Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionAugust 5, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-24697Racial and Ethnic Variation in COVID-19 Care, Treatment, and Outcomes: A Prospective Cohort Study from the MiCOVID-19 RegistryPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Sutton, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 08 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: It is unclear why the authors referred to racial/race and ethnic/ethnicity, not only ethnic/ethnicity. Therefore, I suggest removing racial and race from the manuscript. Introduction Add “Introduction” at page 5. Authors wrote “severe acute respiratory syndrome coronavirus 2 (SARS-CoV-2), also known as COVID-19” SARS-COV-2 is the virus, COVID-19 is the disease, so writing “also known as COVID-19” is incorrect. Please reformulate the sentence, also adding the meaning of COVID-19. In the all manuscript the authors confused COVID-19 with SARS-CoV-2 (e.g. at the page 7 the authors wrote “Patients were included in the registry if they tested positive for COVID-19”. In this case, they should use SARS-CoV-2). Please re-read the manuscript carefully and correct all of the mistakes. Please update the number of deaths (4’760’000 the 26th of September). Before writing about the racial and ethnic disparities, I suggest writing about what COVID-19 is, and its presentation. So, I suggest explaining the symptoms, both major (fever, dyspnea, cough) and minor (dysgeusia, anosmia, gastrointestinal symptoms, headache and skin lesions), giving the reader the full picture of the diseases. Then, I suggest reading these articles that you could use and cite in the manuscript expanding this part (https://doi.org/10.1371/journal.pone.0248009; https://doi.org/10.1097/IPC.0000000000000952, https://doi.org/10.1002/hed.26269). The sentence “Despite these theories, few studies have examined differences in hospital care processes as a potential moderator of adverse outcomes in patients with COVID-19”. It is not clear what the authors mean with “moderator”. Please comment. Methods It is not clear if the authors conducted a retrospective or a prospective study. In the title, they wrote “prospective” and so in the methods section; contrary to the abstract, they wrote, “ This was a retrospective cohort study using MiCOVID-19, a multi-center, prospective, collaborative quality improvement registry”.” In my opinion, they have conducted a retrospective study, so I suggest removing “prospective” from the title and methods. The authors wrote “Patients discharged from a participating site between February 19, 2020 and November 19, 2020 were used for this analysis.” What is it the definition of “discharged”. Did the authors also consider dead patients? What is it a “trained clinical abstractor”? The authors wrote “when there was a strong documented clinical suspicion of COVID-19 but testing was not performed or recorded due to logistical constraints”. Please specify what “document clinical suspicion” means. Furthermore, I suggest writing how many patients responded to this definition and how patients had a positive swab. Regarding ethnicity, it is unclear what they meant with “Non-Hispanic”. Please comment. Results In the results section, the authors wrote “42.7% were Black, 43.8% were White, 2.0% were Asian, 3.9% were Latino, and 7.5% were of unknown race and ethnicity.” Thus, the sum is 99.9%. Have you evaluated the distribution of the different values? For example, creatinine, bilirubin and lactate seem having a non normal distribution. If the value does not have a normal distribution, you should use the median and interquartile range, not mean ± SD. Furthermore, ANOVA could not be used. Please verify the distribution of all different variables, and re-perform the analysis. I suggest performing a multivariate analysis to evaluate if ethnic groups, comorbidity, or treatment are associated with an increased risk of death. Discussion Please modify the discussion with the new results. Regarding chronic treatment, assuming angiotensin receptor blockers was associated with an increased risk of infection (10.26355/eurrev_202101_24424) and a worse outcome (10.1186/s13643-021-01802-6). I suggest adding a sentence about it and these two references. Tables -Legend with the meaning of the abbreviations is missing. Please add it. The tables' title are not clear. Please re-write the title explain to the reader what information are present in each table. Furthermore, I suggest adding the “overall” column. Reviewer #2: Manuscript is technically sound for analysis. Statistical analysis was performed nicely all analysis ,including table, graph , figure are nicely explained. All data are available. Its written in standard English. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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Racial and Ethnic Variation in COVID-19 Care, Treatment, and Outcomes: A Retrospective Cohort Study from the MiCOVID-19 Registry PONE-D-21-24697R1 Dear Dr. Sutton, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Zivanai Cuthbert Chapanduka, MBChB (M.D) Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors replied to all my comment. In my opinion the manuscript is now suitable to be published. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No ********** |
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PONE-D-21-24697R1 Racial and Ethnic Variation in COVID-19 Care, Treatment, and Outcomes: A Retrospective Cohort Study from the MiCOVID-19 Registry Dear Dr. Sutton: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Zivanai Cuthbert Chapanduka Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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