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PONE-D-22-13073Thermoregulatory Heat-Escape/Cold-Seeking Behavior of Mice and the Influence of Capsaicin DesensitizationPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Kei Nagashima, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. After reading the manuscript and considering the reports by the two reviewers, I believe it has merit, can be further evaluated, and possibly accepted for publication after several modifications to improve its quality. The first reviewer provided suggestions to improve the data interpretation and quality of the presentation, particularly the Results and Discussion sections. The second reviewer raised questions about methods, knowledge of relevant literature data, interpretation of the results, and the English language. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 18 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Additional Editor Comments: We have two outstanding reviews of the current manuscript that will help to improve its quality, particularly the interpretation of the results. Indeed, the second reviewer seems to provide more straightforward explanations for the current findings (considering the published literature) than the explanations included in the manuscript. In addition, we sometimes report findings that contradict the existing literature; although contradiction is part of advancing scientific knowledge, the existing literature must be acknowledged and discussed. This point should be addressed in the revised manuscript. On another issue, the cover letter was written to Scientific Reports, not PLoS One. Please make the appropriate corrections in this letter and ensure that the manuscript is not currently under review in another journal. I am sorry for taking too long to reach an editorial decision after receiving the comments from the reviewers. Unfortunately, I had COVID recently and stayed quarantined with my family, which restricted my working time. Regardless, I look forward to receiving a much-improved version of the current manuscript. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? 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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This study was well conducted in methodological terms and the discussion was cautious for some interpretations of the results. The data were not entirely made available by the authors, however, the final results for the description of the results are show. A suggestion to insert some results that were not presented in the final manuscript was requested. The reading is easy to understand, just correcting some grammatical errors (listed in the review). Reviewer #2: Masuda et al. developed a new device for the study of behavioral thermoregulation in rodents. In the newly developed system they show that the systemic capsaicin desensitization of mice impairs the heat escape/cold-seeking behavior and increases core temperature. A lower number of c-Fos-immunoreactive cells was also found in thermoregulatory nuclei in the preoptic area of the anterior hypothalamus in response to heat exposure after desensitization. The novel device and the topic of the paper is interesting, but questions related to methods, knowledge of relevant literature data, and interpretation of the results as well as their discussion should be addressed. GENERAL COMMENTS 1) The authors miss to mention relevant findings from research groups which contributed with meaningful achievements to the fields of behavioral thermoregulation and the involved neural structures; of the role of TRPV1 in thermoregulation in rodents; and of the use thermogradient systems. This ignorance resulted in incorrect statements and conclusions in many places throughout the manuscript. Some major points are listed below: i) the preoptic area is involved rather in autonomic than behavioral thermoregulation, while other brain areas such as the dorsal hypothalamic area. Was the c-Fos activity measured in that or other regions? ii) while the exact role of TRPV1 in thermoregulation is still subject to research, some knowledge is already available about its function. For example, in rodents TRPV1 does not play a thermosensor role in thermoregulation, especially not in the periphery. Instead, TRPV1-expressing neurons in the MnPO mediate the effects of TRPV1 agonists and the same neuron population is presumably the one that is damaged by systemic vanilloid desensitization. Since the TRPV1-expressing MnPO neurons are within the warmth-defense thermoeffector pathway, their damage with systemic capsaicin desensitization can easily explain the bigger increase in core temperature in response to heat exposure, which was also observed by the authors in the present study. Because of the likely contribution of the damage of central TRPV1 channels to the observed changes, the discussion about the sole activation of cold-seeking behavior by peripheral heat signals (e.g., ln. 319-320; 336-338; and 354-356) should be rewritten. Also, when discussing the role of TRPV1 in thermoregulatory responses in the hypothalamus and the effect of capsaicin desensitization on POA neurons, the authors should get more insight into the literature of the field (collected, for example, in PMID: 19749171). In sum, the discussion about the role of peripheral signals should be much more limited since it is not supported at all with any evidence (as also stated by the authors in ln. 369-371). On the other hand, the potential damage of the hypothalamic (MnPO) neurons could be emphasized more as it is supported with scientific literature. In relation with the above, it would be important to check if the lower c-Fos expression was specific to heat exposure or could it be due to a loss of neurons induced by capsaicin. Can the desensitized mice increase their c-Fos activity similarly as controls in the POA in response to stimuli other than heat? In either case, since the mice could not use heat escape as behavioral thermoregulation in the c-Fos experiments (Experiment 2), it is hard to understand how the observed changes indicate alterations in heat escape/cold-seeking. It is a further related point that it is already known that autonomic warmth-defense responses (e.g., skin vasodilation) to heat are impaired in capsaicin-desensitized animals, therefore statements about their potential contribution to the plateau of Tb should be rephrased (ln. 306-309). iii) when the authors compare their new system to previous devices (ln. 259-266), they mention that the corner preference was an obstacle in previous studies. However, they fail to mention a previously developed thermogradient system, which was repeatedly used for the study of behavioral thermoregulation (cold- and warmth-seeking) and could avoid the corner preference of the animals (see, for example, PMID: 16820025). The authors should also compare their new system to that one and familiarize with the results obtained in that system about brain nuclei of thermoregulatory behaviors. SPECIFIC POINTS 1) Ln. 46-49: the authors should not refer to a study published in 2016 as recent. 2) Ln. 54-85: the last part of the sentence is unclear. Which two groups of mice experienced similar increases in body temperature? 3) The dose of capsaicin used for desensitization (50 + 50 mg/kg s.c.) is quite high. How was it tolerated by the mice? Did the authors use any intervention to help the recovery of the mice? 4) Why was it necessary to use different vehicle to dissolve capsaicin for desensitization and for the eye-wiping test? 5) Was always the same eye of the mice used in the eye-wiping experiments? Ln. 124: since the liquid were administered in a counterbalanced order, the application could not be randomized on the day of the second experiment. 6) Ln. 130: What does “Each system” mean? Were more than one systems built and used in the experiments? 7) Why was 32C set only in areas 2, 3, or 4, but not in area 1 during trials 1 to 3? Ln. 143-144: the authors state the order of the 4 trials was randomized, but later in Results this is contradicted as they state that the control trial was always the first. This should be explained. 8) It is probably enough to state that the results are expressed in the mean and SD format in line 181. So, it could be deleted each time the results are specified to improve the readability of the text (e.g., ln. 187; 194-195, etc.). 9) Ln. 215-217: was the resting time in area 5 also reduced compared to areas 1-4 in the desensitized mice? 10) Ln. 221-222: the sentence in its current form does not make sense, it should be corrected. 11) Ln. 234: the text says the difference started at 5 min, but in Fig. 4 it is shown from 10 min. It should be corrected. 12) Ln. 280-281: if we assume equal distribution among four areas, then why would be the ratio less than 25%? This does not make any sense. Accordingly, I find it misleading to discuss the results as if the increased warmth preference of the desensitized mice could be excluded (e.g., ln. 285-286), because that was not shown here. It was shown only that they spent less time than controls at 32C compared to 36, 38, and 40C. Similarly, I think it is also a false statement that their ability to discern thermal stimuli was completely abolished (ln. 294). 13) Ln. 344-346: “Another study” is mentioned, but both sentences refer to the same paper. 14) Ln. 349-351: The sentence looks incorrect. Why would unchanged temperature in the control group mean that the number of c-Fos cells indicate response to thermal stimuli from the body surface? 15) Ln. 364-365: The sentence in its current form is false. Thermoregulatory behavior can be activated by many other stimuli than “heat information”, for example, capsaicin, endotoxin, etc. 16) The quality of representative photos in Figure 5A should be checked. In printed version hardly any structure can be recognized. Bar scale should be also inserted. 17) The language of the manuscript should be substantially improved, e.g., ln. 38 “are are”; ln. 53 “..”; ln. 63 “TPPV1”; ln. 83: “intensityof”; ln. 221 “CAP and CAP groups”; ln. 242: “MnPO, MnPO”; ln. 253: capsicin; ln. 341 “han”, etc. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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PONE-D-22-13073R1Thermoregulatory heat-escape/cold-seeking behavior in mice and the influence of TRPV1 channelsPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Kei Nagashima, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The authors satisfactorily addressed most of the comments made by the two reviewers. Thank you. As a result, the revised manuscript was much improved compared to the original one. However, both reviewers have indicated that minor corrections are still required before the manuscript is ready for publication. In addition, please see my comments at the end of this letter and make the required changes. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 13 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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This edit may be critical because the figure will not necessarily be close to/on the same page as the graph in the edited manuscript. 4. Please check if any additional clarification should be made to address the two major points that are still “bothering” the first reviewer. Concerning his/her first point, the abdominal temperature of the control group increased by approximately 1oC at 37oC (Figure 4B). The lack of statistical significance may result from the low number of animals used in this experiment (n = 5). The authors may want to comment on this point. 5. The first reviewer also listed five suggestions (i.e., minor points). Please adjust the manuscript accordingly to these suggestions. Note that, in the fourth comment, it should be figure 3 instead of figure 5. 6. The second reviewer still asks for clarification regarding the randomization of treatments in the eye wiping test. Please clarify this issue in the revised manuscript. 7. The second reviewer also mentioned that he/she could not open the data uploaded in the supplementary material. I could not open the file named “*Photoimages_R1.pdf” either. Please double check if everything is correct with supplementary material. 8. If the authors address these comments satisfactorily, the manuscript can be accepted for publication without another (i.e., third) round of external reviews. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. 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The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: All the comments were described in the archive. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Reviewer #2: The authors responded to my comments in a satisfactory manner. One minor issue that I still do not understand is related to randomization of treatments in the eye wiping test: if two substances are used (capsaicin and vehicle) and one of them is applied first and the other one 2 days later, then it does not look possible to randomize the order of application on both days (ln. 144-145). The treatment applied first will automatically determine the second treatment, hence no randomization can be performed at the second administration. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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Thermoregulatory heat-escape/cold-seeking behavior in mice and the influence of TRPV1 channels PONE-D-22-13073R2 Dear Dr. Kei Nagashima, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Samuel Penna Wanner, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): After reading the revised manuscript, I believe the authors have adequately addressed all the minor points the two reviewers and I (i.e., the Academic editor) have raised. Thank you! The manuscript deserves to be published in PLOS One in its current form. Congratulations. If the authors get a chance, please check if the sentence in line 471 lacks the word “less” before the word “activated”. Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-22-13073R2 Thermoregulatory heat-escape/cold-seeking behavior in mice and the influence of TRPV1 channels Dear Dr. Nagashima: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Samuel Penna Wanner Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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