Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMay 27, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-15405Opioid and gabapentinoid prescriptions in England from 2015 to 2020.PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Forget, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 02 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This is an interesting subject, and worthy of further study. However there are several issues which ideally need to be addressed before publication: -The data from OpenPrescribing uses items. Although this may be acceptable, there is no mention of the limitations of this method, i.e. that it doesn't take into account quantity or strength of the items prescribed. This is particularly important given the change to the CD scheduling of gabapentinoids during the study period, limiting the maximum number of days which can be prescribed. - I think it would be further helpful to more clearly describe the changes to the CD scheduling, and the effect it may have. The statement "The newly promulgated management plan likely influenced prescriptions rate" is unclear - I'm not aware of any management plans being put in place nationally. I'm assuming it relates to move to schedule 3, but this is not mentioned. As a side-note, i'm assuming the "Drug Abuse Act 1971" actually refers to the "Misuse of Drugs Act 1971", and the same for the Misuse of Drugs Regulations 2001. - It is unclear from the text what the findings represent, due to the limitations of data. There is discussion in the introduction about the safety of the co-prescribed opioids and gabapentinoids. However it is not possible to describe what proportion of patients are prescribed both these drugs, as this is not available within the data. The limitations section on this should be strengthened. - It would be helpful to see some discussion of demographic differences between regions, otherwise it's not clear why the authors have undertaken the analysis at regional level. - It would be helpful to see further discussion about possible reasons for the change in ratio, e.g. due to changes in national guidance for other analgesic options. - This statement is unclear: "about 1% of the general population is in a situation of drug abuse, a proportion that could reach 40% of people who receive prescriptions." This suggests that only 2.5% of patients receive prescriptions. Is this actually referring to patients receiving opioid or gabapentinoid prescriptions? Also, the research referenced does not appear to be a systematic review as described in the authors' text, but a relatively small study based in Appalachian Kentucky, and therefore clarification is needed, particularly given the ability to use this data in a very specific area with known drug abuse problems in the USA with relation to England, which has very different models of care. - There are some points in the text where ideally the authors should revise the language in order to improve readability. In particular the conclusion should be reviewed for language. Reviewer #2: Thank you for the opportunity to review this retrospective analysis of prescribing trends of opioids and gabapentinoids over time, in the UK. Please find some suggestions for improvements and/or clarifications. Abstract: please provide more information about the data sources, and the analysis. There are no statistical results included in the abstract and no test of trend etc.. This should be included. Please make sure the key points match the findings of the study Introduction: -Statement about the dangerous combination use of opioids and gabapentionoids should be stronger in my opinion with reference to at least 3 studies that point to increased mortality from the combo (e.g., refer to the 2 observational studies by Juulink et al; there are others). -Please mention and reference risk of seizure from stopping abruptly -Why was data presented as a ratio of opioids to gabapentinoids? -Did the authors consider looking at opioid doses? Same question for gabapentin vs pregabalin. Why simply look at dispensations? These can change depending on whether prescriptions are for 1,2,4, 6 weeks etc… - Any consideration to doing a time series analysis of this data? - I see that costs are mentioned qualitatively in the results but not quantitatively. I also don’t see this in the methods. Should this be added? -At times I see mention of prescriptions for individual classes and other times I see this reported as a ratio. This needs to be clarified and unified. -Addiction should be replaced with “use disorder” -Caution against mentioning that gabapentinoids have been introduced to reduce opioid dependence as this is a hypothesis, only and has not been demonstrated to my knowledge. -consider reviewing this reference for peri-operative lack of effect: https://pubs.asahq.org/anesthesiology/article/133/2/265/109137/Perioperative-Use-of-Gabapentinoids-for-the# - Readers who are not from the UK will not know that the management plan is. It is mentioned in a couple of places but it isn’t clear what it consists of and how it is relevant. - issue with the first sentence on page 11 - I see many pivotal studies addressing the lack of efficacy and the harms of gabapentinoids are missing from the references. Gingras et al., Verret et al., works by Juurink, RCTs showing no effect but increased risk of adverse events that were published in JAMA, NEJM etc…the references could be more robust for this study - I like the figures but the statistical analysis plan is not that clear to be and the analysis is also not well described or robust. How about at time series analysis? And how about including some measure of the size of the population and the dose vs dispensations. Also not clear whether a ratio was calculated and where that is presented graphically and why it was done. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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PONE-D-22-15405R1Opioid and gabapentinoid prescriptions in England from 2015 to 2020.PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Forget, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 11 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols. Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Jorge Enrique Machado-Alba, M.D; Ph.D Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for the revision to this paper. However, I still have concerns regarding the basis for the analyses. As stated in my previous review, it is not possible to tell from the prescribing data available at OpenPrescribing.net whether a patient is taking opioids and gabapentinoids concomitantly, and that the limitations should be strengthened. The paper now states "However, the differences observed and the variability of the ratio were consistently observed and deserve to be underlined, particularly seeing their implications at a Public Health level", and now includes "we described the evolution of the prescriptions of opioids and gabapentinoids, and calculated their ratios (as a surrogate for their concomitant use at a population level) for each month." I do not believe you can use this data to show any sort of surrogate of concomitant taking of opioid and gabapentinoid, for reasons stated above, and therefore this should be revised to remove this suggestion. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Richard Croker Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. 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Opioid and gabapentinoid prescriptions in England from 2015 to 2020. PONE-D-22-15405R2 Dear Dr. Forget, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Vijayaprakash Suppiah, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: I didn't have any additional comments for this article. It was another reviewer who did. I think their response to the other reviewer is adequate. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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