Peer Review History
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PONE-D-22-03317Estimating treatment costs for uncomplicated diabetes at the International Rescue Committee Hagadera Hospital in KenyaPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Kanya, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== Thank you very much for submitting your work to PLOS ONE. The reviewers have suggested that you revise your manuscript based on their comments to make it publishable. Please address the reviewers' concerns point-by-point and submit your revised manuscript. Also, please address following editorial concerns as well: 1. The American Diabetes Association has suggested that the adjective 'diabetic' be not used with patients. Hence, write these as 'diabetes patients' or 'patients with diabetes'. 2. Rewrite references 27 and 35 properly. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Jun 09 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments (if provided): Thank you very much for submitting your work to PLOS ONE. The reviewers have suggested that you revise your manuscript based on their comments to make it publishable. Please address the reviewers' concerns point-by-point and submit your revised manuscript. Also, please address following editorial concerns as well: 1. The American Diabetes Association has suggested that the adjective 'diabetic' be not used with patients. Hence, write these as 'diabetes patients' or 'patients with diabetes'. 2. Rewrite references 27 and 35 properly. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: • General comments This paper addresses a relevant topic, that of diabetes, and in a relevant population, that of refugees. It is well written and the methods appear rigorous enough, from what I can judge, since I am not an economist. The results are probably useful for international NGOs providing medical care to refugees. However, one can question its usefulness for other stakeholders; the authors will want to expand on this in their discussion and perhaps also in their conclusion. • Specific comments 1. In the title, is it possible to use “hospital serving refugees in Kenya” instead of giving the name of the hospital? 2. Abstract: RBS should be defined. 3. Why refer to “holistic” management when there is no consideration of prevention or follow-up in the paper? 4. It would be useful for the readership to have an idea of the estimated prevalence of diabetes in the refugee camp. 5. In Africa, diabetes is usually diagnosed once there are already complications unless active screening takes place. Of the patients treated in 2017, how many did NOT have complications? Also, is information on the time since diagnosis available? 6. This study took place before the pandemic: this is perhaps an important point to mention. 7. If I understood correctly, it is assumed that patients with type 2 diabetes are solely on hypoglycemic drugs, not on insulin? Please explain. 8. The content of the interviews should be briefly described. 9. It would be important to know why the health posts were not included in the study and to include this as a limitation of the study. 10. Do the patients pay for consultations, tests or drugs? If everything is free for the refugees, then the findings are not applicable where patients have to pay out of their pocket, which is the case in most African countries. 11. Is it possible to explain the term “gross-costings”, and “top-down” and “bottom-up” micro-costing, for non-economists? 12. This costing method may be of value for other NCDs; the authors will want to say a word on this. Reviewer #2: I read your paper with great interest. The topic is novel. It is better to improve the English language of the paper. There are several mistakes. Moreover, it is better to use clear language with small sentences. Studied----study Which---the which As the evidence----as evidence Which accounted----that accounted and direct/indirect cost items --- and direct/indirect cost items are The clinical pathway for care of uncomplicated diabetes------ The clinical pathway for the care of uncomplicated diabetes Measurement, valuation and allocation of costs to health----- Measurement, valuation, and allocation of costs to the health aAdapted----adapted useful---of useful organisational----organizational Cost analyses contributes critically into economic evaluations.------- Cost analyses contribute critically to economic evaluations. Analysed----analyzed At 2008---of 2008 İn direct costs-----indirect costs Such---such as World-wide----worldwide Are the costs in your study annual or not? Please mention. The discussion part of the paper should be improved. Please add more references. Please compare them. Please read these papers and cite them. 1. S.Ö. Keskek, S. Kırım, N. Yanmaz, N. Sahinoglu Keskek, G. Ortoglu, A. Canataroglu , "Direct medical cost of type 1 and type 2 diabetes in Turkey", International Journal of Diabetes in Developing Countries, Ekim-2013, DOI 10.1007/s13410-013-0159-6 2. Ş.Ö. Keşkek, S.Kırım, N. Yanmaz. Estimated costs of the treatment of diabetic foot ulcers in a tertiary hospital in Turkey. Pak J Med Sci 2014; 30(5): 968-971. doi: http://dx.doi.org/10.12669/pjms.305.5182 3.Gülümsek E, Keşkek ŞÖ. Direct medical cost of nephropathy in patients with type 2 diabetes. Int Urol Nephrol. 2021 Oct 18. doi: 10.1007/s11255-021-03012- ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Şakir Özgür Keşkek [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. 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PONE-D-22-03317R1Estimating treatment costs for uncomplicated diabetes at a hospital serving refugees in KenyaPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Kanya, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 09 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols. Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Binaya Sapkota, PharmD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments: Thank you very much for addressing many of the concerns of the reviewers and the editor in the revision version. Still, there are few concerns raised by the reviewer to be addressed. Hence, I request the authors to address those remaining concerns and again send the revised manuscript. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Our comments were addressed in the rvised version. However, I still find the explanations for the types of costing unclear for non-economists. I also think that some more discussion should be devoted to out-of-pocket expenditures although this is not the approach of this study. We are surprised that there was no reference to the following paper: Alouki K, et al. Simple calculator to estimate the medical cost of diabetes in sub-Saharan Africa. World J Diabetes 2015; 6: 1312-22. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. 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Estimating treatment costs for uncomplicated diabetes at a hospital serving refugees in Kenya PONE-D-22-03317R2 Dear Dr. Kanya, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Binaya Sapkota, PharmD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Thank you very much for submitting your valuable research to PLOS ONE. We are pleased to accept your paper based on your satisfactory response to the reviewers' comments and the editorial discretion. Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-22-03317R2 Estimating treatment costs for uncomplicated diabetes at a hospital serving refugees in Kenya Dear Dr. Kanya: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Binaya Sapkota Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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