientific component in a manuscript describing a meta-analysis, as the authors should discuss their current findings in the context of the available scientific literature and existing knowledge. The readers would expect possible reasons for the positive or negative results of the meta-analysis. As meta-analyses are usually synthesizing the existing evidence from multiple primary studies, authors can recommend key suggestions for conducting and/or reporting future primary studies. Conclusion:The PBL method in the learning process is a breakthrough made to replace the conventional learning system, which has many weaknesses. The statement is not the conclusion from the study. The authors may discuss such points in the discussion. There is a lack of connection between the research question and conclusion. It is suggested to review the conclusion. Also, there is no limitation is mentioned. Provide the list of limitations of this study. Reviewer #2: This meta-analysis paper aimed to synthesize the effectiveness of PBL in improving knowledge/critical thinking, problem-solving and self-directed learning in first-year medical students However few points need to be addressed 1. Just two databases is often not acceptable for data search. Minimum three is required to make sure you haven't missed any publication. Author needs to use Scopus or any other database and do the search as well as update Prisma chart 2. Heterogeneity is very high in almost all forest plots. These needs to be explored and discussed more in detail 3. Authors need to critically evaluate the included articles in their discussion. The discussion is too superficial. 4. Few errors in grammar could be identified ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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PONE-D-21-22466R1The Effectiveness of Problem Based Learning in Improving Critical Thinking, Problem-Solving and Self-Directed Learning in First-Year Medical Students: A Meta-AnalysisPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Wu, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Kindly make the suggested minor revisions. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 22 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Introduction The adaptation process for first-year medical students is an important problem because it is one of the factors that significantly affect educational outcomes. reference ? A study on the adaptation process of first-year medical students involving 200 participants showed that 63% of students had problems adapting to the learning process. reference? Problem-based learning (PBL) is an educational method that emphasizes active participation, problem-solving, and critical thinking skills compared to conventional medical education practices.[3] This statement is contradictory to the results. Ideally authors can consider to keep this point the later stage, mostly at the end of the paragraph rather than starting with this. Discussion Various studies have been conducted regarding the effectiveness of PBL to be applied in 274 the teaching and learning process. - References Meanwhile, intervention duration might not be an absolute factor of PBL effectiveness because Tripathi [16] found significant results, and this study had the shortest intervention duration compared to other studies. This is statement is not clear. In this meta-analysis, we evaluated medical students in their first year. - Actually the authors evaluated the data only. Please revise First-year students often experience obstacles is adapting to lecture methods that are different from high school teaching methods. reference? Several studies discuss the PBL effect on general learning outcomes and specific backgrounds. What are the studies ? references. Under conclusion section, authors mentioned that "In conclusion, according to our findings",-doesn't sound logical. Pls consider to revise. Reviewer #2: The authors have addressed all the comments provided by reviewer. The paper can be accepted and published ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: MariKannan Maharajan Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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The Effectiveness of Problem Based Learning in Improving Critical Thinking, Problem-Solving and Self-Directed Learning in First-Year Medical Students: A Meta-Analysis PONE-D-21-22466R2 Dear Dr. Wu, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Huijuan Cao, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): With all the revisions you've made responding to reviewers' comments, I have just one more suggestion. Please clarify the grouping method of all the included studies. Is there any study used cluster randomization method? If so, the pooling analysis with data from both cluster randomized trial and individual randomized trial is different to the commone one. Reviewers' comments: |
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